Arya OS ~ Success or Defeat in Love ???final part on pg.21-26/10 upd - Page 9

commented on page 10 dear😳😳

Whats there in the cover!!!????

Awsum part
ayu is so cute yash is truly repenting nd he did try to find her
awesum
r yash's ayu nd arti's ayu different me a little confused

Originally posted by: kratzyfan

Maha, a very touching update dear😭👏.👏.👏...

now got a clear idea on which situation each n everyone are in😉😊...

atleast the kids have aarti's letters n msgs..but yash😭...poor fellow..he's longing for his aayu n his wife...

that yellow sari and yashji buying gifts for them n keeping them safe with a hope of their return really touched me yaar❤️👏...

hey Maha, u really got a talent to make readers stuck to ur story👏.👏.👏...very well knew where to stop the update😆😆...

ready for all types of twists by holding my heart❤️ in my hands(confused whether u'll break it🥺 or make it)😆😆...eagerly waiting for the next(final) part...

aww you make me blush so much dear ☺️
thank u so much for this beautiful compliments...

and i am so happy to get this much response dear.. really i was afraid at the start but now i have the confidence that i will make it the best ..😉
all thanks to u buddies

Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny

Lovely update dear! 👏

thank u so much dear 😳

Originally posted by: chitsri65

Maha...your update continues to rock dear...and if I am allowed to guess...may be a pic of Yash-Arti and kids...in that cover...waiting for the final...interesting dear.

thanks a lot chitra dear 😛😛😛
and regarding the guess u will see soon dear wait for few days 😉

Originally posted by: luv_lvndr

Superb update...

thank u dear 😳

First of all I am really very very sorry Maha for giving you late feedback.Actually I was involved in some personal stuff that I couldn't comment early ...so really sorry holding my ears...😛😛😛😛
I must say Maha that the beginning of your OS is so dramatic and it just took all attention .First I thought that the lil boy is realAyu...but then come to know that's not.The way you have portrayed Yashu's character...his emotional turmoil...his pain...anguish...guilt and remorse was just awesome Maha.This is really something very new from you Maha.I knew you such as a writer who loves to deal with happy moments.But one of you previous os proved me wrong as it was totally painful and this time you did the same again.The whole concept was beautifully presented and you deserve all the praise...👏👏👏👏👏
Since the main plot ha followed the original PV so I wont say much about it.But after that your own story has began which I loved the most.SO Yash lost Arti for his mistake.He wanted to live in past without realizing that a lovely present was waiting for him and when the realization came it was too late for him to repent as Arti left him with Ayu...really my heart is broken for yash.The man is still suffering badly for his love..but this time it was not Arpita but Arti ...😭😭😭😭
Arti is living without her love and her kids .Only Ayu is with her...😭😭😭😭really this poor soul has also suffered a lot.But I wanna say something .I am not agree with Arti's pov totally.She shouldn't leave her kids like this.Yash was wrong with her but somehow she also did wrong with the kids.Whatever the issue it was between Yash and Arti and she had all the rights to be upset with Yash but unknowingly she gave the punishment to their kids also.Only Yash cant give them all the happiness..they need their Mamma.I know Arti has promised to come back.But it will be her decision and I am thinking about Kid's emotion.They have suffered without making any mistakes...and Papayal has lost their mother second time also...Ansh has lost his superman...and Ayu never got the chance to see his Papa...😭😭😭😭.Hope Arti will come back soon and then we can see Arya family all together.

Originally posted by: suhaaana

Awsum part
ayu is so cute yash is truly repenting nd he did try to find her
awesum
r yash's ayu nd arti's ayu different me a little confused

thank u suha dear 😳😳
ur doubt will cleared soon dear