Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 27

Originally posted by: salvatore-nina

I loved the update!

I've mentioned this before, but I love the relationship Yash and Aarti have with each other. Their unconditional love and support for each other is amazing and their relationship with their kids is touching and beautiful. That moment when Yash was thinking about not wanting to see the hurt and sadness in Aarti's eyes and always wanting to keep her happy was wonderful as well as his reaction on seeing Aarti's book. The understanding they have for each other is so special and something that I adore.

I love the characters of Payal and Aayu. Payal has heady notions of love and romance that stems from her observation of her parents. I can understand why Aarti would scold her for thinking so. Payal reveres her parents' relationship with each other so much that she doesn't believe that it's possible for her to have one just like them with her own special someone.

Thanks Nina...Yash and Aarti are happy and have reached a depth of companionship in which there souls have merged. Their individual insecurities and fallacies of the past were warded off by the other's presence...and they have taken strength from one another's presence in their lives.

I have mentioned this about Payal before also...she is at a very impressionable stage of her life where the romantic ideas take shape and lay their roots for the future. And if she gets to witness such deep love between her parents, she is likely to take for granted that there can be none other than them. In a way she is giving up hoping before she even thought about it...and that's why the mother in Aarti protested...or maybe it was something else also!!!🤔

Originally posted by: Zetter

Awww a well written beautiful update, Pal 👏 👏 👏...OMG I loved the journey through AarYa's relationship through the clues that Aarti left for Yash, their love is so pure and breathtaking 😳 😳

Their kids are too adorable especially, Aayu stealing a spoonful of chocolate mousse and Payal is just too much ❤️

Wow that was one great gift that Aarti gave to Yash it was so emotional when he found it, I loved that Aarti corrected him when he said that she made and she told him that they made together 😉 😳

Can't wait for more and once again fab job my friend 🤗

Thanks Zet...means a lot and you know how much.🤗
I am happy that somehow I have managed to make everyone like this family of Samarpan separately from the family of Sparsh. That particular observation satisfies the writer in me...as also your noting that the clues began with the first days and ended with the place where they surrender to each other at the end of the day... only to begin the next day from there.❤️

Originally posted by: saf24

Indu this was such a beautiful update. Loved every bit of it. Enjoyed the kids getting involved in the treasure hunt and then the Yash and Aarti moments. Simply put the update was perfect

Thanks Saf...Your sweet words are always so special. Love you for being there all the time for me.🤗

Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny

Di...all I can say is you made me cry with how beautifully you're shaping up AarYa's love story! 😭 👏 👏

Nothing else...I'm still wiping tears! 😭

Aww Vanny dearie...don't cry. I gave you some light moments too, didn't I? Think of them...like Prateek talking French to a German guy who replies back tongue-in-cheek in English...😃

Originally posted by: sheema_rajoo

Indu I absolutely loved the 4 clues treasure hunt. It was brilliant. I absolutely loved the way aarti went 4 clues, 40 minutes and if you can't find it by then, no gift and certainly no dessert. The way she teased yash by brushing against him and going no dessert made me blush.. Your Samarpan is making me blush like crazy I tell you.

Then the kids and Yash solving the clues together was such a nice read. Aayu is definitely the cheeky one as he sneakingly took a spoonful of chocolate mousse..

My favourite part is definitely the gift of the book Samarpan and the little message Aarti wrote for Yash in it. It was so beautiful and breath taking. I almost teared up at this whole part when I read that Yash had tears in his eyes. That was so sweet and touching Indu. This is just too early for me to tear up. It's just the second update and I'm already getting emotional.

Now Im even more curious to know Aarti's past which I'm very sure you'll disclose in the near future. Her past seems very tragic and filled with sadness as her reaction towards payal's statement that she'll never find someone who loves her as much as her dad loves her mom, proves that Aarti's past was tragic.

