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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Avina-Ashvik



Thank you for replying

Thank You So Much for appreciating my work. You've no idea what your encouraging words means to me ❤️
And right now I want to work on the update of my OS "Because Of You" after that I'll try to work on MTB again. Cause after every emotional updates I need a little break and time to relax my mind so that I can properly concentrate in the next one, and give you the update that you all so deserve. 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: billieberry

Chapter 21

Bravo! Nikki di, 👏⭐️👏

Superb write up as always👍🏼

The feeling of d emotion worked on me dear, anger, pity, sad, what can i say😳

Emotional chapter nd it blends really well with d characters.👏

Aarti tried to commit suicide, poor soul that's is d only thing that will come to her mind in such environment

Love Gayatri's unwillingness to let Prashant follow her😳 but that animal still had ammaji follow her 😡

Seriously Shoba nd Dubey need some pity they treat her like a lifeless being,😡 who told them she won't commit d suicide in d bathroom. really pity them, treating such a daughter like this nd d other one is free😕

Thank God they reached on time to save Aarti😃

Gayatri and Dr.kiran care nd comforting her, just love it, Aarti has an Aunt in that house😲

Wow! Well as per she said she is not allowed to be present, who will ever know she lives in the house with such bias people.

The poor lady is a widow nd she grew in a kind of environment like Aarti, love her love for Aarti, I believe she only can understand what Aarti is going through in that house.😳

Poor soul Aarti wants to see yash, but scared of what he will think of her😭😭

Just love Dr.kiran what a brave lady she is, see how she made Mr. Dubey dumbstruck and how nicely she cross-examine the situation,👏 she got some solution but Mr. Dubey he is only thinking about his image😡

Omg! This old woman ammaji lalla lalla huh?😡😡

Marriage with Prashant let's see how Aarti will react to hear that.😕

The note at the end, me too believe there is need to know more of aarti's childhood past, when she was born how she met Akash, love the new character, chapter was not draggy at all😃

Terrific Promo, Aarya romance.☺️ d picture nikki di 🤢

Now that u have given us a hint on it, hope it comes soon.

on the whole I love every bit of d chapter.., ❤️awaiting for d next one😳

update soon nd take care!🤗

Thanx for d pm😊


Thanks Billie 🤗
Billie all the emotions worked on me also. In fact the effect was so strong that by the time I finished it, I was emotionally drained.

To write on Aarti's condition, especially the bathroom scene was a little painful for me also, as I had to visualize the whole scene.

Dubey's, Ammaji and Prashant, well our hatred for them will keep on increasing with each upcoming chapter. 😕

On the other hand our love and respect for Gayatri will increase so much ❤️

Aarti's aunts characters are introduced to show what kind of family she grew into. You'll know more about Aakash's parents also and his strong bond with Aarti and their relationship.

The promo is one killer one so far 🤢, even I'm in love with it 😳

Will try my best to update soon 😳

Edited by lovely_nikki - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanx for the reply nikki di😃
will be waiting, take care🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: billieberry

thanx for the reply nikki di😃
will be waiting, take care🤗

You are welcome Billie 🤗

Will work on the next part when my mind is relaxed enough to concentrate on it, so that I can give it full justice 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Riya I'll reply to both your comments in this one, want to save space 😆

Normally people get upset or angry when someone reads their updates late and give late comment, but I think I'm the weird one here, cause your late comments helps me to relive all those scenes once again.

Yash was angry and his ego clashed with him in his drunken state. And he ended up doing that blunder. The thing here is now his guilt trip will start. He won't show it to all, but deep inside he'll blame himself for a very long time to come. So please don't get angry with him.

Prashant is an sorry excuse in the name of an human being. He can go to any extent to take his revenge. So once again the less I talk about him the better.

Riya Yash has full faith on Aarti, that's why he fell for her once again and he was ready to start a new life with her, but sometimes one believes his mind instead of his heart. His ego and hurt heard Aarti's convo with Aakash. And their dancing together confirmed his suspicions, that's why he did what he did. But still that's no EXCUSE to treat a woman like that.

