AarYa OS 'Sinful Night'. Chapter - 4, Page - 14 - Page 6

Awesome Nikki, something we would have loved to see in pv. It was breathtaking, everything is finally out and now they are rightfully starting again. Waiting for next update.

I love your story!

Revelations Revelations Revelations ⭐️☺️ Finally its time for revelations which r necessary to keep their relation going jnot just for the sake of the kids as before now its necessary for them to understand eachother as companions as patners as they reached beyond just parents to their children with still many unanswered questions and hidden truths and unsatisfied desries and their unprofessed Love 😳

goosebumps turned to tears, turned to smiles, turned to tears, and more goosebumps from the moment he spies her in the kitchen on his return home.

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

I love the whole concept and how you used G3's request to come up wit this brilliant plot! it was so much better than what we got which did not really make much sense!

goosebumps turned to tears, turned to smiles, turned to tears, and more goosebumps from the moment he spies her in the kitchen on his return home.

he gets angry at the invasion of privacy which is only an excuse to lash out but she goes on and confronts him about what he wrote anyway. still holding onto past hurt and anger he lies but Aarti isn't having it, she proceeds to tell him her wish for her to have been pregnant as a result.

My only regret is that I don't remember a single moment of the most beautiful night of my life when I was in your arms and you had made love to me. I wish I had become pregnant so that I could have spent the rest of my life loving and taking care of that baby"

She paused for a second as she was out of breath. "If spending a night with my husband, whom I love the most is a shameful thing, then yes I'm ashamed of it. If it means me ending in your arms a sin then yes I'm ready to commit this sin again and again".

those have got to be my favorite lines from Aarti in this case! and I loved how Yash twisted them into something so beautiful in the end! living sinful nights with his wife ❤️

the convo between Aarti and Shoba was a good way to clear any lingering doubts Yash may have had. when he heard thunder his only concern was for her as he rushed forth but he got much better as he learned the truth and saw her pain for himself.

wow I loved possessive Yash as he spoke to Aaman. "Aman she won't come with you tonight or any other time. She belongs to me. I need her with me... Yes we will both come to meet you in few days. Till then I want to be alone with her..." oh those really gave me such a thrill! we all love a Yash staking his claim on his Aarti 😉.

when his mother wanted to take the high road he (not so) subtly reminded her of her past misdeeds and how Aarti never held them against her. He also reminded her of Aarti's goodness in that she concealed most of those misdeeds from him. finally they had both their parents' blessing and Ansh would legally be his too.

and then that beautiful moment for which I do not have words! it's too perfect to put into words Di. I am still riding on the ultimate AarYa high. emotion, passion, love, new beginnings, hope, forgiveness! everything was beautifully emoted and described.

you deserve a million ⭐️s for this! absolutely amazing it was! I ❤️ ❤️ it so much!

I copied and pasted my previous review Di because my views have not changed, except to say that I love that you have decided to give us more parts! I am looking forward to a passionate Yash and passion filled moments of AarYa as they explore each other and cement their love for always!

you know what, after your and Rosey"s comments I have decided to refrain grom commenting. It's so long and in depth mine will surely be lacking☺️

Do I need to say anything else? Rossey di and Tessa already said everything what i wanted to say.
How beautiful it would be if they showed something meaningful.. They tried every possible way to ruin the track and as well ruin Yash's char too..
when Yash was angry then my first thought was he must read Aarti's diary or her conversation with Gayetri but alas the reason was something else.
I am happy to see that you did justice with Aarti's part too. She regretted that she didn't remember her most beautiful night..
It was my favourite part when Yash asked sadly?? And her reply astonished me as well.. and I was like I am proud of you Aarti.. She said what she really felt. She wasn't afraid anymore to accept what she feel. She wasn't guilty about her feelings, she was just guilty to hide the truth from him..
Oh now I feel Thank God Yash was angry, for that only everything come on place. She gathered the courage to speak the truth, she find the strength to face him.. even if he was hurt but truth is he never warned to leave her neither he could allow her to leave him..
I just love this Yash who rightfully ask his wife, who want to speak his heart's wish, who wanted to spend times and creating memories with his Love..
I don't know how to say thanks for your decision to write another part. honesty i was not completely satisfied by the end, I wanted to see AarYa bliss, but i couldn't tell you then as i didn't comment in first part and you already stuck with 3 more. Now finally i am extremely happy and waiting so much eagerly that what more in your store..
Just fantastic as well di.. awesome.

So my comments are not as in depth as some of the other ladies in the forum, but here is my 2 cents worth. (hint hint Tessie and Rosie😆)

Thank goodness Aarti had the good sense to go there to confront the fact that he loves her and he still denies it. And both know that he was lying. And I the divorce truth wasn't dragged out too much. I get that he was upset, as he despised lying. But she deserves credit for taking the step to come all the way to confess to him.

Even when in pain and anger he was so concerned about her fear for the storm that he went to check if she is ok. He was there at the right time to hear he conversation with her mother. I'm glad he heard the conversation with her mother. He would not have listened her if she had tried to tell him all that she told her mother and she would not have told him everything that she told her mother. I am so glad that he heard about her promise to his parents. And the fear of losing her spurred him into action. Finally!!!!!

He asserted himself. He reminded her of her promises she made at their wedding and he proceeded to take steps to make her stay by calling Aaman and her parents. I'm so glad that he made his intentions clear to his parents and made them release her from the ridiculous promise. And he kept her all to himself. Just the two of them. And about freaking time. A honeymoon for really real.

So waiting for part 3 most anxiously.

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

Beautiful n Much needed update Nikki ji 😉
I really loved it .

Originally posted by: Jodhu

Oh di thnk u thnk u so much for d pm.i so longed for d next update of this os.this is totally different turn of events,I hav read so far.awsm.waitng to see d different yash in d nxt update.post it asap plz.also di plz do see d pm that i ll send u by tonight.