Indu this again is another brilliant update by you. Each update is more interesting and beautiful than before. You're simply amazing and definitely know the ways to captivate readers by making the story way beyond interesting. Love love love it. Now I give you a jhappi and huggy for this fantastic update..🤗

Sheema...I just love going through your comments. They always make me revisit the chapter just so I read it from your pov.😃

Aww...don't tear up yet, sweetheart. We shall have some of that later on, although I'll try my best not to make it too melodramatic. As for Aarti's reaction to Payal's innocent comment...well, Yash did reflect that she hasn't yet completely let go of her past yet. It keeps coming back at times...

Glad you liked the Treasure hunting...The clues needed some thinking upon. I wasn't sure how they'll come across.

And then the book...Yash wanted Aarti to get into writing not only because of her inherent talent but also because he had a point to prove...to all those who never gave her existence an iota of thought. He wanted her to succeed so that she never feels low of herself...and that my dear what her past will be all about.


Thank you for my jhappi...keep them coming...😊 🤗

awesome update
ohhh aarti wrote the book and that too with help of yash
love the yash's support and
omggg aayu is such a baby always bugs arya at rt. time😆😆😆😆

waiting for next update

Indu darlz... Ur updates keeps me glue to the sofa.. i am so excited to read your next update.. very curious about Aarti's past.. I am sure i will be needing a pail or bowl when you bring the past of Aarti... Keep going girl... I offical declare that i am you die hard fan..

Hello Indu, ok I have read the update a few times now cause there was something so special about it...just can't quite put it in words. You just keep raising the bar with each update and always have that element of surprise lurking which I just adore. So down to my understanding of things, the treasure hunt was indeed a treasure to read, you worded each clue with so much mystery and they all had the "pun" effect to them. Although the obvious thoughts came to mind each clue held a special moment/memory for Arya which only they could understand. It was like going down memory lane and at the same time giving us a understanding of their lives. Aarthi chose her clues so carefully cause I believe each memory was a time that changed their lives. The actual finding of the gift was like a moment stopped in time. Yash was so full of emotions that it played out beautifully in Aryas conversation and in his actions. It was clear as water how deeply he has faith in his wife and how proud he his that she is apart of him. The painting was a hidden wish that he so wanted for her and in return the painting for her was a sign of her love and appreciation for him being apart of her. The dedication together with reason behind the release of the book was was a moment of serenity felt only when you love purely and infinitely. Again you gave us an understanding of how strong the family ties are and how important a role it plays in our lives. Prateik and Pari's assistance to Aarthi to set up this surprise was so sweet and it shows the level of respect they have for Arya. Nanimaasi and Yash were just too adorable, they have taken to each other with pure love thus making their relationship like that between a mother and her naughty son. I simply love his teasing of her as his girlfriend and her cute blushing...to cute. Aayu is just so full of life and energy, his curious mind is befitting to his age and just makes him all the more adorable with his innocence. Payal is just in awe of her parents love and devotion that she see's them as one of the rare and timeless love stories. Her talks with her friends who have told her about their parents disagreements has only strengthened her belief that her parents have something truely special. Her level of maturity is fascinating to read about cause where most of us at that age are trying to figure ourselves out she thinks far beyond that. Her admiration for her mother upon seeing the book was a beautiful mother/daughter moment which later turned into a beautiful family moment as they all hugged each other. The scene around the fire was funny and a carefree amongst the family. Prateek ad Pari seem to share an equally strong and loving relationship. Their conversation clearly showed that they were youngsters at heart. I could picture Arya and their kids sitting like you described perfectly. It was also a intimate moment betweeen them and their kids. I have similar memories of sitting with my parents and they stick to you for life:) The final chat between Aarthi and Payal which brought Aarthi to tears is a sign that Aarthis past is painful and one she would never want for her daughter. Can't wait to see how you take us forward Indu. You portrayed the scenes with such conviction. I'm guessing we are going to see the story progress through Aarthis words in Samarpan and perhaps a cross over with your writing...just a thought:) You have already weaved me so deep into Samarpan Indu and you have'nt even started dwelling into the start of Aryas story, so if this is'nt a show of your brilliance I don't know what is. Till my next read, signing of buddy:)