Always,Only You--(fiction) THREAD 1 - Page 64

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Posted: 12 years ago
Great part. I think yash and aarti may help pari and prateek
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Posted: 12 years ago
wOW nice part dear and hoping to see some arya scenes plzz...
I love ur way of writing so much and continue soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lol Deepti - fulfilling your pet pv-desires through this story aren't you? 😆

Very well done - and realistic too. Pratik needs a kick up his you-know-what and who better than Pari to deliver it 😆. The character in the show is just like you described - so his reaction is spot-on. The guy needs to grow a spine.

Now i want to see how you make him salvage the situation - if he can.

BTW - curious. I know in the show, ArYa are like reality tv for the rest of the khandaan so everything they do is public knowledge. But why disclose Pankaj's near-miss (!!) to the family?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny

Fantastic update Di! 👏


Thx😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it😃..[/QUOTE
Thx😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saf24

Superb update. Now that the Pankaj chapter is sorted out, it's good to see you tackle Prateek and Paridhi's issues. beautifully written.


Yes i was itching to have my say on PraDhi matters to.
I am glad you think its good on my part. That's all the encouragement I need to see this track through.
Thx for liking the update😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: RA17

😃😃😃thanks for your PM & update

well as you mention yourslf difficult to take but as itys your version is aleays welcomed be it bua or prateik and pari... coz that just make me more eager to read your next whee AARYA become one and solve theirs😳😳😳 and family issues and with lil wild closeness😉😉😉
So all i cany say goood one dear.. waiting for next...⭐️


Yes I feel AarYa will have a role to play in sorting out this mess too. But I want PraDhi to come to their senses with some effort of their own too.

Thx for the patience. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

Amazing Update, Deepti! 👏👏


Hmm.. SP is all angry with Pankaj.. Maya started to put Pari in dilemma for Pratik's future! 😡 Pari asked Pratik and he's all angry and asked her to get out! 😲 Too bad.. Miss AarYa in this part.. Hope romance will come soon.. 😳😉

Update Soon.. 😳 Thanks for the PM! 😉


Well i wanted to bring PraDhi issues into this story too. So i added Bua's role and SP's indifference to it so make it happen.

All romance and no strife or struggle makes a story boring according to me, I will try and balance both.

Thx for liking the update😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thx you !!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rutu83

get pari to work again---at least in your story

it always bothered me that pari stopped working and everone, including her, is all good and fine with it now 😔

Jo hukkum mere aaka. LOL

Yeah i too found no one bothering about Pari very sad. Let me see if i can do what the did not in PV.


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