The Mumbai Aftermath -An Aarya FF (Completd pg 22) - Page 7

Originally posted by: chitsri65

Actually tsheni...I feel the smoother approach towards lie was good and even more good was the calm acceptance of lie...or shall I say Yash finding out the reason behind Arti's indifference and outburst. This flow of story is more natural and am starting to like it...but for criticism factor...u have to wait...till I get ...how u are going to shape 'Arti's' indifference...and her approach towards Yash and yes ...reasoning too!...love your OS more simply is your quicker approach towards update and the viewers flow of emotions continuity...waiting for your next update...my 👏 to u.

Originally posted by: pankhudi_TiaRa

I absolutely loved the update 😳😳

Yash-shobha ma convo was much needed and loved it too😳

Poor aarti😭😭 waiting for yash-aman convo😳😳

i love lengthy parts ..more detail more interesting to read😃😉

About the groupbie thing i saw your post number its 179 when you'll reach 200 you'll become senior member and then this 20 posts a day limitation will over and you'll be able to replay everyone's comment just one day to go don't apologies 😳😳

Eagerly waiting for update 😳😳

Originally posted by: lulujjj

superb write up loved the confrontation between shoba ma and yash waiting for next part.do continue soon.

Originally posted by: Zetter

Fabulous update Dear 👏 ❤️

Aww poor AarYa waiting 😔 😭

Loved the convo between Shobha and Yash can't wait for the one between Yash and Aman 😉

Originally posted by: palbhar

Please do not apologise about the length...you have explained Aarti's anguish through Shobhama so well...this is something we all wanted Yash to hear and to see his reaction...hat Aarti went through a traumatic 1st marriage and that's why his post-Mumbai anger so painful for her!!!

Loved it!!!!

Originally posted by: roserosey

😊😊awesome update
this confrontation b/n yash and shoba ma was needed
i cant wait for yash and aman talk
eagerly waiting what yash says to aarthi after this


continue soon
waiting
length of the update is good

Originally posted by: sb1410

another fab update, love the conversation between yash and shobha ma

you dealt with aarti past great [love marriage that quickly turned into a nightmare] now yash has a better understanding about aarti reaction towards him, looking foward to his conversation with aman hopefully this will help his understanding of his wife

eagerly awaiting the next chapter 👏

Originally posted by: anu93

Amazing part dear👏

I liked the way u showd Yash is curious to know the real reason behind Aarti's frustration and anger👍🏼

Feeling bad for Aarti😭😭 She had to suffer so much 😭

I really loved Shobha Ma Yash Convo👍🏼 Shobha Ma revealed the truth at right time and Yash instead on getting angry that she hide this truth was worried and sad for his Aarti ji😊 True LOVE😳

Waiting for Aman Yash convo

My Suggestion😳 - At some point plz show Aarti's past like how she became such a good person coz her parents died when she was 5 so who inculcated good values in her...Like Yash curious to know abt Aarti's childhood...I hope u understood what I mean

I always felt in PV 1 they should have shown Aarti's past but they never did...

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Wow! It's superb. Aarti words shocked Yash that she hate him. Yash goes to Shobha ma to know the real reason behind Aarti's behavior. He got to know that she is a divorcee, and he is not angry for that. He feels sad about what Aarti had to suffer in the past. He just wanted his Aarti back the way she was. But yet, Shobha Ma didn't disclose about Aarti's pregnancy to him.

Waiting for the next update. Pls. PM me if you can when you update.

Originally posted by: ALEHA2011

WOW what a awesome update really loved it do continue soon really happy that Yash gets to know about Aarti's unhappy marriage.