As Long As I Live Thread 2

Mula

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

WOW! The update was amazing Saffi...well done dear and update soon. )

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I had to catch up on so many updates from you Saffi but thankfully I managed to read them all!

Marvelous updates! I really loved all the chapters from 9 to 12.

But one thing I wanted to know was the reason behind Yash's behavior when they split up for good four years ago. I refuse to believe that he's that much of an ass so I'm assuming there was something behind it. Or is there not?

Loved this chapter. Prateek and Aarti's relationship is so sweet and I love Aarti's interaction with Palak. I'm eager to see how Aarti gets Yash to love and accept his daughter and I am even more eager to see Yash and Aarti confront each other about their past eventually as well.

Oh, forgot about Prashant. Aarti should learn by now that her and Prashant's on-again off-again relationship isn't healthy for the the both of them.

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anithu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Love you saffi..for fantastic update..

Waiting for more arya conversation😳😳

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RIYA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Congrats Saffi for the new thread dear

Saffi the prologue of part2 was really mind blowing n hey Aarti yash scindhiya with whatever circumstance it may be but for us it's a complete beautiful name and we love the lady who owns it

N your chapter 11… beautifully written by you and it summarises well …

it was her fault though. It was all her fault. She told him she'd do anything he wanted to make up for her grave mistake. Anything. And this was what he told her to do. He told her to marry him.

really aarpita died and yash is really madly in love n he got married n palak was born n then aarpita only ask Yash to marry aarti..aarpita really very nice lady although I hated her as she is one of the reason yash broke aarti heart badly 4 years back

'"Aarti," Arpita said peacefully, "I might not be able to survive this, but I want you to know that you always meant a lot to me. Yash told me everything. He really cares about you, I want you to know that... and I know that you really care about him too. We've bonded a lot over the last few weeks - more than we ever have - and I can tell by the way you talk about him. Aarti, I wasn't meant to be his partner in this life. You are."

Aarti going thru with hif dose of emotions which is soo difficult to comprehend and yash my heart went for him although I am still very curious to know what was the reason Saffi for four years back which bring so much bitternees in yash for aarti

really love your work dear will soon read next chapter😃

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Kesha_H.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

sorry hardly getting anytime I'll read next week friday ok just pm me n remind me

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Roza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Hai raam!!!!

******Reserved and EDITED******

CHAPTER 11 AND 12-

'"Aarti," Arpita said peacefully, "I might not be able to survive this, but I want you to know that you always meant a lot to me. Yash told me everything. He really cares about you, I want you to know that... and I know that you really care about him too. We've bonded a lot over the last few weeks - more than we ever have - and I can tell by the way you talk about him. Aarti, I wasn't meant to be his partner in this life. You are."

This makes me sure that he did not mean what he said years ago! Why he said it though is still unclear to me! BTW- If Arpita knows about their relationship (more or less) why would she still accept that Yash loves/likes Aarti...the reason for Yash's anger though makes me think that actually he is angry for betraying Arpita a bit woth Aarti and he was driving the car too which probably makes him think he is the reason for her death. OK! Now I'm confusing myself...because I still have no clue why...

1. Yash said that to her years ago if Arpi said he liked her?

2. If ALL that Yash said was true, because some was true?

3. What was not true? Although I am sure, the part where he said he just used her for his desires is COMPLETELY wrong!

4. If Yash truly loved Arpita why would he share his feeling about Aarti to her?

5. Why the self inflicted pain as seen in the promo if he blames Aarti...because I am 99% positive that he knows he is not the cause of it!?

6. Why blame Palak?

From this all I could gather is that definitely deep down inside they do have feeling for each other uptil this date! Really wanting to know about Yash and Arpita's relationship as I am positive Arpita plays a more vital role in thsi FF.

PLUS, in your spoilers, you mentioned a secret and I still believe it is about what Yash said to Aarti when he spoke to her years ago! Pretty, sure though that the secret is going to be out soon or is it out already and I missed something?

Another thing is...Is Aarti pregnant?? Because there is no way she would be asking Arpita about those things unless she was talking about herself too!

To my favourite character other than Aarya in PV now...Prateek!

Absolutely loved the way Prateek consoled Aarti...after the disappearing trick Mansi did...at least she has an old friend to be there for her in hard times...loved how you included that.

To Aarti and Prashant now, seriously...I was ripping out my hair trying to understand their story and it was this simple. The simplicity of their story caught me off guard! I loved it also! Now, if he comes back, you have a copy of the lyrics she has to send him, RIGHT???

About SP now, at least he will be able to shower some fatherly love on baby Palak when her father is being self-centered and selfish to not think about his own child! Sorry! Even though her father is the one and only, Yash Scindiya I still hate that he does not pay any attention to his own flesh and blood!

Well, I guess this is the way the story has to progress...I really do hope that Aarti manages to dig out the old Yash who taught her calculas and was there for her when Prashant wasn't because if he didn't realize she and Prashant is not together anymore!

Another thing too...seriously...my perverted mind and Sheema's comment made me think that she and Yash was each other's first...and all that! Never in my wildest dream would I think it was Yash and Arpita's baby! Even though you bursted my bubble earlier, I still thought that the mistake Aarti made was having YOU KNOW WHAT with Prashant and he said exactly what Yash did and left her! Oh lord, I seriously am too obsessed with Aarya.

OK! This is probably the longest comment ever made in the history of the world for an FF! This is how much I love your writing! Oh lord...help me! Please please please do continue soon and also, I absolutely love your writing speed right now! Could you imagine how I smiled like a ninny seeing not one but...TWO updates to read!?

Wait a minute...wasn't I supposed to be working on my P.E. assignment? Oh crap!

BTW- I am waiting for a reply...that too...a LONG one!😆

😃...😆...😉...😛...😊...😭...🤢..😳..😕..😲!!! ( Shows my emotional atyachar)

Edited by guruandkratz - 12 years ago

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Shwty

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Loved the updates but i am sad because i really thought Yash loved Aarti and was over Arpita but he only broke up with her because he was forced to. After your updates i have realised he was still in love with Arpita and still is thats sad so he didn't have any feelings for Aarti.

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Mishtieeeee <3

@Koolsmile

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Awesome chapter Saffi 👏
Every scene is beautifully penned 😃
Waiting To read how Palak presence affects him ! N how wud Aarti do her 'task' ! 😊
Fast updates r blessing for readers 😆
Good Going 😉
Thanx !

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Roza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139