As Long As I Live Thread 2 - Page 15

Originally posted by: ForeverAarYan

Fabulous update.⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Where should I start from? Arpita's death is really tragic. No wonder Yash blames Aarti and she blames herself. Aarti really made me so sad for her...what is her obsession with Prashant. Can't she really move on? Hope you bring up her childhood experience and her low self esteem issue in later updates. She really deserves to be loved unconditionally.

Loved the interaction between Prateek-Aarti and SP-Aarti. My only issue is the "task" SP gave her. Its been only one day since Arpita died why he and G3 talking about moving on. It will make Yash more angry.

I really sympathise with what Yash going through. Very natural reaction. But what he said about Palak not being his daughter since Aarti became her mother was very hurtful. Hope this doesn't bite his back in future.

My most favourite part is Aarti-Palak. Aarti will make sure Palak get unconditional love from both her parents which she (A) was deprieved of. Wish we will see Aarti-Palak and hopefully Yash interaction more.

So Prashant is still in the picture..sigh..😆 . Ok you can always use him to make Yash jealous.😆

See my one-track mind😳 always thinks about AarYa romance😳

Beautifully written Saffi dear.

Thank you! 😳

Aarti is not as clingy with Prashant as she used to be. I guess you can say that it was Yash's influence on her, that she really did move on from Prashant. Of course she loved him and still does, because he was such a huge part of her life. She realizes that the divorce wasn't a good idea, because she does love him, and she feels lonely. I'll go more into more depth about Prashant and Aarti's married life and what happened after their divorce in later updates, because there'll be something coming up that kind of needs me to go through all that.

Gayatri was upset that Yash married Aarti and then left her to sit outside of the room all night, and SP is someone who thinks about the future more than the present, so he's giving Aarti the task ahead of time. Yash doesn't have to fine out about the task... yet. 😛

He'll accept Palak sooner than you think. Like Aarti said, just let him look at her once. More Aarti-Palak-Yash interactions will come for sure.

Yes, Prashant is still in the picture, and he's needed for the next dhamaka twist. 😆

Thanks once again! 😊

Originally posted by: luv_lvndr

Superb update...so many twist...

please update soon...

Thanks!

Originally posted by: LoveViShalini

awesome update saffiie..

me love it..

Thank you!

Originally posted by: villager00

Oyee Saffi, congratulations for the new thread👏👏👏..

and thank you for coming up with the lightning updates..

Thank you! 😳

Originally posted by: sara1990

Wonderful update...Love your story...Waiting for your next update...

Thanks!

Originally posted by: villager00

The two updates made me cry😭..

Saffi, that was awesome!👏👏👏.. Can't wait how the baby will change Yash soon.

Thanks a ton for the pm..

Aww Enid! Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: nan0102

thanks you soo much for the super fast update..great update..hope thing will be better between them soon..

Thanks! It'll eventually get better... but first it needs to get worse. 😛

Originally posted by: Abie10

Aww speedy updates and soo beautifully written 👏 👏

Thank you!

Originally posted by: ns1970

Congrats saffi on the new thread👏
I started reading the prologue and must say it's very interesting as how things begins to turn for these two.
can't wait for update

Thanks! I'm glad you find it interesting!

Originally posted by: ns1970

OMG seems a lot of things took place between these two .
Many questions that i guess we will get answers to other chapters

Yeah a lot of things did happen. 😛 Thanks!

Originally posted by: tharuma

Brialliant update❤️

Thank you!

Originally posted by: tharuma

Wow what a fast update this part was just awesome

Thanks!

Originally posted by: pvejani

🤗saffi i m loving ur updating speed right now🥳.i m loving this fast updates👍🏼.

superb update dear👏👏👏.loved very much⭐️.

story had become so intresting...with so many nice twists .loving and enjoying reading it👏.continue soon😉😳.

thanx for quick update and pm dear.😊

I can't guarantee this updating speed forever! 😛 Enjoy it while you can. 😃 I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: ksen

Superb update

Thanks!

Originally posted by: ns1970

Awesome update good job👍🏼
this story is getting more and more interesting😲 anyways love that you are pouring on updates this fast 😉

Thank you! Yup it's getting very interesting!

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Nice Updates Saffi 😊
Very happy to see itni jaldi jaldi You r updating 😆

Thank you! At least I don't seem to be disappointing anyone with my fast updates!

Originally posted by: zahra15

Was that like the 4th update in 2 days :O 😆

If only this could go on everyday 😆

Having said that, you really took me by surprise. When I had read part 10, I never knew we were in for such a twist. But, then I TOTALLY loved the way the story kinda changed its course though i guess this is how you have planned it to be =))


Thanks for the PM.

Yeah... I guess so. 😆

I planned this twist from the beginning, but I see how it caught everyone by surprise. 😛 I'm glad you're loving the way it's going! Thank you! 😃

Originally posted by: kmfan_2

Read both Chap 11 and 12 in one go...

Wonderful way the story is progressing...

Yash will eventually accept Aarti hopefully...

High drama was seen in the last two updates...

Great writing...

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. He'll eventually accept her, but it will take time. 😃

Originally posted by: jayhi_ks

I Liked the twist in the story very much Saffi.. Though Arpitas death and aarya's current situation is heart-wrenching but the story is very interesting and exciting. Appreciation from my side fr ur fabulous story writing skill... Waiting eagerly fr the nxt chapter...

I'm glad you're enjoying the twist. It's a very heart-wrenching situation, but there's always a light at the end of the tunnel! Thank you!