AarYa OS 'Sinful Night'. Chapter - 4, Page - 14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

thanks for the PM it was super one

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cuteariya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Awesome update

Wow aarya romance was really hot

Both was telling each other through their love making that how much they r hungry for each other

Finally aarya voice out their feelings

What happened & what they r feeling for each other

In the beginning what aarti did even I didn't like it

Just to make yash mom happy aarti did what she told her & tolerate everything without any objection

Both aarya made wrong decision at time but now they finally mend their relationship

Awe both were jealous when both were talking abt their previous partners

Wow yash plan surprise for aarti so sweet

Update soon

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B-onesie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

I totally loved this.

I loved how every single issued was addressed and dealt with. From the very beginning where he finally had the freedom to accept her as his. Where a simple thing like removing a wisp of hair from his wife's was not forbidden anymore. He was angry at her turning her back on him but soon that that anger turned into to passion. He regretted the missed opportunity of not touching her before when they were inn Mumbai. But now he was liberated to more than just touch, but to love her as well. She was now completely his, in every sense of the word.

I love how he took care of her, prepared a meal for her because he felt guilty that he had been responsible for her fatigue physically and emotionally. Once again the regret that he had left her alone with the family and the children, knowing that she was the ultimate caregiver, even to her own detriment.

Mostly I loved how they dealt with each and every issue and obstacle they had that prevented them from getting to a place of love and acceptance. They cleared all the misunderstandings, they asked all the relevant questions that caused the rift in their fragile relationship.

Yash confronted her about her need to always please his mother despite the circumstances. Despite the hurt it caused him, the children and herself out her desperate need for a mother and a family. She saw it as not having a choice but she really did. She could have chosen him. She could have chosen to stay and even is she didn't stay she could have been honest with him about so many things that they forced her to do and things that she had to endure by their actions and words. But she still chose to protect them. He is not blameless, he should have fought harder to try and contact her as he suspected what the truth was. And even thought he eventually told him how she felt he still left. Instead of confronting her about her promise to his mother, he withdrew, ill treated her and ran away. She had to read about his love for her in a letter and then still denied his feelings afterwards.

I am glad they got their trust back, No relationship can function without trust. After opening up to each other and clearing the slate, they now can start afresh. They can have an new beginning with a foundation built on love and trust. Their union can only grow stronger from here. And when they do conceive a child there will be no doubt as how and why it happened.

Now I can't wait for the next part⭐️👏

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Jodhu
Oh didu that was so awsm.i so wished them to b as vocal as this abt their feelings atleast after falling in love in d show.but wont d world crumble down if d cv s portray as per our expectations.u r indeed a blessing for ur fantastic takes on oir beloved aarya.
thnks for d buddy request di.hope to see ur opinions frm now on on my future works as well.
and oh my u kept me intrigued with d surprise thing??fingers crossed as aarti abt it as well as for d other updates as well.
post it asap.

Oh my sweet Jodhu first of all let me apologize for not reading your update on Rhythm. Yes I saw that you had updated it. That time my mind was so wrapped around the next chapter of MTB that I couldn't read Rythm and then later forgot all about it.

I'll try my best to read it the soonest. But I'm waiting for your SS "Love Me With My Past (LMWMP)" I love that story. Hope you update it before I leave for a long vacation of 4-5 weeks, in two weeks from now.

Now coming to your comment...

Well what can we say that we haven't said before? We all so wanted AarYa to have this kind of mature conversation in the show, but never even got an proper apology from either of them.

It's good that we can write on them the way we want and on what we wanted to see but never got it.

I'm so happy with the response that in getting on this OS. All my efforts paid of.

Thank you so much for your support and love 🤗

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: ksen
amazing part
brilliantly written
aarya talking about each other's feelings
and clearing the misunderstanding was
penned down beautifully
loved it
excited for the next part
and other stories also
thanks for the pm

Thanks so much Ksen

Yes it was very important for both of them to clear all misunderstandings. Finally they did.

Will try to update other stories the soonest. 😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: Alamelu
Brilliant. Loved your pov. What confused me was Yash was wondering that Arti always did what his mother wanted and hurt Ansh Yash and herself too. If he considered her a friend before and knowing she really wanted a mother then why did he not talk to her before itself. Maybe things would have been different then.
Poland they talked it all out here. Wish they did in the show too. Waiting to see what surprise Yash has for ArtiArti

Thanks so much Alamelu,

And specials thanks for pointing out your doubts.

Actually the thing is (as per my POV). Though he considered her his friend, now (according to him) she had broken all his trust. Now he felt that she had befriended him just to please his mother. That means everything about her became fake to him after that night, when he felt that she stooped the lowest by making him sleep with her on his mothers request.

He felt hurt betrayed and he felt that he had lost the one true friend that he had found in her. That's why he couldn't trust her anymore.

Now that her have confessed their love, talking about the past mistakes (of both) have become important and easy also.

Will post the next part soon 😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: alekhika20
Fabulous updt,lvd it.
Cont soon.
Waiting 4 the surprise.

Thanks so much Alekhika 😳

Originally posted by: zuby87
Can't wait to see what yash has in store for aarti...u are right to say that there are scenes which we would have love to see in the novela...like yash taking care of aarti and more love scenes

Thanks so much Zuby

In the next part you'll get many more of their love scenes. You'll like Yash in that chapter

Will tyr to post the next part soon after I update MTB 😳

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RTDeewani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Oh my sweet Jodhu first of all let me apologize for not reading your update on Rhythm. Yes I saw that you had updated it. That time my mind was so wrapped around the next chapter of MTB that I couldn't read Rythm and then later forgot all about it.
I'll try my best to read it the soonest. But I'm waiting for your SS "Love Me With My Past (LMWMP)" I love that story. Hope you update it before I leave for a long vacation of 4-5 weeks, in two weeks from now.

Now coming to your comment...

Well what can we say that we haven't said before? We all so wanted AarYa to have this kind of mature conversation in the show, but never even got an proper apology from either of them.

It's good that we can write on them the way we want and on what we wanted to see but never got it.
I'm so happy with the response that in getting on this OS. All my efforts paid of.

Thank you so much for your support and love 🤗

oh didi i m so sry that i hav made u starve for ur fav ss update till now.not that i forgot it.since this is a straight rip off of a movie ,i didnt want to keep it on hold for long.other wise it s never a big deal to update ur fav ss.dnt wry,though i cant completely assure u that i ll update it before u leave for ur vacations, i can assure u that evn if i get a day free of my hectic college routines i ll surely b back with ur most expected update, since i hav my exms approaching by d time u leave for ur vacations.

hence patience plz di. But i ll try my best to update.

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saf24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Awesome job on the update Nikki. Loved the way both were able to clarify their misunderstandings and how in tune Yash has become to her feelings and emotions. So glad that they were able to understand each other's points of view. Fab job as always