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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saf24

Nikki this was simply fantastic. You did great justice to the scene with all the details and the emotions involvled. As I reader I could feel the pain and angish Aarti must have gone through being abused and on top of that having parents who thought it was her fault. I was so glad that Gayatri stood by her side, showering her with her care and comfort even though her son was at fault. Prashant is so low though and Amma even though she knows what he did was wrong, she still supports him and his ways. Loved every bit of the update and can't wait to see what is in store next.

Saf nowadays it's taking me longer time to update because I'm so much into detailing. And I don't get satisfaction till I write them to my liking.
I'm happy that I was able to express Aarti's feelings through my words. But for such scenes, it's not easy for me to find and write exact words that'll do justice to the scene.
Aarti's parents are gender biased, social status hungry people. They're least bothered about Aarti and her feelings. It was good that Aarti and Dr. Kiran were there for her, else who knows what could've happened.
Ammaji, well the less said about her the better.

Thanks Saf for loving and supporting MTB ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Alamelu

Loved the two parts. Omg. What kind of people are sthe dubeys. They ruined artis life and yashs. And Ammaji. Grrr and same for Prashant. Grrr

So they forced yash and arti to get married and continue this torture

Waiting eagerly

Thanks Alamelu
Dubey'a are the kind who cannot be termed as People. They're worst than wild animals. You are right they ruined Aarti's life along with Yash's. They are the kinds who helped Prashant over their own daughter, by forcing Aarti to marry that beast. 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Tanvi.narula

Wonderfully written update Nikki Di ... 👏
arti suffered so much.. 😭 nd her own mother behaved so rudely.. Nd morover instead of supporting her she started blaming her.. U know one of my friend has such orthodox parents.. Nd reading ur update nd shobha's behaviour just reminded me of her. She's now not living wid her parents nd is staying on her own... I just feel pity on such parents thinking... They r in real sense so backward that they fail to see n appreciate the gem they have recieved from god in form of a daughter... Nd now ny hate for Ammaji hav increased to a new level.. 😡 that saying is so true " women's biggest enimy is women itself" nd Prashant.. 😡 it's good he died or else I wud have taken an avatar in ur ff nd wud have killed him wid my bare hands.. 😡
I feel so proud of gayatri she supported Arti when her own parents left her on her own..
nd SP did not cared for his wife.. S father s son...
Eagerly waiting to read further... 😊


Thanks Tanvi
The sad part is they're not even ready to listen to what their daughter have to say, much lessen and understand her pain. The Dubey's were like this all their life.
I'm so sorry to read about your friend. But I'm proud also that she took a stand against her own parents and is now living independently. 👏. I'd say that it's her parents loss for losing a precious gift from God.
I wish I could show Aarti like this, but then there'd be no MTB.
Tanvi I strongly believe that sometimes women becomes the reason for another woman's ruin.

Tanvi you are not alone in bringing Prashant back from the dead and to kill him again 😡

SP's behavior will also come into light in the next chapter. So you save some anger for that.

Will try my best or update soon 😛



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: g.vani

Thank u very much for the pm

You're welcome 😊

Originally posted by: Naheeda

Nice Update
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Thanks Naheeda for reading and writing. 😊


Thanks Pretty 😊
Edited by lovely_nikki - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: caller123

Oh Nikki This was a lovely update. You have touched so many things a girl going through in life. Yes for some parents girl child is always a thorn. Good Aarthi had only a sister. If she had a brother it would have been a worst in this situation. Shobha and Dubey without helping and without thinking in what situation aarthi is in blaming Aarthi😡😡😡. But there are parents like this in the world. Whatever mistakes happens girl is always wrong. We cannot change them but with this you will be able to change this thoughts of who ever reads this plus all the readers who read your FF will take a step to think a girl as a blessing and to think her as a human being.

I hate this when women comes against women. Aarthi became victims of two women Shobha and Ammaji. Wonder being a woman why can't they understand a nother woman. I think some women doesnot understand another woman unless they go through such a situation.

