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Shalini barman roy

@shalini28

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#591

wow lovely update dear.

u r just mindblowing.

loved the game between them😳

thanks for the pm😳

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kmfan_2

@kmfan_2

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#592

Let me tell you something...

The last chapter was so well written and I had shared that with you...

Coming to this one - what a well written piece...of work...

The characters in your story are so realistic that I can well imagine something like this could have probably happened somewhere..

Whats the other thing I like is the build up into a chapter that you create and then slowly move on into the story telling...

The romance too is not only about the physical aspects but a fine blend of comfort wrapped with a lot of secure feeling in the closeness of the characters!

All in all - a super duper work...I am in love with this story and your story telling!

Sorry for this long comment - but had to make you feel great as you deserve it!

My Sunday is made!

Loads of love...

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Gkathria

@Gkathria

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#593

Wow saffi that was beautiful! and yes truly worth the wait, but don't make us wait too long!!! last part was just hot, hot, hot and too hot!
I'm looking forward to seeing how Yash and Aarti deal with their new found attraction and love towards each other with their past baggage's (Arpita and Prashant)

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Sheema Rajoo

@sheema_rajoo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#594

Saffi oh saffi.. You made me smile like a psycho today...
You know when you said the word derivative, the only thing I could think about was the financial instrument..LOL. I was like huh how is that maths..ROFL.
I could feel aarti's and yash's pain in that 21 questions game. but holy moly, they kissed and that too passionately.. haila.. absolutely fantastic.
I had the stupid smile on my face the moment yash said that he started to like someone else. I was like yash beta tu toh gaya. lol.
beautiful woman and do update soon.

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Jaymini Mistry

@..Mini..

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#595

great chapter saffi .. it was deffo worth da wait !!! I loved the 21 questions aww that was sweet .. and the last bit deffo suited the scene .. great update .. cont soon !! waiting already !