Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 28

My comments have been updated in page 30 but here it is again!

EDIT: First time to congratulate you Indu on becoming If Rockerz..Keep on rocking!

I loved this chapter of the story. I saw it more through the eyes of Aayu and was waiting for what else he would say! Yeah I know I'm biased because I have a 6 year old nephew who reminds me of Ayu.

I loved how he seemed to help solve most of the puzzles without trying to do so! His interest was the sweet dish in the fridge and that was motivation enough to push his papa to win it.

But his papa had other ideas! He wants to impress Arti and I hope he achieves this.

I loved this chapter also for the inherent romance going on through the whole story!

Wish I could get to see a scene like this in PV and maybe this spoiled me to not love the actual scene that came up in PV!

You know romance best , I feel!😳

Like I said keep on rocking!

Originally posted by: Sri_Radha

Lovely update👏 👏 👏

Kids are too adorable.❤️.Aayu is naughty😉..They way he took chocolate mousse by chori chupke😛..So cute...

Loved the way yash and kids enthusiastically found the clues👏...

Wow..Gift of the book samarpan⭐️..Aarti message was so touching 👍🏼

Eagerly waiting for their past...

Continue soon

Thanks Radha. Glad you liked the chapter. Well, Yash motivated Aarti to come out of her shell and write, so I thought it'd be fitting that she rewards him with the book on his birthday and make it all the more special for him.😊

Originally posted by: sara1990

lovely update

Thanks Sara.😊

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Fabulous, beautifully written. The way you describe Yash and Aarti's relationship after so many years of marriage is amazing. They are made for each other couple. Payal says that is right, no other person can love like Yash loves Aarti.

Thanks for the PM

Thanks you Shashi... Yes, years don't matter if two people not only love but also appreciated each other. Yash and Aarti have a wholesome relationship now and Yash's love for her is certainly special.😊

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

Fabulous part, Indu... 👏👏👏

Oh wow... The game was very fun!! 😃 The hint and clues had finally brought Yash to the place where Aarti had kept surprise for him... 😉 The book, Samarpan... I loved the descriptions for the painting.. The sentences... 👍🏼!!

Oh this sentence...

To my husband Yash
I am because you are ... 😳

Oh my.. Payal!! Payal is absolutely right... There's no couple could love each other more than AarYa.. 😳😳 It's a fact.. 😳😉

I'm excited for next Indu.. 😛😉 Enjoy reading it.. 😉 Update soon.. 😃😉 Thanks for the PM! 😃

Thanks Isya...I am so happy that all of the above satisfied you. All those emoticons are giving me a high...I am much too overwhelmed.😳

Originally posted by: maha9

wow so so cute part indu sweetie !!!

Loved the cute family so much

i am so happy to see another great work after sparsh !!!! great job

Thanks Maha...I appreciate your sweet words.😊

Originally posted by: inlieu

@ Indu - I'm loving this so far. I expect it will be even more amazing than Sparsh! 👏 👏 👏

Do you have a thing for the letter 'S', by the way?

Hey Inlieu...Thanks. 😊 You think it'll be better than Sparsh? I don't know pal...We'll have to wait and see whether I am able to do justice to what I have in mind. Sparsh will always be special to me...for many reasons.

The letter "S"? Now that you mention it, it does seem so...right? Especially when I realize the names of the trio that make my little family begin with the letter. But...nah... the word just stuck...the same as Sparsh had stuck. I didn't go looking for these words.😳

Originally posted by: Surish

Thank you Surish. I just adore the little cards you post.😊

Originally posted by: ns1970

Wow great update indu👏

The love they share is just amazing hope for more soon

Aayu is so sweet I really lve this family

Update soon

Thanks ns.🤗