OMG the scene where Aarti and Palak so trustingly sleeps in Yash's warm and protective embrace, well it still steals my heart.

Ok now I've to reply on the remaining of your comments 😳





all i can say mera dard bhi mera marz bhi tum hi ho
like you torture me with making my yash mr bechara n aarti abla naari so is my slow comments😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
ahh..nikki finally i got the time to read you FF..i read in one go but it took me 2 days to finished it becoz of others commitment..sorry dear *hold ear*
ok...now to the story..i'll go by characters..

Yash
at the beginning of the story to tell you the truth i don't like him, coz you make him a very girly person..he cry so much!!😆 but after the story progresses n characterization changes, i hate him a bit but still love him coz he doesn't know what going on..i hate his stupidity on believing what his kamina bro python told him about Aarti...😡 n the way he treated Aarti after they got married..

n now he still a cry baby but it ok 😉 i love him, it hard to find someone like him in real world tho..i love that he is like Yash in the serial when he was with Palak..he love his daughter n his family so much..His scenes with Palak is so cute n showed that he's a very caring person n easy to love but a very dangerous person when he get hurt(broken hearted/being lied) so much..

Aarti
in the beginning of the story..hated her n didn't believed her..why so cold hearted?? why sudden changes?? did she really love that python?? what happen to her?? i know something has happened to her like Yash did n i didn't believed her single word that come out from her mouth n her actions toward Yash gross me..

then when the story progresses, that hatred turn to sympathy..after she had the accident n Prashant died n she got that nightmares..my believed that something truly happen to her tighten up..this is what i think after i read bout her nightmare...She must have been RAPED!! if that nightmares happen becoz she can't forgot python she'll not murmur NO PRASHANT NO, instead it should be DON'T GO PRASHANT in her dreams n why it took her so long before she can get to her sleep..right?? she should be happy to get to sleep coz only in sleep she can meet him(if only she really love him 😕)...n looking by how bad the nightmares was, i know that she was brutally abused..

then in the end of chapter 17..you proved me right!! yeah!! i hate(coz he allowed his anger to take over n control his body) n love Yash for doing that to her..if not, don't know how long will he get to know bout the truth..but i really love that part/scene you know..weird..really feel bad for Aarti, now she has to go through it all over again coz of him, but thank god, this time she has Yash(but coz of him it happening again) to deal with it..she will be ok..

bout the pregnancy..i've a doubt plez clear me out..did Palak was conceived after Yash go to Mumbai or becoz of the that horrible incident?? n the complicated pregnancy, wish we really has that in the serial..urmm😔

Gayatri
love her..hate her for awhile when she did what she did to Yash..

Aman n Arpita
at first i thought u will make Yash married to Arpita like in the serial, but you surprise me..😆they seem cute together..a very great frens to Yash n Aarti..thanks to them..Arpita, i like her..

but with Yash n Gayatri, m also agree at him when he mess up at his own party..😡

Manu, Prateek, Suraj, Akash
Manu, really sweet little sister..she n Prateek both love n to attach to Yash..nice..btw, Yash should ask Manu bout Aarti instead of Prateek when JB ask him too..coz Manu knows more what happening in the house coz she's there(also with Aarti) all the time not like Prateek who been busy following their father handling their other projects..

Suraj, hurmm..i don't know what to say bout him..😆

Akash, at first even i thought that he's Aarti ex flame😆 but then naa, it can't be...i thought he's Aarti real brother but u made him her cousin bro, close enough..😆

JB
I like her a lot...why can Ishita be like her??😭
I love her, Manu n Arpita scene..😆🤣...will you make her married to Prateek?? *joke*

Baby Palak
she cute!!! what a sweetheart she is!! she will get lot, lots of love from her parent, definitely..!!

