~MOHABBAT~:An Aaryan FF (till the climax) - Page 4

Originally posted by: Guruvishva

The Prologue😛

Ur prologue even gave a great beginning Mariya😉

It was Awesome😛

Thanks dear...

Chapter 1😛

It had all emotions 😳

Prashanth - Hrithik Roshan😆

Ha Ha..Yeah,A Hrithik..But he gets a tight slap later...Haha

Arpita- Slim college Beauty😆

The same,she also gets a good dlpa..OMG HaHa

Aarthi- Poir Fatty😛

But Genius😊

Sweet Girl😃

Dont worry yaar..the theme is about inner beauty not the outer...She is sweet and genius...

The 5 dots r really great😊

The rise day is superb😛

Don't know what's written in the paper😕

HI HI...

Hurrying to read Chap 2😆

Really Ur Chap 1 is Amazing😳

Thanks da...

Chapter 2😛

Wow this letter gave me also a shock...😲

Hi Hi...

I think somebody is playing with that innocent😳

Then Yash - a average man😲

Kya😲

Dont worry...Both Yashu and aarti are avg...But their soul is beyond all...

But he's also beauty as Aarthi in his heart😊

Yes thats my point...

Ur description of Yash's Eyes was great😳

The way of Aarya's convo was cool😎

There beg of the friendship was fab too😛

The next Day loved the CID Yash😊

Really a great friend of Aarthi😊

Wow it's a breaking point😲

The culprit is in 5 dots😲

Loved CID Yash's Plan😛

Hurrying to read Chap 3 to find the culprit😆

This Chap was Thrilling😊

Chapter 3😛

Yash found the culprit 😳

Really he's a Genius😆

The culprit is Aman😡

Now our JKR is Getting ready to the War with Yash😳

Aarthi is concerned in her work 😳

Lovey Girl😳

MADDY Arpita Hiw Dare Us She To Scold Aarthi as Fat Goat?😡

Don't know what the JKR is going to do now😳

Aarya's Plan is really great & fab👏

This is called in 1 stone 2 Mangoes😆

Aman was fooled & Arpita got a great bang😆

Poor Prashanth couldn't do anythingdo anything😆

Kya turning point gai Mariya?😆

I Donna I want to laugh or feel sorry for PrashanthPrashanth🤣

Aarya rocked 😆

They wrote a letter a love letter for a teacher like Prashanth,🤣

Climax❤️

Aarya enjoyed a lot between them😆

Wow Yashus letter😛

Wow this moment was really great😳

Aarya's beginning of love mesmerised me😳

To Mariya-😳

After reading this update I want to hug u for giving such a lovey update🤗

Hug to you sweety 🤗...What a fabulous reader you are...Your patience...I swear...

It's amazing dear

The Zclimax was the mass

Wonderful update Mariya😛

Thanks yaar...I am so happyyy

I'm sorry too for such a late & Long comment😳

Really it's amazingamazing😛

I couldn't control my fingers from commenting😳

Love u for this update Mariya😛

Really Really your encouraging comments makes me ...wvao wow wvaooo wowww...oolala feelings...hihi...thanks da...

Originally posted by: poonamgarg

Beautiful Mariya👏

very well written⭐️

Keep it up😃

Originally posted by: jayshu17

Originally posted by: Josmi01

Now i read the whole story. Loved it. You are awesome. Plse continue the writings. Nowadays i am roaming here only for some aarya thoughts. Also i m feeling like i m not alone here. Thats only becoz of u.

Originally posted by: shalini28

awesome updates dear.

the last part is really hilarious😆

loved it so much😳

Originally posted by: SilverFairy

Awsome. Will Read It.
Love This FF. (;

Originally posted by: villager00

hayee! so cute..i think i just blushed to my ears😳😆

Thanks a lot, choti👏👏👏..

Originally posted by: Guruvishva

@ Mariya😛

Whenever u write another update pls PM me😳

Really u r theme two

People often feel that only two perfect persons can make a perfect ending.

But that is a misconception, because today two imperfect people will make a perfect ending. After all even Maths has proved it "minus and minus make a plus!"

Is awesome😳

Really great😛