Samarpan (An FF) Part 25 (Thread 2/Page 133) - Page 6

Originally posted by: cynthiagem

Oh good, a second thread. That means we are still a long way off from ending the story. Indu you can go on and on and on ...

I love the way Yash was processing his past experiences and doubts with women he trusted (but let him down) as he tries to rationalize what he is sees and feels for Aarti. I am so looking forward to this time of learning and discovering about each other in the next chapter. So Yash's role of Superman, continues in Aarti's life with this Sameer's pursuit of her.

Congratulations Indu for the new thread!

Thanks Cynthia.

The story is still building up toward the present day. It cannot be wrapped up till we reach that time of their lives. For all his resolutions against women, the moment he met Aarti, Yash found his defences crumbling. It would be natural for him then to analyze these instant feelings...feelings that could not be kept in check in spite of his pledges to himself.

Superman role...that's a good one. That alone should prove something to Yash...He was there to observe Aarti, yet he couldn't see a man harassing her.

wow update👏

Originally posted by: salvatore-nina

Indu congratulations on the 2nd thread!

Loved the new update. I love Yash's growing curiosity to get to know Aarti. It seems that he's restless and until he finds out more about her, he won't stop pursuing her.

Looking forward to the next update!

Thanks Nina.

You put that about Yash very nicely. One chance encounter...and he was simply bowled over. Aarti didn't have to do anything, except be herself. Payal's innocent remark helped him decide that he has to explore these feelings...

Originally posted by: rutu83

congrats on the 2nd thread!

i love your descriptions- i had on a smile the whole update😃

Thanks Rutu.

I'll pray that I am able to hold that smile till the end.😊

Originally posted by: rachna1970

Congrats for the new thread👏

Wow beautiful update

Payal is so cute

Loved how Aarti is comfortable with Yash now

Sameer😡

But no worries Yash is there with Aarti

Thanx for pm

Thanks Rachna...Glad you liked the progression in the story.😊

Originally posted by: luv_lvndr

Superb update...

Thank you.😊

Originally posted by: Abie10

Congrats Indu 👏 👏

Fab update 👏 What is wrong with this sameer? But I feel all queries yash has about Aarti will be answered soon. Continue soon cant wait..

Thanks Abie.😊

Sameer is your regular "all-girls-fall-for-my-charms-and-my-riches" type of a guy. He wants Aarti because she keeps her distance. She is a challenge to him.

Originally posted by: InduG64

Thank you Zet...🤗

Couldn't have reached thus far without the staunch support from everyone here. I feel so loved and blessed when I see everyone celebrating. Truth of the matter is that in spite of Samarpan not providing any thrills or suspense or melodrama by way of nail-biting twists, readers have still supported it. It's just a simple love story with the usual life's ups and downs with characters we might meet in our everyday lives. There was a reason that I was apprehensive when I began this...I never thought it would be so well received, but all the readers have proved me otherwise...and I can only show my gratitude by way of promise to try my best to streamline the story toward a fruitful completion. 😳

Well...if Yash has had bad luck with women, then Aarti too hasn't fared any better. From her father to Sameer, she has had her fare share of them. 😊

Originally posted by: AliciaZA

First of all, CONGRATS on the new thread Indu!! Its a sign of how popular and well loved this story is :-).

Now, the chapter. Arya's story really is meant to be! From the start the universe has been conspiring for them to meet. Its so beautiful. I wonder if Yash and Aarti will ever figure out how many times they have actually met? I don't condone lying usually, but I agree that Yash needs to hide hs identity and wealth from Aarti. Not for his reasons, but becos she's likely to run for the mountains if she knew the truth lol. Aw, I'm so disappointed in this stupid mr singhania. Here I was thinking he might be a nice guy who will give yash a run for his love and money hehe, and he turns out to be an a** instead:(. Yay, now at least yash can see that he wasnt wrong about Aarti and he gets to meet his future gf naanimaasi:-).

Great work Indu!! Every chapter makes me fall more in love with this story. I can never predict whats going to happen next, so every new chapter is like a present I get to unwrap:-). Cant wait for the next amazing chapter...

Thanks Alicia...

I am not aware of the popularity scene my friend, but I am much grateful to all the readers who take time off to read and follow the story. That itself is a humbling experience for me.

Oh yes...the divine intervention has been there from the beginning. Yash was always meant to offer his finger/hand...and Aarti was always meant to pull herself out of an abyss holding that finger/hand. Whenever there was a danger of a greater fall in Aarti's life, destiny sent Yash to help her.

Aww Alicia...those last lines are so sweet. I just hope I am able to keep up to your expectations.😳

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Hey! It's fabulous. Beautifully woven in words. Now Yash's MU about Aarti taking the jewelry will be cleared. Nice that he is portraying to be a poor man, this will make him believe about Aarti that she is not a gold digger. Wow! He got Payal's mountain fairy all dressed in white like an angel. Now that Payal also coming to Nainital she can ask what she wants from mountain fairy, and I believe she will ask for mamma. Both Yash and Aarti's naanimaasi told Sameer to leave her alone at the same time. Waiting for more Yash-Aarti interaction, update soon.

Shashi...thank you so much.

Yash needs to get his act right with Aarti sooner rather than later. He has no idea that this girl is completely opposite to the girls who betrayed him...and I am not talking of using him for his wealth. This girl will run away from any commitment of love; so, whether he is rich or not doesn't matter, she would in any case be scared of falling in love.