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bilqeesbint Nazeer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

You are the one who said sorry first 😡, so I gave you the taste of your own medicine 😆

🤗

am only allowed to say that not u😆
ok no sorries😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: billieberry
am only allowed to say that not u😆
ok no sorries😳

That sounds much better 😃

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Sri_Radha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#193

edited my comment on pg-22😊

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Mahalakshmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#194

sweetu first a big hug for my extremely late reply and also for comeback that too with a lovely update of YAMR🤗... this was my longing to happen after the mumbai incident and yash realizing his mistake but u fulfilled it sweetu !!! thank u so much 😳😳

i am loving the way u r showing yash's heart feelings for arthi even though he is still confused to realise 😳...simply love the way u showed yash to hide behind something and watch arthi's every move and action without her knowledge 😉⭐️⭐️

vidhi and arthi's convo left me so happy that i felt like arthi indeed found a sister in the form of vidhi ... she is sooo lucky to have her 👏👏👏 so sweet if them to share the happy moment and sad moment ⭐️⭐️...lucky vidhi bhabhi to have arthi bhen ⭐️⭐️⭐️...

now the hot water massage scene how can we forget that sweetu ...omg yash was longing to touch and feel aarthi but its not possible now yashu wait for a little 🤢...
But yash will do it soon haina dear 😳

yash and kids convo which i always love to read sweetu ..

kids love their mama and papa so much as like aarya love them so much ...my heart went for aarthi when kids said she is scared to sleep alone 😭😭...as she is an orphan may be she suffered it from childhood too...she deserve a lot of happiness in her life what she has not faced till now...😭

and yash calling arthi as jkr 😆😆 but it was nice to hear it from yashu's mouth so romantic😳😳 what a surprise dear !!! even yash knows to tease and joke others 😉

how the wa yash distributed the tasks of taking care of arthi⭐️ to the little kids 😆

i wonder who will be that secret person 😕😆😆
but will be waiting to know what u r planning for us in the romantic terrace of aarya😳😳...

This was a marvellous update sweetu !!! ⭐️ continue soon buddy 😳😳

Edited by maha9 - 11 years ago

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Ken309

@Ken309

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Posted: 11 years ago

#195

Hey nikki, please update soon 😊

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: Sri_Radha
Great update nikki👏
Aarya moment amazing😳
Loved the way yash secretly admiring aarti...😛
Phone convo between aarti and vidhi was nice and natural..😃
Poor aarti still fear past mumbai experience...Liked the way aarti frankly tell her opnion about likes and dislikes..👏.Wow..It seems aarya have smilar likes😳
Loved yash cutely giving advice to kids and liked the way he instructed to kids that they have to play with their mumma⭐️
Yash is hurt when he hear about aarti sleeping alone..Glad that yash comes know about this
Tough time for yash.😉..Aarti is maintaining distance to yash and yash falling unknownly to her😳
Once again Lovely update...👏👏
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next part
Thanks for pm🤗

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: maha9
sweetu first a big hug for my extremely late reply and also for comeback that too with a lovely update of YAMR🤗... this was my longing to happen after the mumbai incident and yash realizing his mistake but u fulfilled it sweetu !!! thank u so much 😳😳

i am loving the way u r showing yash's heart feelings for arthi even though he is still confused to realise 😳...simply love the way u showed yash to hide behind something and watch arthi's every move and action without her knowledge 😉⭐️⭐️

vidhi and arthi's convo left me so happy that i felt like arthi indeed found a sister in the form of vidhi ... she is sooo lucky to have her 👏👏👏 so sweet if them to share the happy moment and sad moment ⭐️⭐️...lucky vidhi bhabhi to have arthi bhen ⭐️⭐️⭐️...

now the hot water massage scene how can we forget that sweetu ...omg yash was longing to touch and feel aarthi but its not possible now yashu wait for a little 🤢...
But yash will do it soon haina dear 😳

yash and kids convo which i always love to read sweetu ..

kids love their mama and papa so much as like aarya love them so much ...my heart went for aarthi when kids said she is scared to sleep alone 😭😭...as she is an orphan may be she suffered it from childhood too...she deserve a lot of happiness in her life what she has not faced till now...😭

and yash calling arthi as jkr 😆😆 but it was nice to hear it from yashu's mouth so romantic😳😳 what a surprise dear !!! even yash knows to tease and joke others 😉

how the wa yash distributed the tasks of taking care of arthi⭐️ to the little kids 😆

i wonder who will be that secret person 😕😆😆
but will be waiting to know what u r planning for us in the romantic terrace of aarya😳😳...

This was a marvellous update sweetu !!! ⭐️ continue soon buddy 😳😳

Res.

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: Ken309
Hey nikki, please update soon 😊

Sorry for such a late update.

Updating soon...😃

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#199

YAMR, chapter - 3

Special Note.

Hey guys I know that I was (once again) Not Supposed to write or work on anything else, before I Finished BOY. But here I'm once again with an unexpected update of YAMR. Actually there is a reason for that.

