OS ' Because Of You'. Chapter 7 & epilogue, page 77

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: jikky_84
Lovely update Nikki 😃

So you are building up for the next phase...

how good it would have been if CVs really showed how Yash's anger affects Arati and also Arati needs to be more careful in doing things. But then they spoiled it.

Looking forward to see your version.

I would like you to show the faults from both the sides, Yash's immediate reactions and anger and Arati's carelessness in doing things which in a way lead to the kidnapping.

Asha I so wanted to see Yash repenting on his mistakes, but CVs never showed us anything in this. So I'll try my best to work in this 😊

And I'll try to show Aarti's reaction on Yash's accusations and also on her carelessness 😊

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: Tanvi.narula
Woww.. Luvly update.. Very well written..👏.👍🏼 poor aarti..😭..this time i truly want her 2 not forgive yash easily...n do sumthing of this wichita..😡 n thanx 4 d pm..😃 really luking 4ward 4 further updates..😃

Thanks Tanvi 😊

Yes I always felt bad for Aarti post Mumbai track 😭. But to some extent they both were responsible for their actions and that's what they never showed us in PV 😡

And regarding Wichita 😡

Updates will come next week 😊

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ns1970

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Wow Nikki two updates in one day I'm so excited

Awesome start as always ishita makes aarti look bad but I can't wait when yash realize how wrong he is about ishita

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: kratzyfan
Nikki,a much waited episode is finally up😃...

"So here also Yash will do the same, but this time he'll bear the consequences for his actions later"---i like this sentence a lot becoz he didn't even apologize for his actions😡 in pv...so here i wish i could see...

" See Aarti what I did to you. You were so proud of yourself that My Yash will never mistrust you. But look as soon as you lost his Aayu, his own flesh and blood, he jerked away from you. And I promise you that very soon he'll throw you out of his life forever and then no one will come in between me and my Yash."----these lines really remembered me of that witchita again😡😈...

i think u are compltely indulged in every character when u r writing their dialogues which is a sign of a very good writer👏👏

thanks for the pm🤗

This is for you Anu 🤗

Anu finally you got a reason to comment ( I know that MTB is right now still confusing for all of you and that's why most of you don't have words to comment and I understand )

And what we didn't saw in PV in the end, I'll try my best to show it here 😳

Ishita's face was looming in front of me when I was writing those scenes 😡

You are right I loved PV so much that's why I can write on each and every character so easily, well except for Wichita 😲 😆

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alekhika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Fab start of os,updt soon.
Waiting.

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: Surish

Thanks Surish for such a beautiful gift 😊

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR
Superb part, Nikki di ! 👏👏

Nothing much to say actually because many scenes were similar to PV ! Loved the addition of dialogues.. Its added up the emotions and tense in the story ! 😛 OMG.. Ishita is in my mind again ! 😡😡

But I wanna see Yash bearing the consequences of his actions ! 😛 Much awaiting one !

Good one and Thanks for the PM ! 😃

Thanks IsYa 😊

Actually I took those scenes for the future build up of the track. As these scenes are very important for the upcoming chapters.

But from next chapter 80-90% of the scenes will be mine only 😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: shalini28
wow di great start😳
Ishita dont want to repeat gaalis for her😆
waiting for next part di😳

Thanks Shalu.

And please don't waste your precious GAALI's on Wichita she's not even worth for that 😆

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: ns1970
Wow Nikki two updates in one day I'm so excited
Awesome start as always ishita makes aarti look bad but I can't wait when yash realize how wrong he is about ishita

Well I wanted to save myself from all the hard work of sending so many PMs 😕 that's why I wrote two updates and send only one PM 😉 😎

And yes Ishita always made Aarti look bad, and Yash will also believe her for a while now 😡 😭