The Mumbai Aftermath -An Aarya FF (Completd pg 22)

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roserosey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

😳😳😳PERFECT ENDING THE ENDING FOR THIS STORY COULDNOT GET BETTER THAN THIS U SHOWED EVERYTHING LOVELY FAMILY MOMENTS WITH THE KIDS AND YASH ADMIRING AARTHI FINALLY YASH LOVE CONFESSION WHAT WE R EAGERLY WAITING FOR AND ROMANCE WAS REALLY PERFECT NOW I CANT SAY MORE THAN THIS... U R TRULY AN AWESOME WRITER I ALWAYS WISH U ALL THE BEST U HAD DONE A FAB JOB I WISH IF U CAN COME UP WITH ANOTHER STORY OF AARYA ... THIS IS COMPLETE AARYALICIOUS UPDATE FULL OF LOVE AND ROMANCE ... FAB JOB THANKS FOR GIVING THIS WONDERFUL MEMORY OF AARYA👏

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caller123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Very nice update.👏👏Sad to hear it's the last part😭 Please come up with more stories whenever you have time as you are good writer. Looking forward to read more stories of you!🤗

Edited by caller123 - 12 years ago

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Euphoria.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Thank you so much for writing this story! I had always wanted to see a different sort of reaction from Yash after the boxing match. Although his actions made up for whatever he had done once they were back from Mumbai, I wanted him to verbally apologize to Aarti for what he had put her through. This was probably the best interpretation of the scenario I had in mind as well. I loved every single part of this story - right from Aarti's anger and refusal to forgive Yash so easily, to Yash's conversation with Shobha ma and Aman (Darn it, I miss this guy! Wish he was there for a little longer in the show itself). I loved how you showed that Yash did have feelings for Aarti, not because she was pregnant, but because he really did love her and how Aarti did almost catch on the little hints that he gave. Wonderfully written, from start till the end. Hope to see more stories from you in the future. ❤️

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Kesha_H.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

loved this n trust me your romance scene was not too explicit trust me i've read more explicit than this n some still haunt me lol 😆 but this was awesome just loved how yash professed his love 4 her 😊

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Zetter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

A wonderful ending to a very awesome story Dear 👏 😳...Thank you for sharing with us, you did an incredible job 🤗

I just loved how Yash couldn't take it anymore and just told Aarti how he felt and the way he was yearning for her was 😳 😳 ❤️

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Wow!!!!dam good!!!!hot!!! Awesome!!!! Love it this had everything that the show did not, a great ending, thanks for sharing your SS ⭐️

Edited by sb1410 - 12 years ago

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Jaymini Mistry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

BLUSH BLUSH BLUSH !! OMG going to read this over and over aha

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palbhar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

So beautifully written!!!! You have done a great job...loved the way Yash decided to tell Aarti his feelings when he realized she had got it wrong!!!! An open communication is always the best!!

Loved their passionate lovemaking... nothing crude about it...it was more like them coming home!!

You are a talented writer... please do write more stories!!!

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Abie10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#169

Thanks a lot dear, this is really very beautifully written from start to end. You've penned all that I wanted to see between Aarya post Mumbai.

Hope to see you with another writeup soon.