Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139)

First Previous

Page

116

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Zetter

@Zetter

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#411

Awww what a beautiful written, heartbroken update Pal 👏 👏 👏 ...I knew it was something like that Aarti went through as a child but reading how the entire family turned on her just for being born just broke my heart 😭 😭 😭 IMO her father's family were all ignorant 😡 😡

I loved how Suraj and Yash stood up for Aarti as well as Gayatri, it was great of them to point out how unfair they were being towards Aarti 👍🏼 👏

Aww Yash was such a sweetheart, I loved the way he reached out to Aarti and the shy way she said "Goodbye" 😃 Yash will always be Aarti's knight in shinning armor 😳 😳

Marvelous job my friend 🤗

Quote

----

@ksfan2

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#412

that was a very emotional part...cant have any words to express it...it is so beautiful di..thanks for the PM

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Saffi Sanam

@ilovepyaar

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#413

Wow Indu, this was my favourite update. I'm blown away by your writing style. You're very talented! Aarti's past is heartwrenching, and I'm sure there's more to come, which will be more hurtful. I love the layers you've made for Aarti's character. I loved it! Update soon! =]

Quote

saf24

@saf24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#414

Gosh Indu this update was something else. Whatever Aarti was made to believe and feel is something that is still prevelant in certain societies and I could imagine what those innocent girls have to face. My heart went out to Aarti for all that she has had to face and my admiration for Yash grew as in their interaction he was sensitive enough to realise that something was amiss and then as they got married the countless times he spent reassuring her just so she could forget what she was made to believe. Beautifully written Indu. Superb job. I could just imagine what you went through, while writing this.

Quote

smileymj10

@smileymj10

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#415

😭😭😭😭

*speechless

EDITED:
Okay, am back!
First of all, thank you for saving me from getting bored and very sleepy @work..
But there's only one thing i must complain... you made me cry dear (again), why!?!! 😭😭

I feel sorry for Aarti about her past. The way she was tortured by her father and his family... very bad!!! 😡 Can I join in the story for a while to hug Aarti and punch those devils around her one by one!!!
GOSH!! So much humiliation they did to Aarti. Are they human enough to treat an innocent child like that?! Especially Satye, he's so selfish! He didn't even recognize his own daughter. For GOD'S sake, she's the child of his love too!! Shobha even risk her life just to save her baby, why can't he accept it and move on?! The child deserves to be loved not hated!!😡😡

Oopps, sorry got carried away... 😆
See, Indu, your writings made me really feel what's with the character.
I was very very sad for Aarti as well as pissed off with Satya and Maya.
I know it's just a story, but you manage to bring me in to it, hats off to you! 👍🏼

Well, good thing Aarti meets Yash when she was born, and there was also his family (Scindias) to protect and support her.. He became her knight in shining armor since then.
And with her nanny Radha whom her uncle Brij made her promise to take care of Aarti, am still happy that you bring them to her..

And maybe that was the reason why Aarti reacted that way to Payal, cause somehow she wants her to accept things just the way they are, like what Yash did to her..

And Last part, gosh, am broke this time..

It's her 10th birthday, but still her father didn't even let it pass when he saw her in his room just to see her mother's pictures... He even made it worst for her!
That wound in her chest was not just a physical wound that can easily be healed, deep within it were her inner feelings which brought this scars last for a lifetime.

I was bad again. I am a very bad girl. I hurt baba again. He hates me'I deserve to be hated'..

*SIGH
Why she always need to blame herself for the incident, why?! 😭😭

It was a very heart touching, beautiful update Indu, again, I loved it... 🤗

Edited by smileymj10 - 12 years ago

Quote

1HappyGrl

@1HappyGrl

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#416

Aw Indu, you've humbled me with your kind words. 😳 Honestly, your wonderful writing is the reason I'm able to read your work the way I do. I'm really excited to catch up with the 4th installment as you dig deeper into Aarti's background. And you've piqued my interest about Yash's history. Sounds like we're in for a wonderful literary feast. 😃 I hope to get a response to you on this newest installment during the course of the week. 😃

Quote

Sri_Radha

@Sri_Radha

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#417

Mind blowing update dear...👏 👏 👏

Aarti past was very painful😭 😭 😭 😭...Heart wrenching one💔 ...

Stupid sathya 😡 😡 and her father's family😡 ..How can the blame an innocent child ...

Poor aarti blaming herself for her mother's death😭 😭 ...

Loved the way suraj and gayatri pointed out Sathya's mistake.⭐️

Liked yash and aarti conversation..Sweet.❤️.

Glad aarti got her education because of yash😳

And last part was so scary😲 😲..Aarti physical hurt because of her father...and still aarti was still blaming herself😭 😭 😭

Continue soon

Eagerly waiting for next

Quote

sara1990

@sara1990

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#418

Awesome update

Feel Sad for Aarti

Thanks for the PM

Quote

Surish

@Surish

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#419

Absolutely superb piece of writing that kept me fully enthralled throughout!Kudos to you dear!

Quote

lulujjjj

@lulujjjj

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#420

wonderful update Indu 👏⭐️

what a painful past of aarti, 😭How could a father blame his innocent daughter?💔 and the whole family are ignorant😲 about the little girl aarti, 😔
but i am happy aarti uncle hired radhama to take care of the little girl.

the yash and aarti 👍🏼interaction so sweet❤️ this is the best and sweetest part i loved the most.😎

last part so heart-wrenching😭.😒😭mm waiting for the next part.😊😎

Edited by lulujjjj - 12 years ago

Quote

1 ... 40 41 42 43 44 ... 116

Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 42

Related Topics

Explore Topics