AarYa OS 'Sinful Night'. Chapter - 4, Page - 14 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Awesome Nikki, something we would have loved to see in pv. It was breathtaking, everything is finally out and now they are rightfully starting again. Waiting for next update.
Edited by lassekool - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
I love your story!
It is beautifully written it was as if I am watching the serial but more romantic and logical.
Waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Firstly for ur note 🤣...coz i knew it u have sent him to mumbai but in my emotional state i forgot that and started blaming him 😆 poor guy he is really having a tough time dancing to ur tunes and here he got to please his wife too 😆

Revelations Revelations Revelations ⭐️☺️ Finally its time for revelations which r necessary to keep their relation going jnot just for the sake of the kids as before now its necessary for them to understand eachother as companions as patners as they reached beyond just parents to their children with still many unanswered questions and hidden truths and unsatisfied desries and their unprofessed Love 😳
That was so painful to read the heart shattering things he is saying to her deep down he didnt give himself a chance to think that he might be thinking wrong abt her she will not do that for anyone she cant stoop that low but he is blinded by his anger that he misinterpreted her feeling for him to be just her greed of becoming a better daughter-in-law and now she is here to confront him of all that transpired between them in the last few days and also revealing one more truth abt her past to him which might destroy the remaining what so ever between them 😭

Finally its time for the truth to be out and m glad that atleast aarti is going to tell him and he didnt get to know from his parents that would have been more of a betrayal then now its just he is getting to know it from her and m glad for that ...and yes as expected the consequences rnt any good as yash felt even more cheated and betrayed and he is so much right in his stance for him his world crumbled and no person can take that blow

aarti gave into her longtime pending pain which finally made its way out of her her guilt, her love her pain, her angusih, her grief flowing in the form of tears in a continuous way and still she cared to check on him only to fing him may be indifferent and cold though he just lie down with his closed eyes😭

And its yash turn to check on her as no matter what he still care for her he may admit it or not he loves her may be more than she loves him yes he loves her more than she loves him 😊 and it was time to know the things he needed and craved to know and he got to know sneakily finally his heart found peace i think so thats what i felt as he is desperate to know her feelings and her feelings abt him and abt her past which still lingered till now unknown to him but it was like a wall between them and now it is crumbling for good that is so evident when he spoke to amn that was my fav part he is staking his claim oh my !!!!! its due😛 i m lost hearing his words to Aman i wonder how aarti still have it in her to stand 😉

Yippe...now even scindiyas r convinced that they r perfect foreach other and they deserved to be with each other 😉

And rest is history ...Finally they r one soul two bodies 😃
yash asking for his forgiveness kneeling infront of her oh my !!!! that was surely a scene to watch not for he is asking forgiveness but for his love which is very much shown after all the torturous days in their lives and aarti easily accepted that and ofcourse they r showing their love with new found liberty

So So So Beautiful, Realistic, Passionate yet dreamy at the end 😉 i cant wait for the next now u know why right 😆

🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
I love the whole concept and how you used G3's request to come up wit this brilliant plot! it was so much better than what we got which did not really make much sense!
goosebumps turned to tears, turned to smiles, turned to tears, and more goosebumps from the moment he spies her in the kitchen on his return home.
he gets angry at the invasion of privacy which is only an excuse to lash out but she goes on and confronts him about what he wrote anyway. still holding onto past hurt and anger he lies but Aarti isn't having it, she proceeds to tell him her wish for her to have been pregnant as a result.

My only regret is that I don't remember a single moment of the most beautiful night of my life when I was in your arms and you had made love to me. I wish I had become pregnant so that I could have spent the rest of my life loving and taking care of that baby"

She paused for a second as she was out of breath. "If spending a night with my husband, whom I love the most is a shameful thing, then yes I'm ashamed of it. If it means me ending in your arms a sin then yes I'm ready to commit this sin again and again".

those have got to be my favorite lines from Aarti in this case! and I loved how Yash twisted them into something so beautiful in the end! living sinful nights with his wife ❤️

the convo between Aarti and Shoba was a good way to clear any lingering doubts Yash may have had. when he heard thunder his only concern was for her as he rushed forth but he got much better as he learned the truth and saw her pain for himself.

wow I loved possessive Yash as he spoke to Aaman. "Aman she won't come with you tonight or any other time. She belongs to me. I need her with me... Yes we will both come to meet you in few days. Till then I want to be alone with her..." oh those really gave me such a thrill! we all love a Yash staking his claim on his Aarti 😉.

when his mother wanted to take the high road he (not so) subtly reminded her of her past misdeeds and how Aarti never held them against her. He also reminded her of Aarti's goodness in that she concealed most of those misdeeds from him. finally they had both their parents' blessing and Ansh would legally be his too.

and then that beautiful moment for which I do not have words! it's too perfect to put into words Di. I am still riding on the ultimate AarYa high. emotion, passion, love, new beginnings, hope, forgiveness! everything was beautifully emoted and described.

you deserve a million ⭐️s for this! absolutely amazing it was! I ❤️ ❤️ it so much!

I copied and pasted my previous review Di because my views have not changed, except to say that I love that you have decided to give us more parts! I am looking forward to a passionate Yash and passion filled moments of AarYa as they explore each other and cement their love for always!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

I love the whole concept and how you used G3's request to come up wit this brilliant plot! it was so much better than what we got which did not really make much sense!
goosebumps turned to tears, turned to smiles, turned to tears, and more goosebumps from the moment he spies her in the kitchen on his return home.
he gets angry at the invasion of privacy which is only an excuse to lash out but she goes on and confronts him about what he wrote anyway. still holding onto past hurt and anger he lies but Aarti isn't having it, she proceeds to tell him her wish for her to have been pregnant as a result.

