As Long As I Live Thread 2 - Page 17

Originally posted by: rutu83

oh boy oh boy

i don't know where to begin- first off- 2 updates 😃😃

can't believe she actually married prashant😡. the only saving grace there was that she suggested divorce, not him. but then she came to bombay to meet him so...😕

aww arpita- she's the kinda person you want to hate because she's so nice that you can't hate her 😆

so prashant chapter isn't closed yet..hmm interesting. this will come back no?

i like your sp and am glad to see him like this. can we have more of the supporting fmaily? i'm a sucker for the hum saath saath hai type family 😆

love this story ❤️

...and no problems at all on the update speed 😃🤣

Yeah, they actually got married. Prashant fulfilled his promise to her, Aarti did what she vowed to do. It was her idea to get divorced. I thought that might be surprising, but you're the first one who brought it up. 😛 ... and she regrets getting divorced to him, so she came to Mumbai. 😆

Arpita didn't mean any harm for anyone, she was a nice person.

Prashant will definitely be back. 😛

The family is supportive so far. I can't guarantee that they'll stay this way... nor can I guarantee that the whole family will be like this. We have yet to meet the rest of them. 😳

Thank you so much! 😊

Originally posted by: Deepti1808

Neki aur puchh puchh

Who would say no to a fast paced story like this one. Bring all the updates that you possibly can I am up for it.

Loved the update.

Oh! so something did go wrong when Aarti and P met even after the divorce.

I can see why Yash is refusing to see the baby.

The baby has become the extension of Aarti now and in his twisted state of mind he is punishing her by punishing the baby not knowing that way he gets punished himself

Great bit of story telling my friend

Neki aur puchh puchh -- what does that mean? 😲 It is a good or bad thing?

I'll update as much as I can this week, because next week I'll be going back to my weekly or biweekly or triweekly (is that a word?) updates.

Yeah, something went wrong after the marriage and after the divorce. 😛

Ever since he gave the baby for Aarti to bring up, he thinks she's related to Aarti. But he'll accept Palak soon. 😳

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Gkathria

Love the fast updates and the storyy!!!!!! keep it up! Great work!

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Mula

WOW! The update was amazing Saffi...well done dear and update soon. )

Thanks!

Originally posted by: anituram

Love you saffi..for fantastic update..

Waiting for more arya conversation😳😳

Thanks! 😳

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

Chapter 12

Another awesome and beautiful part, Saffi!! 👏👏👏

Awww.. Prateek is one sweet boy! The way he consoled Aarti was too good.. 😉

And yet again.. Yash is so angry with Aarti and even the baby too.. 😭😭😭!! Later one.. he broke down again! 😭😭

Papa S was another good man.. 😃 Loved his loving character here.. 😊 Looking forward for Aarti's mission.. 😉

Thanks for the Update and PM! 😃

Thank you IsYa! Yeah he is very sweet. He won't neglect the baby forever... but it'll take time for him to accept Aarti.

I'm glad you like Papa S's character!

Originally posted by: salvatore-nina

I had to catch up on so many updates from you Saffi but thankfully I managed to read them all!

Marvelous updates! I really loved all the chapters from 9 to 12.

But one thing I wanted to know was the reason behind Yash's behavior when they split up for good four years ago. I refuse to believe that he's that much of an ass so I'm assuming there was something behind it. Or is there not?

Loved this chapter. Prateek and Aarti's relationship is so sweet and I love Aarti's interaction with Palak. I'm eager to see how Aarti gets Yash to love and accept his daughter and I am even more eager to see Yash and Aarti confront each other about their past eventually as well.

Oh, forgot about Prashant. Aarti should learn by now that her and Prashant's on-again off-again relationship isn't healthy for the the both of them.

Sorry for updating way too fast! 😳 I couldn't help it. Once I write a chapter, I just have to post it lol. 😆

I'm glad you enjoyed reading the chapters!

Yash wasn't that much of an ass, something was behind the way he behaved that day. He didn't mean everything he said to Aarti. We'll find out about that soon.

Yash won't take long to accept his daughter. In fact, he'll accept her easily. It's just Aarti he'll have a huge problem with... especially now that they'll have to share a room. When they can talk to each other civilly, maybe they'll be able to bring up their history.

Aarti is silly. She divorces him and she wants to get back together with him. Now she kind of has no choice though. Poor girl is stuck with Yash for the rest of her life.

Thanks you Nina! 😃

Originally posted by: RA17

Congrats Saffi for the new thread dear

Saffi the prologue of part2 was really mind blowing n hey Aarti yash scindhiya with whatever circumstance it may be but for us it's a complete beautiful name and we love the lady who owns it

N your chapter 11' beautifully written by you and it summarises well '

it was her fault though. It was all her fault. She told him she'd do anything he wanted to make up for her grave mistake. Anything. And this was what he told her to do. He told her to marry him.

really aarpita died and yash is really madly in love n he got married n palak was born n then aarpita only ask Yash to marry aarti..aarpita really very nice lady although I hated her as she is one of the reason yash broke aarti heart badly 4 years back

'"Aarti," Arpita said peacefully, "I might not be able to survive this, but I want you to know that you always meant a lot to me. Yash told me everything. He really cares about you, I want you to know that... and I know that you really care about him too. We've bonded a lot over the last few weeks - more than we ever have - and I can tell by the way you talk about him. Aarti, I wasn't meant to be his partner in this life. You are."

Aarti going thru with hif dose of emotions which is soo difficult to comprehend and yash my heart went for him although I am still very curious to know what was the reason Saffi for four years back which bring so much bitternees in yash for aarti

really love your work dear will soon read next chapter😃

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the prologue. Arpita isn't the only reason that Yash hurt Aarti all those years ago. Don't hate her, she didn't mean any harm. The reason that Yash left Aarti will be out soon, but you need to have some patience with that. When the time comes, all will be revealed!

Thank you! 😃

Originally posted by: swaggerchick16

sorry hardly getting anytime I'll read next week friday ok just pm me n remind me

It's okay, take your time. 😊

Originally posted by: guruandkratz

Hai raam!!!!

******Reserved*****

Hai raam in a good way or a bad way? 😕 I'm waiting!

Originally posted by: Shwty

Loved the updates but i am sad because i really thought Yash loved Aarti and was over Arpita but he only broke up with her because he was forced to. After your updates i have realised he was still in love with Arpita and still is thats sad so he didn't have any feelings for Aarti.

He did get attracted to Aarti back then but he wasn't so deeply into her that he actually fell in love with her. He wasn't over Arpita, but he didn't break up with Aarti because of what he told her. There are other things that made him behave that way. He had feelings for Aarti, but he was in love with Arpita. Thanks!

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Awesome chapter Saffi 👏
Every scene is beautifully penned 😃
Waiting To read how Palak presence affects him ! N how wud Aarti do her 'task' ! 😊
Fast updates r blessing for readers 😆
Good Going 😉
Thanx !

Thank you! I'm glad you thought it was beautiful. Yes, Palak will affect him for sure. 😛 You'll see what Aarti does.

Originally posted by: ankyz

loved it...nw palak is going to be a strong force to brng aarti nd yash together...

Yup! She will definitely pull them towards each other because they have to both take care of her together.