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Malika_ZL_Khan

@Malika_ZL_Khan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

chap12: awesome love it continu dear

i love fast updates!!!🤗

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ANU

@kratzyfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

wow saffi...u are a wonderful writer...👏 also u updaeted so fastly...how could u do thi s😕😊 hats off to u...as long as i live i'll remember ur story...really yaar ...its my promise...just loved it👍🏼

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Sheema Rajoo

@sheema_rajoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Saffi you're awesome.. Super fast updates but WTH they are married but so much hatred. why do i feel aarti might be pregnant as she asked arpita that question. It's really weird for her just to ask at random. SO the baby is Yash and Arpita's and I was thinking all the crazy things. LOL.

superb woman.. Please maintain the speed. 😛

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Aisyah Abdul

@IsYaRoCHeR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Congo Shongo for the second thread!! 🥳

Part 11

Beautiful Saffi!! 👏👏👏 Just loved it although it was a shocking one to be absorbed in my mind.. 😲😭😭!! I can feel Yash's pain losing Arpita! 😭😭😭 And Aarti.. 😕😭!! Owh.. small baby Palak is just born.. 😳!!

Wow.. Yash married to Aarti in a dramatic way! 😲😳😛!! And ouch.. Pity Aarti.. She's kicked out of the room.. 😭😭!! And little Palak is crying! 😭😭

Will read part 12 and comment again! 😉

Edited by IsYaRoCHeR - 12 years ago

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Mahalakshmi

@maha9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

awesome and heartful of wishes for the successful new thread saffi !!!

and i have no words to decsribe the emotions u protrayed in the chapters. Poor arthi feeling guilf for killing her friend and yash also angry on her !!!!

continue soon dear

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Shalini barman roy

@shalini28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

wow awesome update saffi.

loved it so much.

u portrayed each and every emotion perfectly.

waiting for the next part😳

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

oh boy oh boy

i don't know where to begin- first off- 2 updates 😃😃

can't believe she actually married prashant😡. the only saving grace there was that she suggested divorce, not him. but then she came to bombay to meet him so...😕

aww arpita- she's the kinda person you want to hate because she's so nice that you can't hate her 😆

so prashant chapter isn't closed yet..hmm interesting. this will come back no?

i like your sp and am glad to see him like this. can we have more of the supporting fmaily? i'm a sucker for the hum saath saath hai type family 😆

love this story ❤️

...and no problems at all on the update speed 😃🤣

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Deepti1808

@Deepti1808

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Neki aur puchh puchh

Who would say no to a fast paced story like this one. Bring all the updates that you possibly can I am up for it.

Loved the update.

Oh! so something did go wrong when Aarti and P met even after the divorce.

I can see why Yash is refusing to see the baby.

The baby has become the extension of Aarti now and in his twisted state of mind he is punishing her by punishing the baby not knowing that way he gets punished himself

Great bit of story telling my friend