Ammaji n The Dubey's
I hate them to the core!!!

others:
1. you did a fine, no, a brilliant jobs with Yash characterization, from a bechara person to an angry young man.. OMG..!!
2. i hate it when Yash was asked to leave the house..why he need to go out, instead of him it should be Aarti n Prashant..
3. the scene when Yash 1st hold Palak, aww that must be the one of the cutest n overwhelming scene ever if it was showed on TV..
4. you were right every character n dialogue all are important n i love how you tell/write your story my dear..n i love the extra long long update too...😃
5. i will tell you more if i remember any..😆

p/s: can't wait for the next chapter n Aaryalicious scenes..😃 update soon dear..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RA17

all i can say mera dard bhi mera marz bhi tum hi ho
like you torture me with making my yash mr bechara n aarti abla naari so is my slow comments😉😆

I'm always ready for this sweet torture ❤️




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KayAziwa

ahh..nikki finally i got the time to read you FF..i read in one go but it took me 2 days to finished it becoz of others commitment..sorry dear *hold ear*

ok...now to the story..i'll go by characters..

Yash
at the beginning of the story to tell you the truth i don't like him, coz you make him a very girly person..he cry so much!!😆 but after the story progresses n characterization changes, i hate him a bit but still love him coz he doesn't know what going on..i hate his stupidity on believing what his kamina bro python told him about Aarti...😡 n the way he treated Aarti after they got married..

n now he still a cry baby but it ok 😉 i love him, it hard to find someone like him in real world tho..i love that he is like Yash in the serial when he was with Palak..he love his daughter n his family so much..His scenes with Palak is so cute n showed that he's a very caring person n easy to love but a very dangerous person when he get hurt(broken hearted/being lied) so much..

Aarti
in the beginning of the story..hated her n didn't believed her..why so cold hearted?? why sudden changes?? did she really love that python?? what happen to her?? i know something has happened to her like Yash did n i didn't believed her single word that come out from her mouth n her actions toward Yash gross me..

then when the story progresses, that hatred turn to sympathy..after she had the accident n Prashant died n she got that nightmares..my believed that something truly happen to her tighten up..this is what i think after i read bout her nightmare...She must have been RAPED!! if that nightmares happen becoz she can't forgot python she'll not murmur NO PRASHANT NO, instead it should be DON'T GO PRASHANT in her dreams n why it took her so long before she can get to her sleep..right?? she should be happy to get to sleep coz only in sleep she can meet him(if only she really love him 😕)...n looking by how bad the nightmares was, i know that she was brutally abused..

then in the end of chapter 17..you proved me right!! yeah!! i hate(coz he allowed his anger to take over n control his body) n love Yash for doing that to her..if not, don't know how long will he get to know bout the truth..but i really love that part/scene you know..weird..really feel bad for Aarti, now she has to go through it all over again coz of him, but thank god, this time she has Yash(but coz of him it happening again) to deal with it..she will be ok..

bout the pregnancy..i've a doubt plez clear me out..did Palak was conceived after Yash go to Mumbai or becoz of the that horrible incident?? n the complicated pregnancy, wish we really has that in the serial..urmm😔

Gayatri
love her..hate her for awhile when she did what she did to Yash..

Aman n Arpita
at first i thought u will make Yash married to Arpita like in the serial, but you surprise me..😆they seem cute together..a very great frens to Yash n Aarti..thanks to them..Arpita, i like her..

but with Yash n Gayatri, m also agree at him when he mess up at his own party..😡

Manu, Prateek, Suraj, Akash
Manu, really sweet little sister..she n Prateek both love n to attach to Yash..nice..btw, Yash should ask Manu bout Aarti instead of Prateek when JB ask him too..coz Manu knows more what happening in the house coz she's there(also with Aarti) all the time not like Prateek who been busy following their father handling their other projects..

Suraj, hurmm..i don't know what to say bout him..😆

Akash, at first even i thought that he's Aarti ex flame😆 but then naa, it can't be...i thought he's Aarti real brother but u made him her cousin bro, close enough..😆

JB
I like her a lot...why can Ishita be like her??😭
I love her, Manu n Arpita scene..😆🤣...will you make her married to Prateek?? *joke*

Baby Palak
she cute!!! what a sweetheart she is!! she will get lot, lots of love from her parent, definitely..!!

