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Posted: 9 years ago
have to update on the next page
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AarYa: Our story continues on the next page, well we mean to say it concludes
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Posted: 9 years ago

Author's Note:


Thank You!


Hi Friend's! I have finally concluded the journey of this particular AarYa. I just wanted to thank each and every one of you for being on it with me. You kept reading even when the story became darker with each update. I feared that it was turning out too depressing but you kept on reading.

I have been writing this story since January this year, so it has been nine months that I have been writing it. It is definitely the longest I have written a story but I enjoyed it. I myself cried a few times along the way.

Your feedback was valued whether it was silently hitting the like button or by leaving a comment. Please note that it is very encouraging for us as writers to have your feedback. When I feel like quitting I push on because I do not want to frustrate you all.

Once again my heartfelt thanks for being with me on this journey!! May God bless you all!

Edited by Tessaloni - 9 years ago
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When the story first started, the characters all irked me with the silly decisions that they all took. The effects of it was the ruining of so many lives. Yash was blind as a bat and didn't see what was right in front of him. He was so infatuated with Arpita that he could not see his soul mate right in front of him. Aarti, acted "selflessly", I feel stupidly and left without confessing her true feelings. Arpita foolishly married a man knowing that he loved someone else and no one was happy. In fact every one was miserable.

Then his illness, her physical disability and the the worst, the loss of their daughter. But amidst it all, they persevered. What was meant to break them down, made them stronger. They made new families, new friendships and built a new life. The challenges came fast and furious and they fought and overcame each one.

They are finally together. She forced it on him but they were blessed with more precious angels. Now they have a very happy and very extended family. Most of all they are together. And Aarti was healed. She could play and run with her babies. the ultimate blessing.

And then the wedding. Blissful. But one of my favorite scenes in this story will remain the homecoming. That was an amazing piece of writing. I don;t have word to describe it.

I love that you ended it where it all began. It started with a childhood friendship and ended in an undying, passionate love for each other and their family. A love that was threatened to be ripped from them so many times, by themselves and others, yet could not be denied as they were destined to be together.

I know i am not commenting much about this chapter, but it is a culmination of so many things that happened in the past, things that had to be overcome and fought against to get them to this point. And victory in this instance is indeed sweet.

Beautiful ending to a tumultuous and entertaining tale.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww so so so so BEAUTIFUL... I am sorry I am unable to comment anymore as I am totally floating in my happy tears that you made me shed with this update. Cant believe that this sweet journey is also finally coming to a halt. But it had to someday, I understand. A big wala hug for such a heart felt piece of art. It's ALWAYS ONLY YOU for perfect closures.
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A happy ending indeed what started as a nightmare turned into a beautiful and most cherishable life filled with so music happiness and love...the love of family is beautiful but the love between two beautiful souls is precious, hash loved her enough to never leave her regardless of her immobility and she fought hard for her love, her kids and her family even though she was already declared dead...she is indeed a warrior girl...thanks Tess this is what we call a beautiful ending to a beautiful love story
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aw beautiful ending to a great story. All became perfect in the end. Kids are right arya love each other more than anyone else
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome fairytale ending sis i love it.
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Its always with mixed feelings that I feedback a story that come to an end, sad to see it end but at the same time happy that there is an ending, and with this one I feel like you explored everything in it. From Aarya struggle , the kids growing , the family relationship, the hardship, the love, life unexpected surprise in one word the journey.
Aarti is taking the bull by he horn, so do speak, how can she not, she went from loosing her love, to reconnecting , to loosing one of her kid, to almost looosing her independance and worse life to a second lease on life (wow, you were right in your thank note so 😕many depressing event but that also what made the story so emotionally touching). Especially after the rigorous exercice regime, such courage to get back on her feet and with the support of her family and Yash. He is such an emotional man. I guess he had to collect himself before allowing to celebrate Aarti progress. They went through a lot and his emotional release was a long time coming.
Funny about Vidhi 😆 but hey where there is life , there's sex, so having a surprise baby is too cute. Love to see the rest of the family growing. But i also will never get over loosing Payal but life has to move on and as long as she is remembered then she had not lived in vain. The way they celebrate her was fitting. The renewal , orphanage party and the kids teasing were so much fun and liberating . I am sure they will have they future happiness , sadness, struggle cause life but at least there a strong family created out of the events.
A few situations that made me laugh: 😆😆 true its much better or faster to walk out of a fight than whirling out, the kids teasing that Aarya loved each other more than them was 😆too cute.

Good story👏👏
Edited by sass8 - 9 years ago

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