Res so finely i came here to unreserve my post👏 sorry for delay what to do busy in other stuff and need a pc to type all my feelings even i simply say trogh moby that ur update was awesome fabolus etc etc but im not satisfied nd it not sufficient from my part so...🥱 if i type in my mobi my fingers got puntures so dont want to take a risk😉😉 becoz i want to reserve my post place in your next update thats why always my comment delays but aftr seeing my post defnitly u cheers i know is it im correct nikki???🤗
coming to update of MTB as ususual very strong, concerned, faboulus, awesome oh god why im typing only that words(fabolus,awesome) dnt know y after reading it those words are coming out from my finger by keypad its not my fault its you always makes same magic by ur taking over on story⭐️
charcts:g3 charcter fantastic through out very genuine, 👏lovely,👏 understanding 👏at first she is women so knows women struggle and very well known abt prasnth so she stood up to arti side consoled her like more than her mother⭐️ protected her so nice of her⭐️ and also want to share entire thing to sp and yash to make justice to arti really every women should like her⭐️
shoba, duby-really pathetic😡 they are very self baised people they doesnt see ther daughter trouble instead accused her😭😭 so disgusted people😡 really feel worry by having this type of people as parents in arti condition😭😭 who to support console her really are more tourturing her😡
ammaji:fan of her lalla😲 she knows everythig and always taunts arti for p death😡 in arti conditn even arti has the right to kill p on spot its no crime but this lady always accuses her i think p marris arti by her suggestin only but one instinct she also feel some time for a women who under the horrible condition then as usual supports her lalla😡
this parts are filler parts to future which needed⭐️⭐️⭐️
no yash scenes its ok hope upcoming will contain it
overall very well written my side no complaints for this nd complimentes only⭐️
one questn? you mentiond arti sister swathi i think her char didnt mentind in updates so far want to know her side presntatn to her sis wat relation is it fair or like her parents ill treats or frindly???
coming to contunation of your update from my side😉
dont change any scene, condition, emotion which you fixed already!!!
dont bother first some of them told it was draggy boring at all!!!
first fix your own judgement which required for ur update and who edits your parts follow as usual!!!
in this 20 updates i didnt get bored any where yes first felt to not read as arti betryed yash nd marries his bro p after starting read feel amazed👏 what a content it is till now i dont stick to any update like this but now it made my daily work to check for next update of MTB see the magic if it really draggy how we stick like this😉👏
my pov dnt feel bad for my examples😉
⭐️-if soliving a math prob mentioning of every steps helps who are poor in solving and understanding somebody feels it was waste of space like that
⭐️-ending of tiny story like not coming to sudden conclusions how we know actual mean of story in this story⭐️
⭐️⭐️-every thing is interconneted like arti loves very much yash she said after p attack to her mother and hurts after her words like betrying him so she marries p without interfering yash life👏👏
⭐️⭐️-in pv with yash also she didnt accepted first concern his future after watching him other girl akashi or other name sorry i cant remember😉 she requested her to marry him for his future and reqest her for taking care of palak also by seen her bonding ⭐️👏
⭐️⭐️arti didnt want her parents to take a part in her pv with yash becozz of their nature they does not allow it nd she palak suffers alot becoz palak also girl child not a boy so they dont concern her👏👏⭐️
⭐️yyash is the only person to give life to palak so she marry him⭐️
so...
this horrible incident happend 2years back dnt know between them after that so it takes naturally length in story ther burdens fears to hide infront of every one in family now the time arrives to open up all so g3 was the first person was started her pov during this period it justifies👏👏 and after that the main victim of all this evilness might open infront of all her life what the hell😡 she went throuh during this period 👏
story progressing is very promising aftr g3 part aksh part and arti pov are going to reveal it takes time dnt worry we wait😭😭
this is not romantic thriller like story it is a story revolving a girl who sufferd alot and ended with her soulmate so it have emotin in its peak the mini details, feelings, and emotional situations are help to essence the story so keep continue like as usual👏👏
my request is as you already know by my above comment plzzz continue😉 make MTB in its yours (nikki)style dnt bother anything just continue regular readers dnt dissapointe by this but dnt wait us long 3weeks atleast try to give one update weekly if possible as per your conditions👍🏼
at first i prepare alot to say my feelings trough this comment but ends like little one😉 in my pov dnt mistake me next time i will make huge like your update 👏oh sorry pvians dnt through any thing on me😳😉 for long posts🤗
thanks for bearing and waitin for my cmnt (i think)😉 i hope it will encoreges you at a small tiny way (i think) 😉
have a nice time nikki and praying waitin for your BOY, YAMR and our heart favourite MTB updates
Edited by vinnas - 12 years ago
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