PV Loop Closures!!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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One of my favourite parts in PV is when we, especially in DC manage to identify loop closures...😊That's one fantastic thing about Mittals writing style...so many events are inter-connected that you notice loop closures that are just so fantastic!!!!😃
Am rewatching PV from the beginnin and now am at post-Mumbai scene where Yash is in Hulk mode and Aman has entered ther scene!!!!!!!!!!! REwatching has made me see more loop closures...maybe some of you did notice and post it but would like to share it with all...
⭐️Remember when Aarti notice lipstick mark on Yash's t-shirt durring Neelam track?... first pangs of jealousy in her and Yash does not answer her... well, loop closure when we see Aarti's lipstick mark on Yash's neck (not clothes, mind you😳) and all tease them and both are caught...!!!!!!!!!
⭐️ Remember when Yash stops Aarti from Teej vrat... and refuses to give her water to break her vrat... well, loop closure when for Karwa Chauth, it is Yash who does the vrat and Aarti who is late in giving him water to break the vrat ( because of Prashant hospital drama)...nice huh!!!!!
Please share more loop closures to increase forum activity!!!!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice observation👏...let me try to add more if u dont mind..
I have a different version of the lipstick mark scene..when Yash was travelling to the dargah in the train and he got the money note with Aarti's lipstick print...at that time it was just on the note..bt then later her mark was already on his neck☺️...

another loop closure i could think of is the difference of when Aarti's pallu got stuck with Yash.. First was during their engagement when neither were looking at each other.. then during their SR when Aarti was misunderstanding Yash's intention while he desperately tried to prove his innocence..and finally during Karwa Chauth when her pallu got stuck to his watch,neither wanted get it out hurrily,basking in their closeness😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I was rewatching PV, notice that PV writers had thinks so minutes things ...they always take care of loop closures . Only after enters of radha, akash, they messed up, till that things are fine and in control...I always admire the PV way of story telling
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tleshni

Nice observation👏...let me try to add more if u dont mind..

I have a different version of the lipstick mark scene..when Yash was travelling to the dargah in the train and he got the money note with Aarti's lipstick print...at that time it was just on the note..bt then later her mark was already on his neck☺️...

another loop closure i could think of is the difference of when Aarti's pallu got stuck with Yash.. First was during their engagement when neither were looking at each other.. then during their SR when Aarti was misunderstanding Yash's intention while he desperately tried to prove his innocence..and finally during Karwa Chauth when her pallu got stuck to his watch,neither wanted get it out hurrily,basking in their closeness😳

So, more than 1 lipstick mark loop closure!!!!! Nice!!!!
Bring on some more guys!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yeah, Mittals have a way of simple writing style which touches the heart. And I agree, they did a wonderful job but only untill Radha track as someone already mentioned. After Radha track, they actually messed up the story, guess, the main writer had left till that time...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pal_2010

I was rewatching PV, notice that PV writers had thinks so minutes things ...they always take care of loop closures . Only after enters of radha, akash, they messed up, till that things are fine and in control...I always admire the PV way of story telling



I agree..the moment Prashant was killed off,the whole story of PV just got screwed.. unnecessary characters like aakash,radha,ishita were introduced and totally toppled the perfect balance of PV😡

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