I hate Shobha's words which she said to Aarthi about Yash. Shobha is wrong and will be proved wrong by Yash. I wish every girl should get a person like yash as their husbands. Specially the girls who have gone through similar tortures like this from their family.Who been victims of favorism. I think Aarthi must have had suffered a lot as she has named as a bad omen by parents while her sister is not.

I tribute to all the girls who is suffering like this because of their parents and society. They are not bad omens but parents thought has made them like that.
Please make Dubeys undestand value of Aarthi some day and they should regret for what they did to Aarthi.!😡
As you told Aarthi has Yash and G3 with her but the girls who doesn't have any one on their side I feel really bad for them.
But ammaji should suffer hope Yash give her a reality check soon.
See the difference of Yash and Dueys. He loves Palak who is not his and a girl.
Dubeys 😡😡😡 They hate their blood because she is a girl.
Nikki if you don't mind I'll tell you. Even some buys suffer like this. Parents love younger child or elder child most leaving one child behind. Yh they speak ill of the child they love less and good of the child they love more. It's happening in the world. I have seen such situations. Sometimes girl being a girl and not being a favorite suffer a lot. Some parents have forgotten that they only choose to give birth to a child and the child didn't choose life. Being a girl or a boy is not their fault it's way the God has made them. Why can't they see them as a gift of God and thank God and love the children. I don't know the reason behind it. But only can say because of parents stupid thoughts children suffer.
I know your story is about girls who suffers but I just shared it dear! Sorry if it's not related to your story.
About G3 I simply love her for understanding though she has boys she understands Aarthi more than her mother. I love her Nikki! Wish all the girls could get mothers like her and mother in laws like her. I know it would happen in only dreams.
I think something drastic must have happened her to prevent telling to Yash and SP about the incident. I like the way she didn't take Prashanth's side. This Ammaji is the reason for Prashanth's behavior.
This is the understanding all the girls are craving for and many of them don't get.

I salute you Nikki for taking such a step to open the eyes of others. Keep it. We'll always be with you .👏
This reality check is much needed in the society. It doesn't have a specific country or anything. It just happened. Sometimes it happened unknowingly. Sometimes knowingly.
Great work Nikki! Carry on! We are with you!🤗
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Kate actually it's really hard to imagine what a girl really goes through something this traumatic. Here Aarti don't remember anything, but what those girls goes through when they were very much conscious during the sordid most traumatic experience in their life 🤢
God only knows what would've happened if Aarti had a brother. Maybe he'd turned out to be like Prashant. And imagine having such parents as Dubey's and then on top of that an equally abusive brother. 😕

I don't know Kate wether my story will help anyone or not, but I'll feel better that at least I wrote something like this in my life. Being a girl myself, I know and understand how sometimes it becomes difficult for us to face certain situations in life.
We are lucky that we don't have a mother like Shobha and a father like Dubey. And you are so right Aarti indeed became a victim of two women, Shobha and Ammaji. And men like Prashant and Dubey.

But luckily she found Gayatri and then later Dr. Kiran. 👏

Shobha will be proved wrong by Yash, but isn't it too late for that, cause Dubey's have no relation with Aarti now. But Aarti will now be least bothered with her so called parents.

And Kate please don't say worry for sharing your POV on boys also suffering by their parents, these things really happens and there's nothing wrong in sharing something like this, when the topic is about domestic abuse, be it on a boy or a girl.
An abuse is a abuse. 🥱
Kate even I wish that every girl gets a mother or MIL like Gayatri. 👏

Love you Kate for loving MTB, and supporting MTB and me also. ❤️


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Gkathria

Hey Nikki!
I've been really busy these days, so I'm really sorry that I couldn't comment properly on your previous special not and other posts. Simply put I have to say that I really loved this update, your writing as usual is AMAZING!!!

