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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Abie10

Nikki you're awesome ⭐️⭐️ faboulous stuff!👏👏👏

First of all..I just wanna give Aarti a very tight hug the poor thing is just drained and totally confuse.😕😭 And I want to kill shobha and Dubey😡 is this how they treat their daughter after been raped? Can't believe they are Aarti's parents as they should understand what their daughter is capable of doing. How could they think she'll do such abominal act?😲😡 They are so blind in their gender bias that they are acting stupid! I mean was it her fault to be born a girl..are these two for real?!😡

My respect for Gayatri is increasing ten folds with each update and this was just the height👏👏 she did what I expected of Shobha of a normal situation how she should have stood and defend her daughter, Gayatri did the same. She understood the pain the girl must be going through and from the little time she spent with Aarti she knew she can't do such lowly deed. The best quality of a good mother is that who does not try to cover up the bad habit of her child but find solution to it and that's what she did.⭐️👏 Be the pillar for that poor girl who was in pain as that jerk forced himself on her so she's bruised.😭

Amma and her Lalla!🤬 He pretend not knowing anything and as usual his Amma supports him.😡😡 at least Amma showed a womenly side by telling him he did bad to an innocent girl. But am wondering what she must have advise him because it can only be their gain.

Gayatri is also in dilemma and shattered, needs a shoulder to cry on and speak her heart but SP is not their and due the her rambling on phone he thought it was nothing serious but he should have at least given her a chance.

Waiting to see how docter Kiran helps Aarti.As always another cliff as am now pondering on what Shobha must have said on the phone.😡😆

To your spl note, am glad you still sticking to your original vision of the story as I always tell you, don't change it as only the writter knows the present and future of her story in mind so a little change of what you visualized can stuck you in the end. So keep it as yuo've planned.😃 You rock!🤗

Charmi, my editor😆 keep it up!👍🏼


Abie I cry every time I write such emotional updates. 😭. I want to be so there for Aarti, but I'm glad that at least Gayatri is there as her life support. 👏 ⭐️
Dubey's well don't know what to say. They think that if this whole mess comes out open in the public their reputation will be ruined and so they're blaming Aarti and treating her like dirt 😡

Gayatri is one lady that even I love and respect. To fight for Aarti she'll go to any extent and she'll go against anyone, be it Ammaji or her own husband. ⭐️
Ammaji knows what Prashant did was wrong, but her blind love for her lalla, overpowered her thinking capability to distinguish between right and wrong. So she suggested a plan to save her lalla. 😡

Abie Gayatri also need a shoulder to cry, but her husband is also not listening to her. And even Yash is not there with her 😭

Sorry for another cliffhanger ending, what to do I love it 😆
And thanks regarding the special note. Love you sweety ❤️


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago




Originally posted by: lovely_nikki


Abie I cry every time I write such emotional updates. 😭. I want to be so there for Aarti, but I'm glad that at least Gayatri is there as her life support. 👏 ⭐️
Dubey's well don't know what to say. They think that if this whole mess comes out open in the public their reputation will be ruined and so they're blaming Aarti and treating her like dirt 😡

Gayatri is one lady that even I love and respect. To fight for Aarti she'll go to any extent and she'll go against anyone, be it Ammaji or her own husband. ⭐️
Ammaji knows what Prashant did was wrong, but her blind love for her lalla, overpowered her thinking capability to distinguish between right and wrong. So she suggested a plan to save her lalla. 😡

Abie Gayatri also need a shoulder to cry, but her husband is also not listening to her. And even Yash is not there with her 😭

Sorry for another cliffhanger ending, what to do I love it 😆
And thanks regarding the special note. Love you sweety ❤️


Ahh, can understand what you must have gone through writing them😭 Thank you for making Gayatri a pillar for Aarti one can't imagine what the situation would have been had none supported her!

