The Mumbai Aftermath -An Aarya FF (Completd pg 22) - Page 18

Originally posted by: alekhika20

Lovely part.

Originally posted by: roserosey

😳😳😳PERFECT ENDING THE ENDING FOR THIS STORY COULDNOT GET BETTER THAN THIS U SHOWED EVERYTHING LOVELY FAMILY MOMENTS WITH THE KIDS AND YASH ADMIRING AARTHI FINALLY YASH LOVE CONFESSION WHAT WE R EAGERLY WAITING FOR AND ROMANCE WAS REALLY PERFECT NOW I CANT SAY MORE THAN THIS... U R TRULY AN AWESOME WRITER I ALWAYS WISH U ALL THE BEST U HAD DONE A FAB JOB I WISH IF U CAN COME UP WITH ANOTHER STORY OF AARYA ... THIS IS COMPLETE AARYALICIOUS UPDATE FULL OF LOVE AND ROMANCE ... FAB JOB THANKS FOR GIVING THIS WONDERFUL MEMORY OF AARYA👏

Originally posted by: caller123

Very nice update.👏👏Sad to hear it's the last part😭 Please come up with more stories whenever you have time as you are good writer. Looking forward to read more stories of you!🤗

Originally posted by: Euphoria.

Thank you so much for writing this story! I had always wanted to see a different sort of reaction from Yash after the boxing match. Although his actions made up for whatever he had done once they were back from Mumbai, I wanted him to verbally apologize to Aarti for what he had put her through. This was probably the best interpretation of the scenario I had in mind as well. I loved every single part of this story - right from Aarti's anger and refusal to forgive Yash so easily, to Yash's conversation with Shobha ma and Aman (Darn it, I miss this guy! Wish he was there for a little longer in the show itself). I loved how you showed that Yash did have feelings for Aarti, not because she was pregnant, but because he really did love her and how Aarti did almost catch on the little hints that he gave. Wonderfully written, from start till the end. Hope to see more stories from you in the future. ❤️

Originally posted by: swaggerchick16

loved this n trust me your romance scene was not too explicit trust me i've read more explicit than this n some still haunt me lol 😆 but this was awesome just loved how yash professed his love 4 her 😊

Originally posted by: sb1410

Wow!!!!dam good!!!!hot!!! Awesome!!!! Love it this had everything that the show did not, a great ending, thanks for sharing your SS ⭐️

Originally posted by: Yaarti.mini

BLUSH BLUSH BLUSH !! OMG going to read this over and over aha

Originally posted by: palbhar

So beautifully written!!!! You have done a great job...loved the way Yash decided to tell Aarti his feelings when he realized she had got it wrong!!!! An open communication is always the best!!

Loved their passionate lovemaking... nothing crude about it...it was more like them coming home!!

You are a talented writer... please do write more stories!!!