Hey Gimmie.
It's ok dear that you are busy and don't get time. Though I wait for your input on the update, but I understand completely.
But still you took time out to read and comment on the update, means so much to me. Take care dear ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 1:
uff...very long update..but shobha ma is totally opposite to the real punarvivah..but that what u portrayed and thats why aarti is close to gayatri even after prashant's death..gayatri's understanding nature towards aarti and the way she put clothes on aarti when shobha was only standing and accusing aarti was really a motherly love and care towards aarti.🤗
hating prashant and ammaji😡...the way prashant put all blame on aarti and showing that he is very innocent..huh🤢
aarti loves yash and that was clear wid the sentence when she said "my yash is there for me". so sad for aarti that after loving so much to yash she had to hurt him after his return from US.😭😭😭
PART 2:
why dis society is male dominating??? SP doesnot care about gayatri's feeling who is his wife and from 30 years. also dubey and shobha..this is only fiction story but in real life also many or mostly men thinks it as a pride to dominate over their wives.😡
coming to the story..
to be frank..i felt boring about Dr. kiran's history😆😉, and i also know that u like to write in detail..so i adjusted it😛😃...
cruel ammaji and her lalla..mere bhagwan ki kasam..kuyein mein doob ke marr jaaye..😈 i m sure ammaji ne prashant ko aarti se shaadi karne ka hi suggestion diya hoga..and prashant is agreed for saving himself..as he hates yash and for dem aarti,thats why he used to torture after marriage also..
missing yashji...
par abhi tak samajh nahi aaya akash ke baare mei

i have made so many predictions also...will w8 for next update so that my questions will get their answer 😉

now waiting for all truth come out and love between yash and aarti again...
Edited by gurikafan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki


Kate actually it's really hard to imagine what a girl really goes through something this traumatic. Here Aarti don't remember anything, but what those girls goes through when they were very much conscious during the sordid most traumatic experience in their life 🤢
God only knows what would've happened if Aarti had a brother. Maybe he'd turned out to be like Prashant. And imagine having such parents as Dubey's and then on top of that an equally abusive brother. 😕

I don't know Kate wether my story will help anyone or not, but I'll feel better that at least I wrote something like this in my life. Being a girl myself, I know and understand how sometimes it becomes difficult for us to face certain situations in life.
We are lucky that we don't have a mother like Shobha and a father like Dubey. And you are so right Aarti indeed became a victim of two women, Shobha and Ammaji. And men like Prashant and Dubey.

But luckily she found Gayatri and then later Dr. Kiran. 👏

Shobha will be proved wrong by Yash, but isn't it too late for that, cause Dubey's have no relation with Aarti now. But Aarti will now be least bothered with her so called parents.

And Kate please don't say worry for sharing your POV on boys also suffering by their parents, these things really happens and there's nothing wrong in sharing something like this, when the topic is about domestic abuse, be it on a boy or a girl.
An abuse is a abuse. 🥱
Kate even I wish that every girl gets a mother or MIL like Gayatri. 👏

Love you Kate for loving MTB, and supporting MTB and me also. ❤️


Love you too dear for giving us this wonderful story.❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
i m shocked with shobha😡😡 ,dubey😡😡 and ammaji's behaviour with aarti.😡😡😡
prashant😡.
very ver4y nicely written👏👏👏.
Edited by pvejani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Any writer who decides to write FF/ OS should follow the vision already set and not ask too many question to get too many answers which leads to confusion to already confused state of mind. Commenting on the outcome of your vision is our job but to interfere and get your story thru our vision is wrong and at the same time comments by viewers on any chapters - good or bad should be accepted with grace without arguments 'cause this leads to imporvement ( which U do..)

The main problem with U Nikki is u want everyone to be satisfied which is not possible - always be happy with the maximum than minimum and u will see urself in a less confused state...stop asking and continue your vision and u will see the result.

To be honest - am always away from cruel handling track - probably u may see my reserved comments on ur future track but I will definately not leave midway and force my vision on you.

Nikki - so far - u r doing exceedingly well - don't ask for more - as I don't want to spoil u with my expression of good words on u - so dear cheer up and stop questioning and concentrate on future update...with best wishes and take care dear !

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