AarYa OS 'You Are My Rain'...Chapter-5, page-55 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Kate till now I've written only 2-3 paras, it's another emotional update, so it's taking me time to decide what scene to write from where and how 😕. I'll try my best to update it till tomorrow. But I can't promise anything this time 😭
I'm listening to your advice this time 🤗

It's ok dear. We'll wait I know how hard must be for you to pen it down as it's getting emotional. You have to visualize everything before you write and you cannot share it till you write.
Oh glad my advice became handy this time.😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's ok dear. We'll wait I know how hard must be for you to pen it down as it's getting emotional. You have to visualize everything before you write and you cannot share it till you write.
Oh glad my advice became handy this time.😉😆

Kate to relax myself, I wrote the OS and it helped me a lot. But MTB is getting really hard for me to write.
And I'm also happy that your advice helped me 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Nikki you are just like me. I also wrote the OS to relax myself. I mean to get me out of my busy shedule. though it was emotional
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: caller123

@Nikki you are just like me. I also wrote the OS to relax myself. I mean to get me out of my busy shedule. though it was emotional

Yes we both are so much alike, like each other 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Yes we both are so much alike, like each other 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey shalini wish you a vry happy birthday sweety
god bless you

n rain omg the beautiful rainji brough a new twist or i shud say haseen mod in our aarya life so looking forward r to it nikki so yashji hamare buddho ram will relaise that aare main toh gaya re dil bhi gaya re😉

looking forward to 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: RA17

hey shalini wish you a vry happy birthday sweety

god bless you

n rain omg the beautiful rainji brough a new twist or i shud say haseen mod in our aarya life so looking forward r to it nikki so yashji hamare buddho ram will relaise that aare main toh gaya re dil bhi gaya re😉

looking forward to 😳

Thanks for wishing Shalu. 😊

Yes Riya now our Buddhu Ram will realize that now he's a goner 😆. And rain will play a part in his love confession 😉

Ok one down, three more to go 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Thanks for wishing Shalu. 😊

Yes Riya now our Buddhu Ram will realize that now he's a goner 😆. And rain will play a part in his love confession 😉

Ok one down, three more to go 😳

yup i must say me like is so slowww but your fast revert are mind blowing😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A very happy belated birthday wish goes to Shalu
WOW its an awesome OS
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Posted: 12 years ago
Have read you awesome OS earlier as I cant resist myself from reading your outstanding creations no matter how much busy I am..😉😉 But I took long time to comment as I like to give brief comments and since it was Eid so I was not able to do it..😕
Before saying something about writer Nikki I wanna say something about person Nikki.😊I alz considered you a very good human being and a very good friend also and by writing this OS for Shalu you have proved it again jaan...😳..I am really very proud to have a great friend like you...🤗🤗
Now come to your OS which was just Raapcheek...Dhasu...Chummeshwari for me..👏👏👏👏
Sorry to use such complements but what to do you write so well that I lost word to describe it😕😕 and this is not drama...😆😆
What was so entertaining for me that you chose MU track which is very close to my heart.😳😳
Loved to see SP and G3's effort to give some attention on Arya and arrange their MU trip..👏👏 SP and g3 tussi great ho...⭐️⭐️
My tube light Arti ji why are you so scared of your Yash ji..😭😭..No matter what happened in the past but Yash ji gave her the most romantic night to his Arti ji in MU..❤️❤️..How can she deny to go there again..😡😡
But I loved the conversation of Arti and Vidhi in the kitchen..👏
And what to say about Yash ji who is nothing but a biggest Tube light...😡😡...Itna kuch ho gaya phir vhi apne dil ke baat nahi samjhe.. but he is thinking much for his Arti ji and wants to spend time with her..😳😳😳..Yashu kya baat hain..⭐️⭐️
For me the most hottest and sensuous part was this which I love the most..
Out of his own accord he placed his hand on her exposed tummy, to feel the movement of the baby.
Yash's touch sent an electrifying current through Aarti's body, which didn't get unnoticed by Yash, as he too felt that same current.👏👏👏👏👏
I cant express how much I loved this part Nikki..just believe that while reading this lines my heart was beating faster and everything was getting blank for sometime.Really Nikki you are a great thinker dear.👏👏👏From beginning till end everything was perfect in your OS.👏👏👏👏
Waiting for the second part holding my breath..😳😳


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