They Dubey's are just orthodox and live in their own crazy world.😡Amma and her Lalla are just worst amongst human beings!😡😡

Love you back darling!❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
i love your FF 👏i am waiting your next updat
😊 update soon love you and all the best dont make us wait the next update and keep in your story dont change any think we are with



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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all wanna confess something Nikki.I have read your update yesterday morning after getting up from bed and the whole day was sad coz of the impact of MTB.But I refrained myself from commenting then coz I needed sometime to to think properly as I was also very emotional after reading this part.
So finally the truth is coming out...not only truth but ugly truth that ruined Arti's life ..her dream...
Shova is the most disgusting character even more than Amma ji.Even after watching her own daughter in such condition ...to see her sufferings and pain she reacted in such a way..she accused her for this mess...started abusing her verbally...sorry to say but she really failed to be called a mother.
Dont want to say anything about Dubey coz though he is wrong but unfortunately in every sphere of life we meet such type of people.He is nothing but the representative of male dominating society who considers themselves as the controller of women's fate.He said that a man has all the right to do what he wants but I was sad coz even in this century we get to hear this very often hear and there.
For me the soul of the first part was the following lines.
Aarti who was quite till now, screamed loudly " No, I Won't Marry him. I won't Marry the guy who ruined my life. I know that my Yash will marry me. He'll marry me despite knowing everything"
For the very first time we got the chance to witness Arti's emotion ..her feelings for Yash.When she said "My Yash" my heart just jumped coz I was dying to see this type of emotion ..verbal acceptance of her for Yash and finally you gave it.This scene was a wow for me...

But the cruel words of Shova killed all her hopes and I just felt crying with her.
But in the whole part the way G3 supported Arti was very good.

Part two
In this part what amazed me the most was the sentences Amma ji spoke.For a moment I thought that it's not Amma ji .It's someone else who was talking so sincerely but the very next moment I found myself wrong coz even after knowing the truth she decided to help her laal...not only that she was planning to save him...Ammaji go to hell.
Dr Kurian's portion was very well written nikki.
I just wish SP would listen to G3 and stopped the the following disaster to be happened.
The phone cal scene was very alarming for me.Even I got scared while reading that part coz I knew it will change the fate of Arti and bring only pain for her...
Nikki people come here to enjoy and even I do the same.But I really admire you coz through your FF you have not only entertained us but have given a very strong social message also for which you deserves a standing ovation dear.Really Hats Off to you Nikki. 👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
commented on page 49 di😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nikki first of all its your story ,your imagination so u decide how u want to take this forward dear,,,trust u completely
Great updates dear👏
Poor Aarti,,,her parents are😡😡,,what to say about them ,,they cant even see her daughter's pain still blaming her without knowing the truth😭
Shoba,,,what a woman she is ,,how can she hate her own daughter

G3 ,,,i just loved her character ,,,wow the way she understand her pain ,,,even her own son is the culprit but still she stood for Aarti ,,great ⭐️
SP ,,,he is true businessman ,,cant see anything beyond that not even his wife phone call😔

Ammaji n Prashant ,,oh God what to say about them ,,,😡😡😡
Nikki just loved the part when Aarti screamed that Yash will accept her depite of all this ,,,this is for the very first time we got to know how much Aarti trusted Yash n his love for her ,,even they had hardly met,,,
Hope G3 n Dr Kiran will help Aarti to recover

waiting for next updates nikki,,,pls continue soon
Thanx for the pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update...eagerly waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow another amazing update Nikki I can see how much time you take and thought you take in putting into this story as and this is appciated👏
This part was put in the way of showing us aarti's condition and prashant way of lieing to get away as always.Shoba and Dubey disgust me and well ammaji as normal hides for her loving grandson.Oops I nearly forget to say wow only gayatri is the only one that have understanding for aarti
Anyways loved it waiting on next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update dear👏👏Poor Aarthi made me😭😭😭I hate Dubeys..they are very discusting people😡😡that Prasant and Ammaji😡😡🤬 I love G3 to understood the pain of Aarthi and to stand the pillar for that poor Aarthi⭐️❤️Specially for you don't change the storyline please to keep it as u have planned😳Eagerly waiing for the next update..continue soon dear😃 QUOTE]
Thanks Jayu.
Aarti will make you cry even more in the next update 😭. There are no words in the dictionary for people like Dubey's 😡

And also no words to praise for people like Gayatri 👏 ⭐️

No I'm Not changing the storyline of MTB 😛

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