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Ken - U truly knocked me with this OS.
For -----
1. Thinking of past events and how it has affected them - knowing the characters weakness and strength . Characters as realistic with flaws without showing them perfect ( as PV)
2. Ideas and setting of romance -- you allowed readers to have easier time visualizing your story and picture the setting. Most beautifully written with magical surrounding causing butterflies in stomach.
3. Conversation believable and not going overboard đ
The hero of this OS is surely -- THE DESCRIPTION of romantic date âď¸âď¸âď¸...U win hands down.
A cute date that let the standards of your writing known that was hidden and asking for more. Thank U dear đ¤
For -----
1. Thinking of past events and how it has affected them - knowing the characters weakness and strength . Characters as realistic with flaws without showing them perfect ( as PV)
2. Ideas and setting of romance -- you allowed readers to have easier time visualizing your story and picture the setting. Most beautifully written with magical surrounding causing butterflies in stomach.
3. Conversation believable and not going overboard đ
The hero of this OS is surely -- THE DESCRIPTION of romantic date âď¸âď¸âď¸...U win hands down.
A cute date that let the standards of your writing known that was hidden and asking for more. Thank U dear đ¤
