Punar Vivah FF My Version AarYa's story49 Page 102 UPDATE 12/5/18 - Page 19

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Posted: 9 years ago
Started reading this very late last night, so could read only seven chapters

Thanks so much Sharlene for your version of PV 🤗. Couple of years back I too wanted to write my version but never got time to work on it. Actually I had two version in my mind, and now I don't think that I'll ever work on them. So it made me doubly happy when you started your version 😳


I liked rhe story so far.

I liked that your version is different from the original one, yet you've retained rhe essence of the original one. Especially the character of Bua 😆. Please don't change her, at least till the end 😆. Her MBKK is something else 😆


I loved that you've shown a little different side of AarYa maintaining their original characteristics. What I loved the Most is that Yash is already attracted to Aarti. Due to his obsession with Arpita he's not able to embrace the fact that he likes Aarti. On top of that he was under the impression that she's still married. I want to see his reaction when he finds out that Aarti is divorcee and is going to become his wife 😉

Sharlene after reading your version can I make a request of you? Why don't you join us in episodes discussion threads? We'd love to hear your POV on those episodes. You can write them whenever you get free time. I'd be our honor to read them. 😳


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: B-onesie

love this version, As long as Yash knows, the Dubey;s can't emotionally blackmail Aarti


thank you so much 🤗you are correct the Dubey's will not be able to blackmail her not into her marriage or for Ansh's bone marrow 😉😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Folla

beautiful one waiting the next one




Thanks so much my dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Lincy_Lins

Chapter 10 n 11

Very beautiful updates dear 👏 👏
Loved it so much 🤗
Finally AarYa cleared there doubts no misunderstanding 👍🏼
Continue soon dear

thank you 😃

So true but Maya is still there, and G3 still have to accept Ansh😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lassekool

Hi I also like your version, no secrets. Now looking forward to Aarya'a married life. Good work.


Thank you😃such a sweet comment😊😊


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Hey Sharlene

I'm so sorry sweetie for not reading any of your updates. 😭


I've slowly started to read everyone's stories one by one. I promise you I'll start reading yours also soon and comment on them. I'm specially waiting to read on little AarYa 😳


It is Okay Nikki I understand 😆, we all become busy at some point in our life with job,family,etc. I try my best to juggle everything and some days I am to tired so I say forget everything and sleep😆 , take your time read and enjoy at your pace 😆 as long as our beloved forum remains opeh I am happy😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: caller123

I really love your version of PV Sharlene. Specially the thing that Aarthi told the truth about her divorce stated to Yash and Yash too thought to handle it with Dubeys privately.

even before the engagement they both talked. It's good.
Waiting for the next installment dear!



Thanks so much Kate🤗 I am happy you like my version, I did not like all the lying and emotional blackmail 😡 by the Dubeys. In my version there will be some negativity to add a little spice , Yash in hulk mode, Aarti in JKR. I hope you all continue to enjoy 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Started reading this very late last night, so could read only seven chapters

Thanks so much Sharlene for your version of PV 🤗. Couple of years back I too wanted to write my version but never got time to work on it. Actually I had two version in my mind, and now I don't think that I'll ever work on them. So it made me doubly happy when you started your version 😳


I liked rhe story so far.

I liked that your version is different from the original one, yet you've retained rhe essence of the original one. Especially the character of Bua 😆. Please don't change her, at least till the end 😆. Her MBKK is something else 😆


I loved that you've shown a little different side of AarYa maintaining their original characteristics. What I loved the Most is that Yash is already attracted to Aarti. Due to his obsession with Arpita he's not able to embrace the fact that he likes Aarti. On top of that he was under the impression that she's still married. I want to see his reaction when he finds out that Aarti is divorcee and is going to become his wife 😉

Sharlene after reading your version can I make a request of you? Why don't you join us in episodes discussion threads? We'd love to hear your POV on those episodes. You can write them whenever you get free time. I'd be our honor to read them. 😳




Thanks so much Nikki 😆 i love your comment 🤗 you give me the push I needed to continue, of course bua will remain as is she adds spice 😆 with her comments, instigating G3 against Aatri and Ansh. I hope you continue to enjoy the following updates 😆

Yes I will join you all when I have the time 😊 I am looking forward to that thread😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410


It is Okay Nikki I understand 😆, we all become busy at some point in our life with job,family,etc. I try my best to juggle everything and some days I am to tired so I say forget everything and sleep😆 , take your time read and enjoy at your pace 😆 as long as our beloved forum remains opeh I am happy😆


I know what you mean. Even I've become so busy these past few months that when I get time to work on anything or read anything sometimes I feel so lazy that even I don't feel like doing anything

Earlier I was so punctual in updating, now I hardly get the mood to write anything

You said I give you the push, well I think it's the other way around. You guys are the ones who have had always encouraged me and pushed me. That is why I've been writing in this very forum since last three years. Can you believe it?

I wish you also get the same motivation and same push that you also write here for many years to come. 🤗



I'm honestly enjoying your writings. You are an excellent writer with great vision. ⭐️


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki



I know what you mean. Even I've become so busy these past few months that when I get time to work on anything or read anything sometimes I feel so lazy that even I don't feel like doing anything

Earlier I was so punctual in updating, now I hardly get the mood to write anything

You said I give you the push, well I think it's the other way around. You guys are the ones who have had always encouraged me and pushed me. That is why
I've been writing in this very forum since last three years. Can you believe it?

I wish you also get the same motivation and same push that you also write here for many years to come.🤗



I'm honestly enjoying your writings. You are an excellent writer with great vision.⭐️




Thank you so much for your kind words I am so embarrassed 😳
Love you Nikki 🤗

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