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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: sb1410

Read both chapters love this very interesting story.


thank you..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sb1410

Read both chapters love this very interesting story.


thank you.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Folla

amazing one so excited to see what well happen next


thanx dear😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Jhil - this update is...imagination works faster than the mind😆...Fantastic.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

thank you for the beautiful response.

and sorry for the late.

dont know why filling something missing. well hope you all will like it..

let me know your views,, here the 3rd part.



PART 3



What a perfect timing!!, aarti scold herself and her phone many time for spoil the moment. At just that moment the phone rang and RAFADAFA of the closeness. At first she scold pari for calling such a wrong time. "aarti you lost the golden chance, now keep waiting for the next time when god will be meherbaan again, not god actually mr. scindhiya.


Yash gave so many thanx to the mobile and that caller.. he almost going to loose. That was not his plan. He wanted aarti to confess her feelings by her own not like this.. so that caller saved him from breaking his promise. But now he became more careful as he already witnessed what his wife did to distract him from work so she can do anything else also..


Aarti could understand they will not attend that party as she is the reason of that. Yash's mood already she ruined with those messages and latter she couldn't give answer of his question for that stupid call then how she can expect he'll go to party with her? Still she wanted to take a chance, not for going party but for something else.. she listened him to say that she is a typical wife now she wanted to say what a typical wife can do..


After sometime..


Yash was working on his table, "you didn't get ready yet?, we are getting late..." it was aarti's voice he knew but he decided not to look at her as he know she is looking ravishing now.. the truth is he stole many glances when she was getting ready.. and aarti also know that. He know what is the colour of her saree, he know how her earring is, he know she was so confuse about her makeup. And mostly he know how she was struggling with her blouse dori.. he saw request in her eyes for him to help.. he had argue to help her in that. Not in tying that but loosing all the ties she have but again he controlled himself with so much difficulty, and secondly she didn't say him anything directly to help so he couldn't give answer of that eye's request even if he had strong wish. He had to act of involve in his boring work when the most interesting person was infront of him


Aarti knew very well his gaze on her all the time, she already succeed to distract him but now she don't want this only, she want him to accept this mostly want to end the wait of 7 days. She don't want to save herself from him anymore, she want to trouble herself by him in through beautiful way..


"for what I have to get raedy?, I am not going with you, you can go, I'll ask driver to drop you", yash said all this while acting of doing his works coz now this is definitely impossible to concentrate anywhere else..


"please..", aarti's plead made yash curse himself, oh, what need of this stupid promise? But still he said, "no, and its raining, I have no wish to go party after getting wet.."



Aarti looked outside, its really raining, how she didn't notice till now? Was she this much busy in getting ready that didn't understand her first love come back again?? So she forget her first love after getting mr. yash scindhiya?? But how can she loose the chance of get wet with this first love,, and who knows may be it can be another chance for bring the closeness back with him and this time for sure she wont let it go..


Yash didn't get any reply but saw her to going towards balcony.. " what she is doing?" the answer come when he saw her to enjoy the raindrops. He lost to see two most beautiful creation of god together.yash started smiling and keep smiling to see aarti in rain, feeling those, jumping like kid..


He was enjoying the view but soon he had to run towards balcony when heard a scream and saw her to fall. Worried yash ran to balcony and saw aarti on floor crying.. he tried to pull her up thinking she wont able to walk may be but for his surprise she stand up and there no sign of pain on her face.. a mischievous smile on aarti's face and soon she placed yash's hand on her waist and she pulled herself closer to him, "now I'll see who will save you from this typical wife", she whispered..

Another shock come to ysash to see aarti's this avtar.. not shy anymore, it can be called bold definitely in her expressions, "what you are thinking to save yourself?" she came more closer. Yash couldn't help but had to held her strong, "nope, thinking, who will save him??" he winked making aarti more bold. When he realized her had lead his another hand to her dori of her blouse and soon she pulled that with his finger. Amy be rain drops also enjoying this romance so it started pouring heavier to give more essence to this moment.. aarti tip toed, bring her lips closer to his ear, "I want you... now.."


And that's all yash wanted, he waited for this from all the days, for which he controlled himself till now. When the moment come how he can take his steps back? There was no need of anything to dry them from rain water coz the heat of their closeness was enough to win over those raindrops. They didn't know how all that ended on their bed which started at balcony.. and All the requests of aarti , fulfilled by yash soon...



final part will try to give soon.😉

Edited by jhillyarya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
wonderful update jhil dear 🤗
part 2 and 3 both were superb..
arthi made yash distracted with her naughty msgs .. wow what a girl 😆 and yash too made her dumbstruck with his closeness and naughty question..
finally the things ended well with help of her first love ☺️ thanks to the rain that made both break their promise...
waiting for the final part dear ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
It's superb. Read all the three parts in one go. Sizzling romance of AARYA. Loved the way Aarti distract him from work in office.

Waiting for the final part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
oh my god cant believe aarti is so blod
haha yash losted...🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
beautiful update amazing one waiting the final part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Jhil,its highly romantic...

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