As Long As I Live Thread 2 - Page 67

Originally posted by: guruandkratz

Res...Oh Lord!! I have two reserved-s to un-res, that too essay long! Mere baghwan ki kasam!😲

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HAI RAAM...RAAM RAAM RAAM RAAM RAAM RAAM RAAM RAAM RAAM RAAM RAAM RAAM RAAM...May the dirty thoughts created in my mind because of the end of this FF be erased! RAAM RAAM RAAM RAAM RAAM RAAM RAAM RAAM...Mere baghwan ki kasam!!!! Even this is not working, I'll do some meditation and come back.

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So I have finished my tapasya and I think that most of the dirty thoughts have been erased from my mind...I said most...on all!!

Point 1...I see the lyrics meaning...

I remember when we broke up the first time
Saying this is it, I've had enough, 'cause like
We haven't seen each other in a month
When you, said you, needed space, what?
Then you come around again and say
Baby, I miss you and I swear I'm gonna change
Trust me, remember how that lasted for a day
I say, I hate you, we break up, you call me, I love you

Oooh we called it off again last night
But Oooh, this time I'm telling you, I'm telling you
We are never ever ever getting back together
We are never ever ever getting back together
You go talk to your friends talk
To my friends talk to me
But we are never ever ever ever getting back together

Like ever...

I'm really gonna miss you picking fights
And me, falling for a screaming that I'm right
And you, will hide away and find your piece of mind with some indie record that's much cooler than mine

Oooh you called me up again tonight
But Oooh, this time I'm telling you, I'm telling you
We are never ever ever getting back together
We are never ever ever getting back together
You go talk to your friends talk
To my friends talk to me
But we are never ever ever ever getting back together

I used to think, that we, were forever ever ever
And I used to say never say never
Huh, he calls me up and he's like, I still love you
And i'm like, i'm just, I mean this is exhausting, you know
We are never getting back together, like ever

We are never ever ever getting back together
We are never ever ever getting back together
You go talk to your friends talk
To my friends talk to me
But we are never ever ever ever getting back together

We, oooh, oooh, not back together, we
Oh, getting back together

You go talk to your friends talk
And my friends talk to me
But we are never ever ever ever getting back together

Got edited out but she still told him it was over. Oooh, Prashant and Aarti is done for now! Oooh, lemme guess he's gonna come back.

Oooh, and when he does Aarti will lose her child and Yash will try to win her back and I'm like, oooh I was right all the time (expect for the part where I thought she would seduce him and that's why...

But oooh, now I know where this FF is going!

BTW- Imagine me singing this in Taylor Swift's voice please and now enough of her because every time I hear this song I'm reminded of a goat. Please ask why!

Point 2 (OK, I'm now at point two and well I probably just occupied the whole page...sowwie)-

What in the world did Mansi tell the man? My head will probably explode by the time you update 20 but we all know it's probably by tomorrow so yeah! BUT WHAT DID SHE TELL HIM???

Oh lord here I am with the questions again (that you may or may not answer)-

1. What in the world led Yash to telling her that years ago?

2. What in the world did Prashant tell Mansi?

3. What did Mansi tell Yash?

4. Will Yash ever get out of the illusion that he hates Aarti?

5. Will he do the same that he loves Arpita?

6. Will he apologize for the pain he caused Aarti?

7. Will he have s*x with her?

8. Will he dig up those old feelings and keep them out forever?

9. Are these stupid questions?

10. Should I continue with these essays?

Point 3- Yash you LOVE Aarti!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE HER! When you were with Arpita you used to care for her, now she's in front of you and you do this..well I forgive you now as you're about to finish what you started in the car but we all know now, 19 crushed this dream but will 21 relive it??

Point 4- Humanity, my A*S!! F**k you you sh**ing motherc**t! Who are you kidding here? Me? Or yourself? Stueps! Shut your damn a*s! You're fooling yourself so urrgghh! BBut I think we all know in the next chapter, you realize how dangerous humanity is!!

Point 5- I loved Aarya's self thoughts...they were beautifully written! I loved it! Hmm, at least they are finally realizing YOU LOVE EACH OTHER!!

Point 6- So he isn't Drunk this time! I think Aarti should cut the hair...the damn hair turned the man on! That's dangerous!

Point 7- HA! HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA! I was like 90% right all the time! HA!

Point 8- Doing the happy dance! Yash lost his CONtrol! COOL!

I'm not sure if I should be happy for the CON or be scared for how intense it is and the after effect! Aaah, I loved this part!!

PLEASE do update Chapter 20 soon! Sorry if this was too long!!! Muah!!

Hugs and kisses.

Love,

Carissa.

LMAO!!! I hope your meditation ended up working... if not then, well, you tried! But like you said, most of your dirty thoughts escaped, not all of them!