You see today is a special day. It's the One Year Anniversary of my (Forum) Twin Sister, Abie (Love You My Tweenie).

She loves YAMR and has been after me since last so many months to restart it. But I've been so busy these last couple of months. Plus I want to finish My OS "Because Of You".

When few weeks back, I found out that Abie's one year anniversary is approaching I decided to restart YAMR, as my gift for Abie. But once again my personal life made me so busy (I'll be busy till this coming Tuesday), so once again I gave up on the idea. Plus I also lost touch of the story.

But then my very persuasive Kid Sister Charmi started pestering me to restart it. I told her that I don't have time to even work on MTB or BOY. But Chams said "Di, you can do it. You'll have to do it. Do it for Abie"

And coincidently, one of my readers @jhillyarya, PMed me few days back, asking me when I'll restart YAMR?"

So I had to reconsider my decision.

So for Abie, here I'm with Chapter - 3, of "You Are My Rain". 🤗

Abie sweetie, "Happy One Year Anniversary" in this lovely forum. May you have many more.

I won't say too much, as you already know what you mean to me and how I feel about you.

Plus we both don't like too much of emotional stuff, so I won't write any such thing that'll make both of us emotional. 😆

So you See Abie Charmi and I didn't made any special post for you, instead we decided to give you your favorite things as gifts. My gift is that I'm restarting YAMR for you. And Charmi's gift is in the post after the third chapter. 😳

Hope you'll like this Surprise Gift, from your two Crazy Sisters. Love you Sweet Abie ❤️

Recap in the Next Post followed by Charmi's gift to Abie, followed by Chapter 3 of YAMR.

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Edited by lovely_nikki - 11 years ago

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#200

Ok those who don't remember what this OS is all about, well here's the reminder/ sort of a recap of what this is about and what happened in the first chapter.

(Copy pasted from the first page)

Well I know the title sounds weird , but the I loved this title, as I personally feel that Rain Played an important part in AarYa's life.

It had rained on the day when AarYa were first arrested, right after their Engagement.

It had Rained when Aarti had saved Yash from the flooded water and had confessed, to an unconscious Yash, that she's in LOVE WITH HIM.

And it was THE RAIN, which had finally brought AarYa closer, in Mumbai on USS RAAT

So this time also, RAIN will play an Important part in their Life.

The track of this OS, will happen couple of months after their return from lalithpur. Yash and Aarti have become friends.

In Lalithpur, Aarti had told Yash about her been an divorcee and not a widow. Yash after some time has accepted it and forgiven Aarti, along with the rest of the family members.

Yash to had apologized to Aarti for his behavior post Mumbai.

Aarti's love for Yash is growing day by day, but our tube light Yash is confused for his feelings for his Aartiji.

Here I'll show that Yash himself will realize that he's in Love with Aarti (without anyone's help) and then how he'll confess it on One Rainy Night in Mumbai

I wanted to write it in one part only, but as usual it looks like, it'll be a two chapter OS. And who knows the way I write, it might turn into multiple part also. ( as you all know how much I love to write in detail)

Actually I needed a break from intense track of MTB, so I was looking for something light and romantic, and last week suddenly this track came into my mind. I hope that you'll Love it. (don't worry you'll get an update on MTB within few days)

Recap of first two chapters...

In the first chapter I've shown that Yash got two event planning contracts in Mumbai. So SP and Gayatri told him to take Aarti and kids along with him.

Aarti is reluctant to go, as she's scared from her experience post last Mumbai trip. But this time Yash wants them to go. So with doctors permission and Gayatri's order, the small family came to Mumbai.

Now we will see how Yash's feelings towards Aarti will change and how they will come close to each other.

In the second chapter...

AarYa and kids reached Mumbai.

Aarti gets back pain and Bhawari gives her massage with hot water back. Yash watches this and gets tempted to give her a massage. This feelings towards Aarti, confuses him even more.

As he's about to get busy with his work, he assigns small tasks to all three kids which they'll have to do to take care of Aarti in his absence.

He asks Aarti whether she'll also miss him like the kids will, Aarti says that she won't miss him as she'll be busy with their kids. This makes Yash a bit sad.

On the first day of work, he returns home early and find all of them playing blindfold on the beach. A blindfold Aarti bumps into Yash. She removes her blindfold and AarYa share an intense eyes lock, which is broken when someone places a hand on Aarti's shoulder.

So Friends, here's the next chapter of "You Are My Rain", which will start with disclosing who person is. This chapter is a short one, as I wrote it in a hurry, just for Abie.

In every chapter I'll use all AarYa scenes which happened before lalithpur. I'll show the scenes that happened post lalithpur, in a different way. Hope you'll like it.

Love

NIKKI. ❤️

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Charmi's gift for Abie in the following post, followed by Chapter - 3 of YAMR.

(Sorry for the inconvenience, but it was all my idea )

Edited by lovely_nikki - 11 years ago