My only regret is that I don't remember a single moment of the most beautiful night of my life when I was in your arms and you had made love to me. I wish I had become pregnant so that I could have spent the rest of my life loving and taking care of that baby"

She paused for a second as she was out of breath. "If spending a night with my husband, whom I love the most is a shameful thing, then yes I'm ashamed of it. If it means me ending in your arms a sin then yes I'm ready to commit this sin again and again".

those have got to be my favorite lines from Aarti in this case! and I loved how Yash twisted them into something so beautiful in the end! living sinful nights with his wife ❤️

the convo between Aarti and Shoba was a good way to clear any lingering doubts Yash may have had. when he heard thunder his only concern was for her as he rushed forth but he got much better as he learned the truth and saw her pain for himself.

wow I loved possessive Yash as he spoke to Aaman. "Aman she won't come with you tonight or any other time. She belongs to me. I need her with me... Yes we will both come to meet you in few days. Till then I want to be alone with her..." oh those really gave me such a thrill! we all love a Yash staking his claim on his Aarti 😉.

when his mother wanted to take the high road he (not so) subtly reminded her of her past misdeeds and how Aarti never held them against her. He also reminded her of Aarti's goodness in that she concealed most of those misdeeds from him. finally they had both their parents' blessing and Ansh would legally be his too.

and then that beautiful moment for which I do not have words! it's too perfect to put into words Di. I am still riding on the ultimate AarYa high. emotion, passion, love, new beginnings, hope, forgiveness! everything was beautifully emoted and described.

you deserve a million ⭐️s for this! absolutely amazing it was! I ❤️ ❤️ it so much!

I copied and pasted my previous review Di because my views have not changed, except to say that I love that you have decided to give us more parts! I am looking forward to a passionate Yash and passion filled moments of AarYa as they explore each other and cement their love for always!

you know what, after your and Rosey"s comments I have decided to refrain grom commenting. It's so long and in depth mine will surely be lacking☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Do I need to say anything else? Rossey di and Tessa already said everything what i wanted to say.
How beautiful it would be if they showed something meaningful.. They tried every possible way to ruin the track and as well ruin Yash's char too..
when Yash was angry then my first thought was he must read Aarti's diary or her conversation with Gayetri but alas the reason was something else.
I am happy to see that you did justice with Aarti's part too. She regretted that she didn't remember her most beautiful night..
It was my favourite part when Yash asked sadly?? And her reply astonished me as well.. and I was like I am proud of you Aarti.. She said what she really felt. She wasn't afraid anymore to accept what she feel. She wasn't guilty about her feelings, she was just guilty to hide the truth from him..
Oh now I feel Thank God Yash was angry, for that only everything come on place. She gathered the courage to speak the truth, she find the strength to face him.. even if he was hurt but truth is he never warned to leave her neither he could allow her to leave him..
I just love this Yash who rightfully ask his wife, who want to speak his heart's wish, who wanted to spend times and creating memories with his Love..
I don't know how to say thanks for your decision to write another part. honesty i was not completely satisfied by the end, I wanted to see AarYa bliss, but i couldn't tell you then as i didn't comment in first part and you already stuck with 3 more. Now finally i am extremely happy and waiting so much eagerly that what more in your store..
Just fantastic as well di.. awesome.
Edited by jhillyarya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57

So my comments are not as in depth as some of the other ladies in the forum, but here is my 2 cents worth. (hint hint Tessie and Rosie😆)

I'm so glad that Yash realises that you cannot run away from his problems or his love. I'm glad he feels the effects of his "escape". He really treated her badly and the sin that she committed was no sin at ll. And now he finds him surrounded with memories of her in the very place that the place that the perceived sin was committed.😡 This angers me.

Thank goodness Aarti had the good sense to go there to confront the fact that he loves her and he still denies it. And both know that he was lying. And I the divorce truth wasn't dragged out too much. I get that he was upset, as he despised lying. But she deserves credit for taking the step to come all the way to confess to him.

Even when in pain and anger he was so concerned about her fear for the storm that he went to check if she is ok. He was there at the right time to hear he conversation with her mother. I'm glad he heard the conversation with her mother. He would not have listened her if she had tried to tell him all that she told her mother and she would not have told him everything that she told her mother. I am so glad that he heard about her promise to his parents. And the fear of losing her spurred him into action. Finally!!!!!

He asserted himself. He reminded her of her promises she made at their wedding and he proceeded to take steps to make her stay by calling Aaman and her parents. I'm so glad that he made his intentions clear to his parents and made them release her from the ridiculous promise. And he kept her all to himself. Just the two of them. And about freaking time. A honeymoon for really real.

So waiting for part 3 most anxiously.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Oh my...that was one enthralling update, Nikki ❤️ ❤️

Aarti and Yash are too cute, love them too pieces 😊

Thank you for all you do! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: alekhika20

Asum update, cont soon.
Waiting 4 nxt part.


Thanks so much


Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

Beautiful n Much needed update Nikki ji 😉
I really loved it .


Thanks so much Sharmeen dear.

It's been ages since I chatted with you 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: Jodhu

Oh di thnk u thnk u so much for d pm.i so longed for d next update of this os.this is totally different turn of events,I hav read so far.awsm.waitng to see d different yash in d nxt update.post it asap plz.also di plz do see d pm that i ll send u by tonight.



Thank you so much Jodhu

I had this scenario in my mind for a long time. Finally got time and chance to work on it. I'm so happy with the positive response on this OS.
Will try to update by next week 😳

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