Yeah they're done. Sad isn't it? The only reason that they're done is because Yash forced her into this marriage, which I bet you're happy about! If Yash didn't do this, she'd go back to him quickly. You know where this FF is going only because you read the next chapter before unreserving this one honey, otherwise I would see a few of your predictions on this review! It's okay, your guess was right!

May I know why you're reminded of a goat? O.o

Point 2 - She told him what Prashant told her. And Prashant told her what Yash told him. And Yash told him what... well you get the point. She knows the whole truth. But what exactly the truth is, you'll find out veryyy soon my friend!

Let me answer your questions to the best of my ability!

1) Something.
2) See answer #1
3) See answer #1
4) Yes, now he will.
5) Yes, he will... =D
6) Of course
7) You have a corrupted mind! You actually asked this? LOL of course he will.
8) He's already feeling those old feelings! =D
9) Kind of.
10) If you wish... I'm not expecting an essay for the promo by the way. O.o

Point 3 - LOL are you asking me if they'll con in chapter 21? I wouldn't expect it so soon.

Point 4 - Yash and his excuses. *Sigh*

Point 5 - Yes, they do really like each other, and their self talks are an indication of that. Thank you very much!

Point 6 - Lmao you think she should cut her hair? Damn, he'll be pissed off.

Point 7 - Good job!

Point 8 - You can't expect him to not lose his control when Aarti is around. 😛

You can tell me your thoughts of the con and its after effects in your next unres. 😉 Chapter 19 has to happen before chapter 20 btw, so you still have to wait for two more of them. 😛

Thank you for the sweet essay!

You are very talented. Loved the update. After watching the promos my brain is going in over drive mode trying to figure out whats going to happen. I think chapter 19 Aarti will hate Yash. Chapter 20 secrets of the past will be revealed. Can't wait for the chapters please post them soon.

Originally posted by: ankita26ghosh

u r a grt writer awesome...

Thanks!

Originally posted by: Leevi05

ohoh she lost the baby😭😭😭

poor aarti

now he killed her baby...so she will hate him?

now he will understand the meaning of accident

Yeah! Yep, she'll hate him. Now he'll realize how Aarti felt.

Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny

😲 😲 How could you???? 😡 😭 😭 😭

My poor Aarti!!!! 😭 😭

OMG!!!!

Your writing was superb!!! 👏 👏

Thank you! How could I? Welll I'm writing this story so I can! 😆

Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny

Chapter 19 promo looks interesting!!! I love the way he will repent! 😈

Thank you! 😊

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Superb Update 😊
Omg she lost her baby becoz of Him
Ab kia hoga 😕
Continue Soon 😊

Yeah, let's see. Thanks!

Originally posted by: princess121993

ooo...aarti lost her baby..no...oh my god...she will be shattered...

promo looks interesting...hmmm...so now he will repent for killing aarti child...

he will repent big time...

please update the next part soon

Yesh she did, and yeah she is shattered. He will repent big time. Let him feel what Aarti felt.

Originally posted by: jikky_84

Oh...this is so sad

She lost her baby...that too because of Yash...even though its an accident

Yup, just like he lost his wife because of Aarti... even though that was an accident. 😊

Originally posted by: MelodiousDreams

The last part...Oh, God.

This entire chapter was written so beautifully. All those pent-up desires were on the verge of finding an outlet...but then...

I really liked the way you gave us little indications of how Yash and Aarti were trying to gauge each other's reactions and sensations before progressing further. Even though both of them were drowning in that moment, they still tried to hold on to any last remnants of control, just in case...And the bit towards the end, when Aarti reached out to ask Yash if everything was okay...I loved that, too, because she could have pulled back, but she didn't. She was concerned and she tried to tell him that...

But the ending...I can vividly see Aarti on the floor, surrounded by blood, crying into Yash's chest. Oh, God.

P.S. Believe whatever you want, darling...You're a fantastic writer in my book! Update soon!

Thank you Borna!

I'm glad you found it beautifully written. Yeah, they almost finished what they started years ago, but they didn't get around to finishing it... yet.

Yeah, they wanted to make sure the other one was comfortable with what was going on. Even though they claim to hate each other, they actually really respect each other in a twisted way. Aarti isn't really scared of Yash's anger. She never thought he'd be able to push her like that, but then again he didn't know she was pregnant and she'd be hitting a desk with that much force.

You can vividly see that? That isn't a nice sight to see, but I'll take it as a compliment!

Thank you! 😳

Love you for the chap 18

Yash and aarthi closeness i will say even with prashanth and arpita they were like this?

yash lost his control..Obviously he will

How long yash going to hide his love for aarthi?

