Arya OS ~ Success or Defeat in Love ???final part on pg.21-26/10 upd - Page 11

Originally posted by: nusratjahan505

First of all I am really very very sorry Maha for giving you late feedback.Actually I was involved in some personal stuff that I couldn't comment early ...so really sorry holding my ears...😛
I must say Maha that the beginning of your OS is so dramatic and it just took all attention .First I thought that the lil boy is realAyu...but then come to know that's not.The way you have portrayed Yashu's character...his emotional turmoil...his pain...anguish...guilt and remorse was just awesome Maha.This is really something very new from you Maha.I knew you such as a writer who loves to deal with happy moments.But one of you previous os proved me wrong as it was totally painful and this time you did the same again.The whole concept was beautifully presented and you deserve all the praise...👏
Since the main plot ha followed the original PV so I wont say much about it.But after that your own story has began which I loved the most.SO Yash lost Arti for his mistake.He wanted to live in past without realizing that a lovely present was waiting for him and when the realization came it was too late for him to repent as Arti left him with Ayu...really my heart is broken for yash.The man is still suffering badly for his love..but this time it was not Arpita but Arti ...😭
Arti is living without her love and her kids .Only Ayu is with her...😭really this poor soul has also suffered a lot.But I wanna say something .I am not agree with Arti's pov totally.She shouldn't leave her kids like this.Yash was wrong with her but somehow she also did wrong with the kids.Whatever the issue it was between Yash and Arti and she had all the rights to be upset with Yash but unknowingly she gave the punishment to their kids also.Only Yash cant give them all the happiness..they need their Mamma.I know Arti has promised to come back.But it will be her decision and I am thinking about Kid's emotion.They have suffered without making any mistakes...and Papayal has lost their mother second time also...Ansh has lost his superman...and Ayu never got the chance to see his Papa...😭.Hope Arti will come back soon and then we can see Arya family all together.

first of all dont say sorry 😡 did i put any time conditions for you haan 😉
u can comment whenever u r free sweetu 😆

and thanks for the compliment dear and this is totally different for me 😕 from a happy ff to sad OS is the really toughest job but i thank God for managing it 😉

and that yash's introduction scene clicked me after breaking my head 😆 but it showed yash's pain very well !!!
to be true i was not able to write yash so badly but story made me do it and i have to make it sweeter to the intensity it was harsh haina 😃

and regarding arthi.. she thought of her kids security the most than she being with them... thats why she went away from them but never their love breaks sweetu 😭

and dont worry mukku if i tell more then i will blurt out the truth.. hope for the best and it will be the best 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Fabulous part 👏👏👏. Aarti got a nice friend who helped her in her tough time. Poor Yash, longing for Aarti. His one mistake take his love away from him. Yash made a room for Aayu and Aarti's gifts, that's nice.

Aarti send letters and gifts to the kids. Does anybody knows from where the gifts came? Aayu wants to meet his papa and siblings. I guess this Aayu is Yash's Aayu who met Yash second time in ice-cream shop, means both Aayu are same, and the small cover contain the sports car purchased by Yash. And that somebody who is eavesdropping maybe Aarti.

thank u for you sweet and expressive comment dear 😳
and hmm ur guesses are really great 👏
lets see which comes true 😉 i am so glad for ur active interest in my update dear thank u 😛

Another rocking update dear!👏👏 Aayu keeps asking for his papa and siblings hope the family unite soon.Continue soon can't wait for the next part.😃

Awesome update dear I love ayu both yash ice crme baby and aarti cute baby now I will keep my guess in my head and wait for the update to find out if I am right

Very touching update. It was nice to see how everyone's life is without Aarti and Aayu and their life without Yash and the kids. It was nice to see Aarti sending stuff to her kids even though she is away from them. Beautifully written as always and can't wait to see what is in store next.

another heart touching update dearies❤️ Aayu may be having a photo of Yash & Arti with kids...😕 still wondering what is next in the store.continue soon

Awesome update Maha. Yashis still suffering and in love with Aarthi and ayu. I felt bad for him when I read ow he collected gifts for them. Why is Aarthi so stubborn still? Is she scared still? Why didn't she come out of her hiding place after so many announcements?