The Mumbai Aftermath -An Aarya FF (Completd pg 22)

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Vishva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Gosh

I love this a lot

Pls continue soon...

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Aisyah Abdul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Awesome update dear !! 👏👏

I so loved the conversation between Shobha ma and Yash !! 😃 Although somewhere is tensed, I'm glad Yash was calm.. 😊

Update soon! 😉

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rachna1970

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Awesome ,,awesome update yaar

Pls continue soon n pm me na if possible

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RIYA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

hey dear my like button is not working

i read both updates n i must say i love teh way you portay aarti hurt n make yash realize the depth of getting hatred from the person you love n shobha maa n yash talk really she is an acnhor for both drowning hearts

despite less aarya i like it as this is coming as great story of its own as yash also ffles the pain of aarti when P left her

really nice one love it dear thanks a lot for writing it yuou refresh aarya memoris n also another apect showcase in what if this happen scenarion...👏

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tleshni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: roserosey
😊😊
once again i went through ur os
i m literally crying
really awesome

my suggestion pls dont end this so soon
i always wanted to see a lot after mubai aftermath in pv1 but sad we couldnt get it
but give us a chance to go through all those things in ur short story
hope u consider it

👏👏👏
waiting
update soon

U cried??😲..oh no..im sorry..well about the ending..actually this is my first ff..so i even now Im having some problems with continuing it...Im scared that I wont be able to keep up with the characterisation and pace of the story..so I might end it with the next 2-3 updates...Im not sure...thanks alot for ur encouragement😃

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tleshni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: princess121993
awesome awesome awesome
wow wow..
please yaar update soon
i seriously cannot wait

Thanks soo mch princess...😳

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tleshni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: swaggerchick16
gosh i'm loving ur take on this whole after mumbai thing wish they wud've done it ur way their way was good too but ur way is better

Thanks alot..😃...yeah me too wish it was done this way..I think storywise it would be more interesting..but looking at how indian serial's female leads are potrayed..we can never expect a lead who actually defends and sticks up for herself...😆

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tleshni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: yashuaarthi
Gosh
I love this a lot
Pls continue soon...

Thanks alot.. 😳

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tleshni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR
Awesome update dear !! 👏👏

I so loved the conversation between Shobha ma and Yash !! 😃 Although somewhere is tensed, I'm glad Yash was calm.. 😊

Update soon! 😉

yes thanks Isya...Yeah I think since Yash have not met and befriended Prashant,so the lie was not that impactful for him and besides he is more shocked to know that all this while,what he thought of Aarti's past was wrong..