Originally posted by: Abie10

The beginning was sooo hottt...

Ohh noo Aarti lost her baby 😭 😭 she will also start hating yash..pls update soon eagerly waiting for what happen next.

Was it? 😳 Thanks!

Yeah she did and she will hate Yash!

Originally posted by: saf24

Saffi that was an amazing update. The hidden feeling that Yash and Aarti have for each other were finally coming forward until Yash looked up and was reminded of the reality of his life. Gosh Aarti losing the baby was heartbreaking. Beautifully written. Loved it

Thank you Saf! Yes, they were coming out, but then Arpita's picture spoiled it all... I think I'm going to have to get rid of these pictures now!

Originally posted by: Malika_ZL_Khan

OH MY GOD POOR Aarti...

i can't understand yash feelings

i wonder if he has really loved Arpita...

now they are equal

he think that aarti killed arpita and he too also kill a person dear to her eyes so sad part...and HOT hahaha

PLEASE CONTINU SOON CANT WAIT!!!

Yeah, poor Aarti. He has really loved Arpita, but his love for her was more of a devotion, like she was some Goddess or something. 😛 Yup, now they're equal! They both "killed" the one in the other's life who they loved dearly.

Hot? Thanks!

Originally posted by: balaraba

wat an awesome update dear👏 love u much❤️ so sweet update, so we got to see how yash repent as per promo, let see how he differenciate between aarti's baby and arpita's death he will have to pay her, her baby. thank GOD dear that u did not mention aarti sleeping with yash i trusted u nd u proved me right me be later on when there marriage is no more a compr0mise👏 And thank u for d the PM😊 oh no forgot to ask when u update next but please update soon dear, going to bed now but d sleep isn't coming wish u send d nxt one now😉 waiting for d nxt one.

billie

Thank you so much! Yup, it's pretty much the same thing right? Both of them weren't aware of what they were doing, now both of them are equal. Yash will realize how Aarti felt, and Aarti will realize how Yash felt. I'll update soon!

Originally posted by: guruandkratz

Res...that's another essay...😭😆

Rewind...OMG!!!!!

Waiting!

Originally posted by: amandasookoo

Gosh Saffi, the way you described Yash and Aartie's love making was so exhilerating !

So sad for Aartie losing her baby, never expected this.

Anyway, I won't mention that your update was just awesome . You already know this. 😉

Lol thank you. 😳

Yeah, I try to bring the unexpected!

Originally posted by: sara1990

Feel sad that Aarti lost her baby

hope Yash try to treat well

Awesome update and promo

Thanks! You'll be hoping that Aarti will treat Yash well from now on.

Originally posted by: guruandkratz

Res...that's three res-s...😭

Waiting again. 😛

Originally posted by: sheema_rajoo

finally I've got time to comment...
OMG saffi... what are you doing to my brain which is supposed to be filled with accounts and finance and not aarya x-rated stuff...LOL
thank goodness you made them stop. It's better this way compared to Yash thinking the baby is his. that's plain cruel.
Now I'm doing the happy dance... call me crazy but I'm really glad that aarti lost the baby. at least there's no attachment anymore to prashant. I don't know why the way the story is developing, he seems like a crook. However I'm pretty sure aarti will hold yash responsible for her loss and will distance herself from him. Now it'll be aarti's turn to hate him and yash wouldn't be able to bear it.. YAYYY...

brilliant story telling woman.. You're really good at this.. loved it.

Sheema, oh man, I was waiting for this. I knew you'd say something about this being x-rated (which it totally was not! I bet they'd show this on the show... well they wouldn't, but you get my point!).

Yup, Yash won't think the baby is his now, now he'll know the truth. Aarti herself will confess, muahahah, and she'll hate him and punish him like he punished her, and he'll feel guilty like she did, and yesss role reversal!

I don't think you're crazy haha!

Thank you! <3

Originally posted by: saf24

Saffi that is another fab promo. You're spoiling me this weekend and i'm loving it 😃

Thanks Saf! I hope I don't spoil you too much though because I might stop giving fast updates anytime... 😳

Originally posted by: Malika_ZL_Khan

Oh my god promo

when will you update dear you just killed me yaar can't wait!!!

Lmao I'll update soon, patience my friend! 😆

Originally posted by: --Iqra--

Wow! Very powerful update! This was so well written!! It was perfect, it could have gone wrong, being such a delicate situation, but it didn't. You're brilliant! Thank you for this! And thanks so much for the PM! 🤗

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: ns1970

WOW i'm speechless aarti lost the baby is it a goo thing or bad?

Could be good, good be bad, but for the story, it was good!

Originally posted by: poonamgarg

nice saffi dear😃

Thanks!

Originally posted by: ns1970

another great promo

Thank you!