~MOHABBAT~:An Aaryan FF (till the climax)

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Vishva

@Guruvishva

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

The Prologue😛

Ur prologue even gave a great beginning Mariya😉

It was Awesome😛

Chapter 1😛

It had all emotions 😳

Prashanth - Hrithik Roshan😆

Arpita- Slim college Beauty😆

Aarthi- Poir Fatty😛

But Genius😊

Sweet Girl😃

The 5 dots r really great😊

The rise day is superb😛

Don't know what's written in the paper😕

Hurrying to read Chap 2😆

Really Ur Chap 1 is Amazing😳

Chapter 2😛

Wow this letter gave me also a shock...😲

I think somebody is playing with that innocent😳

Then Yash - a average man😲

Kya😲

But he's also beauty as Aarthi in his heart😊

Ur description of Yash's Eyes was great😳

The way of Aarya's convo was cool😎

There beg of the friendship was fab too😛

The next Day loved the CID Yash😊

Really a great friend of Aarthi😊

Wow it's a breaking point😲

The culprit is in 5 dots😲

Loved CID Yash's Plan😛

Hurrying to read Chap 3 to find the culprit😆

This Chap was Thrilling😊

Chapter 3😛

Yash found the culprit 😳

Really he's a Genius😆

The culprit is Aman😡

Now our JKR is Getting ready to the War with Yash😳

Aarthi is concerned in her work 😳

Lovey Girl😳

MADDY Arpita Hiw Dare Us She To Scold Aarthi as Fat Goat?😡

Don't know what the JKR is going to do now😳

Aarya's Plan is really great & fab👏

This is called in 1 stone 2 Mangoes😆

Aman was fooled & Arpita got a great bang😆

Poor Prashanth couldn't do anythingdo anything😆

Kya turning point gai Mariya?😆

I Donna I want to laugh or feel sorry for PrashanthPrashanth🤣

Aarya rocked 😆

They wrote a letter a love letter for a teacher like Prashanth,🤣

Climax❤️

Aarya enjoyed a lot between them😆

Wow Yashus letter😛

Wow this moment was really great😳

Aarya's beginning of love mesmerised me😳

To Mariya-😳

After reading this update I want to hug u for giving such a lovey update🤗

It's amazing dear

The Zclimax was the mass

Wonderful update Mariya😛

I'm sorry too for such a late & Long comment😳

Really it's amazingamazing😛

I couldn't control my fingers from commenting😳

Love u for this update Mariya😛

Edited by Guruvishva - 12 years ago

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Zetter

@Zetter

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

That was a beautiful and different story...Loved it very much thanks for sharing it Dear 👏 ❤️ 🤗

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roserosey

@roserosey

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

mariya
this is a very nice story👏👏👏👏 especially the last part where yash conveyed his love through that letter was👏 very heart touching😳😳...that part completely bowled me😳

hmm...now coming to five dots oh my i hate aman and prasanth what ever they did to aarthi they paid back for that thats a great counter idea by our rockstar yash⭐️⭐️

i loved the friendship b/n aarya the comfort they share😳😳

i loved it completely👏👏
ur first try wasa hit mariya⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Edited by roserosey - 12 years ago

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RIYA

@RA17

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Mariya you actually had your first shot n that too a hit i love the pic you use aarya banner of chocolate con

You won't believe as u mention a first line two imperfect people will make a perfect ending.

i was also thinking 2 negatives makes a positive n wolla you said in next sentence of yours

4 dots or i shoud say 5 big zeros n a dumb beautiful woman n aarya rocks

I just love the all portrayal of characters n how aman was trying to outsmart n tampering aarti image but so glad that she dint fall in in n also yash is there as always forthe support

Its like jor ka jhaatka hayye joroo se lagaa haan lagga

Yash confession was like music to my ears man its too good thanks for this beautiful work dear i liked it👏

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poonam

@Angel_Luv

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Beautiful Mariya👏

very well written⭐️

Keep it up😃

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MARIYA

@MariyaOshin

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Sri_Radha
res😳
More updates will read it leisurely and comment😊

I will wait radhu...

Take time and read 😉😊

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MARIYA

@MariyaOshin

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Zetter
That was a beautiful and different story...Loved it very much thanks for sharing it Dear 👏 ❤️ 🤗

Thankyou Zet...I am, so happy dear...

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MARIYA

@MariyaOshin

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: RA17
Mariya you actually had your first shot n that too a hit i love the pic you use aarya banner of chocolate con

You won't believe as u mention a first line two imperfect people will make a perfect ending.

i was also thinking 2 negatives makes a positive n wolla you said in next sentence of yours

4 dots or i shoud say 5 big zeros n a dumb beautiful woman n aarya rocks

I just love the all portrayal of characters n how aman was trying to outsmart n tampering aarti image but so glad that she dint fall in in n also yash is there as always forthe support

Its like jor ka jhaatka hayye joroo se lagaa haan lagga

Yash confession was like music to my ears man its too good thanks for this beautiful work dear i liked it👏

Thankyou Riya dear.😉...Thats a detailed comment dear..Thankyou so much darling...I hope ypu enjoyed it 😉😊

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Chitra_11

@Chitra_11

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Maria - Fantastic presentation 👏 A trick of a fool used by a brain created a thunderstorm - any trick used for benefit will always reverse back tenfolds...Aman getting a taste of his own medicine and that to how...I so...o... loved the end 'cause I truly believe ' a soul is immortal while the body fades'.

Your writeup - Sometimes words fail to describe when u see the beauty right in front of u - but love to experience the feeling - have nothing to say ...hope U got my point Maria...a simple 🤗

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MARIYA

@MariyaOshin

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: chitsri65
Maria - Fantastic presentation 👏 A trick of a fool used by a brain created a thunderstorm - any trick used for benefit will always reverse back tenfolds...Aman getting a taste of his own medicine and that to how...I so...o... loved the end 'cause I truly believe ' a soul is immortal while the body fades'.

Your writeup - Sometimes words fail to describe when u see the beauty right in front of u - but love to experience the feeling - have nothing to say ...hope U got my point Maria...a simple 🤗

Thankyou Chitri...

loved the end 'cause I truly believe ' a soul is immortal while the body fades'...You are right dear...

I am so so happy...hi hi...Thankyou sweety...