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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: --Iqra--

Lovely update! It's different, a naughty Aarti is new to me. First I felt that she would be somewhat like Palak. With the birthday thing. I understand Shobha. But, Aarti is cute. 😆 Good Job!


Thanxx 😳!
Yeah aarti is cute😳!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2

Yash came to home at night.He opened the main door with keys and quietly entered in house.In lounge he came and sat on the sofa.He was feeling very tired.He saw maansi standing infront of him.He could see that she was feeling very sleepy.

Maansi: Bhaiya should i make something for you?
Yash(Smiled): no its ok doll u go to sleep.
Maansi: Bhaiya u must be hungry let me go to kitchen and make something for you.
Yash(Turned her towards her room and pushed her lightly): U go to sleep maansi.

Yash went to kitchen and made omelette for him and took bread from fridge.He started to eat it in dinning room when he noticed Pratap standing there.

Yash(Surprised):Dad u r still awake?
Pratap(Sat infront of him): Yeah...U keep on eating.

Yash smiled so that his father could not notice that he was so tired.Pratap was looking at his son.

Yash: Dad u want to talk abt something important.
Pratap(Teasingly): No i was just seeing that my son has become so handsome...(noticed that yash was blushing)....what abt ur studies?
Yash: Going gr8 dad.Infact after few days i have exams...Dad will u drink tea?
Pratap: If u r making then ofcourse.

Yash went to make tea.Pratap standing next to him.

Pratap: Hows ur job going?
Yash(Who was doing job after his university in his friend's computer center):Its going perfect dad.

Pratap looked at his son who was the most handsome among his children and because of his obedience both pratap and gayatri used to adore him the most.After Pratap's retirement,Yash never asked for money from him.He used to buy his own clothes and used to give his own fee.He used to go early in morning and then used to come late at home.He used to come for lunch and tea break to his home.

Yash:What's the matter dad?
Pratap(Feeling emotional): Nothing i just want u to not do any job right now..Atleast right now Ur father has that much money to...
Yash: Dad plzz...U knw how much interest i have in computers..on top it my friend needed someone so in this way i'm getting some money too...Plz don't think abt it that much..

They drank tea and then they went towards their rooms for sleeping.


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On sunday,Yash took elders to Vidhi's home.Maansi,Prateek and aarti were at home.In evening,Maansi made samoosas for them.Prateek and aarti as usual fighting..This time fight was that only one samoosa was left and prateek took it and teasing aarti that he would eat it.When yash and elders came back to home.Prateek seeing pratap stopped teasing aarti and gave her last samoosa.

Pratap(Talking to yash): Think once again yash is it necessary to go to ahmedabad?
Yash: Dad i have a work there plz try to understand.

Aarti heard it she ran and stood infront of yash.

Aarti(Questioningly): Captain u r going somewhere?
Yash (Smiled): Yeah i'm going to ahmedabad for two weeks b/c of some work.
Aarti(her eyes became teary): U have not told me abt it...I have never stayed away from u..and how will u stay that much far that too without anyone from home with u and what abt me..what i will do without u.

Yash (Smiled after hearing her reply and hit her lightly on head): U r crazy dodo...I will stay there with my friend...Don't worry dad is there for u in my absence.

Pratap smiled and assured aarti that he would be there for her.Aarti wiped her tears and smiled.

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After one week,aarti was walking in drawing room in tension.Pratap looked at her.

Pratap: Aarti beta sit down...Don't walk so much in tension even i started to feel pain in my legs b/c of u.
Aarti(With teary eyes):Bare pappa prateek is not coming out of his computer room...what is taking him so long to check my result...what if i got failed.
Pratap: Beta i'm sure u will get pass with really good marks.
Shobha(Looked at her daughter and gave her angry stare): Sit down aarti...

At that time Prateek entered in room.Aarti who was about to sit quickly stood up.

Prateek (Making sad face): I have told u na..it will be miracle if u will pass guess what u did not get fail in one subject but two subjects...Now how will i face my friends whose sisters study with u.

Aarti started to cry after hearing it.

Prateek(Quickly): don't cry don't cry...I was just kidding..U have passed with such a good marks.

Aarti came and hit him hard on the shoulder.Pratap got angry on prateek for making aarti cry.Shobha and gayatri brought sweets from kitchen

Aarti(Happily): I will go and call captain.
Prateek(Teasingly): Yeah go on quickly and tell him afterall u can't digest food without telling him

Everyone smiled.

Precap:
Aarti's friends trying to explain that actually she and yash love
eachother..Aarti's reaction.

Note:
Thanxx for liking and commenting on previous part..I hope u guys like this part too..

Edited by pickachu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
You updated so fast, 😆 I like... Eid Mubarak to you in advance! Shobha kuch zyada naraz nahi ho rahi? She seems almost egoistic, that she has to live under Suraj Pratap. Yash, is so hardworking! Leaves early, comes late is a financial support and is the ideal son. Good Job!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
This FF is a pleasure to read nice loving family looking foward to more updates
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Fatima, wonderful start! Read both chapters 👏 👏 looking forward to more. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Thanxx 😳!
I will try to update fast this FF 😆😳!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: --Iqra--

You updated so fast, 😆 I like... Eid Mubarak to you in advance! Shobha kuch zyada naraz nahi ho rahi? She seems almost egoistic, that she has to live under Suraj Pratap. Yash, is so hardworking! Leaves early, comes late is a financial support and is the ideal son. Good Job!


I was in a mood to write iss liye updated fast 😆!
Eid mubarak in advance😳!
Shobha is like this she wants aarti to act mature😳.
Yeah Yash is an ideal son.
Thanx😳!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: sb1410

This FF is a pleasure to read nice loving family looking foward to more updates


I'm happy that u guys like it 😳!
Thanx for commenting!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Abie10

Fatima, wonderful start! Read both chapters 👏 👏 looking forward to more. 😳


Thanx 😳!
I will try to give u guys updates fastly 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Fathima...thats a fast and sweet ff from you..

By the way...please give a long update for part3...

I am waiting for next

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