Ammaji n The Dubey's
I hate them to the core!!!

others:
1. you did a fine, no, a brilliant jobs with Yash characterization, from a bechara person to an angry young man.. OMG..!!
2. i hate it when Yash was asked to leave the house..why he need to go out, instead of him it should be Aarti n Prashant..
3. the scene when Yash 1st hold Palak, aww that must be the one of the cutest n overwhelming scene ever if it was showed on TV..
4. you were right every character n dialogue all are important n i love how you tell/write your story my dear..n i love the extra long long update too...😃
5. i will tell you more if i remember any..😆

p/s: can't wait for the next chapter n Aaryalicious scenes..😃 update soon dear..!!


Kay first of all Welcome to "Meant To Be" and please don't say sorry for taking two days to reply. You read so many chapters in one sitting and commented on all individual Characters, means so much to me
Kay you've no idea how happy you've made me with this comment of yours.

Regarding my answers to your comments on all characters...

Yash..

I know that I've shown Yash as a cry baby. I wanted to show him different from the typical male leads in every story. He has his own flaws. His biggest flaw is what he almost did to Aarti, in a drunken state. His jealousy, ego and hurt took over.
Why he trusted Aarti so easily, that she loves Prashant and not him, will be shown in the upcoming chapters.
Also why and how he fell in love with her will be highlighted.

Aarti...

Everyone hated Aarti, in the beginning as they were confused with her behavior. From the very beginning I've shown her as an complex character. Cause I didn't wanted to reveal her tragic experience in the beginning itself. She's been through so much in life. And he loved Yash to the core from the bottom of her heart.
If you've remember her dialogues in the, she never ever said that she loved Prashant, she always said that whatever she did, she did it for her love, which was always Yash and only Yash.
Aarti's nightmares will still continue for a little while longer. And how Yash will get her out of it, well we will have to wait and see.

For the first time I'm sorry that I proved you right at the end of chapter 17 (regarding Aarti's rape)

Kay how Palak was conceived will be shown soon. But she was conceived the day Yash left for Mumbai. At that time some readers thought that Yash is Palak's real father. But sadly it's not true. Prashant is Palak's biological father, and not Yash.


Gayatri...

Well your feelings for Gayatri will keep on changing as the story will progress.

Other characters...

SP's character will also come into light, very soon.

Prateek and Paridhi are right now as a side characters only. Along with Manu.

Aman and Arpita are Yash's true friends but they had their own share of mistakes.
JB, I so sorry to say that I can't marry her with Prateek, as he's already married. But you'll see her in action when the whole truth will be out and everyone will help Aarti to move forward.

Don't want to talk about Prashant, Ammaji and Dubey's, as they all disgust me.
Regarding what you wrote in others...

Kay I really loved your comment, as you did analysis on each and every character of MTB, which really means so much to me.

Will try my best to update soon.

Edited by lovely_nikki - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Ch19

Gayatri is such a sensible woman she made enquiry about aakash n also realize how yash must have got angry rather than jumping on conclusions

And then after shedding burdens from their eyes yash briefed all what he felt n happened from last evening to tonight

N then gayatri harsh but true words increase my respect for her tenfold aakash ia actually a jerk who left his sister who was so dependent on him and so is yash jerk you cant forgive him but all we need to give him a chance as for aarti yash is her dard n her marz too

Gayatri said such fantactic words itsreally soothing dear bit scared of what she gonna reveal

Oh so dubeys had problem with aarti as her girl child n then gayatri came as blessing as her true MA

Ammaji words kind of came true arggh

Prashant n his eveil mind with great support of his ammaji man its too siclk

I feel so overwhelmed with gauatri on other side disgust with P

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Posted: 11 years ago

I cant control myself read ch20

Oh man such agony aarti faced Nikki my eyes are burning with all what i read

Ammaji all she see is P n to save him she destroyed one innocent soul man i mean gayatri must be is scuh dilemmea suraj was nerver a support n now it makes more clear how all are defaulters fro aarti not only P as they made g3 take unwise decision i am unable to move on further nikki

I m ean i use to tell you n charmi to stop getting emotional but this i don't know i cant write i am so gald that i am confined in secure parents place n no one nothing bad can touch us thanks to our almighty for giving us such a blessed life

Sorry but i cant continue dear you really made me😡

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