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@ksfan2

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#651

omg...pari and prateek's fight!!!...hmm i dont like the way pari is getting jealous of aarthi..love the update thanks for the pm

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pooja vejani

@pvejani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#652

wow...awsome update dear.👏thanx for wonderful update⭐️

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Deepti1808

@Deepti1808

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#653

Originally posted by: sahibasharma
oh my god..that bua is so...".."...i cant explain it in words wat i feel for her...
first she tried to spoil pankaj vidhi's marriage and now paridi prateik's marriage...
that is so cruel of her...
pls give some sense to her!!!!!!!!
u r too good as a writer...
awesome!!!!!!!
continue soon!!!!!!
and pls more of yash and aarti scenes pls...!!!!!

Yes Bua is the main villain in the story so it is understandable to hate her.

Thx for such kind words.

AarYa will play a role in this track too and i will take their story forward as well, rest assured.

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Deepti1808

@Deepti1808

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#654

Originally posted by: miti16295
WOW nice part dear

very nicely written

Thx 😃

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Deepti1808

@Deepti1808

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#655

Originally posted by: lulujjj
wow wonderful update bua plan is amazing , pradhi heating conversation so realistic deepti hats off!!! for this writing of yours loving it dear.

Yes Bua is really evil in my story. She is not sparing anyone here.😆

Thx for finding the conversations realistic. I was inspired by the show and took heaps of dialogues as it is from it only modifying it slightly here and there to suit my version.

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Deepti1808

@Deepti1808

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#656

Originally posted by: ashGC_arja
Great update👏👏... It is really nice that you are concentrating on some of the tracks which were neglected in the show...
I really loved it👍🏼

Thx and this is my attempt at closing yet another open end in PV.

Thx for loving it😃

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Kesha_H.

@Kesha_H.

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#657

wow and Aarti is right how can Yash think abt bua wen she did wht she did I wud've told my daddy and get her thrown out of there 😡😆

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Sunrio80

@Sunrio80

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#658

Another awesome update. You've tackled again the story of one of the Scindia brothers that is also important as a character in the story... Looking forward to the next part of it.😉

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Saffi Sanam

@ilovepyaar

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#659

Great update Deepti! I loved it! ^_^

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Deepti1808

@Deepti1808

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#660

Originally posted by: swaggerchick16
wow and Aarti is right how can Yash think abt bua wen she did wht she did I wud've told my daddy and get her thrown out of there 😡😆

Ah ! the Scindia's miss having you in there house.

Do come on over and throw Bua out. LOL

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