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Saffi Sanam

@ilovepyaar

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#611

VIDHI!!!! 😡

I love the update! Great work... poor Yash, his arm! But it lead to an awesome AarYa scene later on, so I'm not complaining. I can't wait for the next chapter!

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Deepti1808

@Deepti1808

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Posted: 12 years ago

#612

Originally posted by: saf24
Superb update. Really glad the mission was sucessful. Loved the self thoughts between both of them while Aarti was helping Yash with his shirt. Beautifully written update.

Yeah i am also glad that Yashlock part is finished. Phew !!!

For a first time writer i found it a bit challenging.

The AarYa moments are thoroughly inspired from the show, This is just one i would have loved for them to show in the show too. Dressing up is as much fun as (f)un-dressing. LOL.

But then I would be called a tease for not uniting the two love birds.

I have already been called a sadist. LOL

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Deepti1808

@Deepti1808

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#613

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar
VIDHI!!!! 😡

I love the update! Great work... poor Yash, his arm! But it lead to an awesome AarYa scene later on, so I'm not complaining. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Yeah Vidhi !!😡

I always had this scene in mind so i made Yash injure himself during the fight so that this could be possible. So its an update that was written with the end in mind first.

Thx for liking the chapter and waiting for the next !

Edited by Deepti1808 - 12 years ago

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Roza

@..Comrade4eva..

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#614

Originally posted by: Deepti1808

True true one cannot just stop breathing under any cost. LOL
I just wanted to use the lambi saans thing in my FF too that's all.

Ohhh !! yeah Kali i have heard of him but... I was watching Chota Bheem Cartoon the afternoon i wrote this and in it we have a plump boy who is always troubling Bheem...so I took his name..plus it had a very filmy villain sound to it...hence the name.

Thanks for liking the update

It sorta does have a villany sound to it. Huh! I am waiting for your next update before I start spamming your thread like I did with Sadiie's.

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#615

hehe...that was awesome..but dear now toh pls tell na wats the problem with yash?? i mean wat are his doubts?????

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Deepti1808

@Deepti1808

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#616

Originally posted by: sahibasharma
hehe...that was awesome..but dear now toh pls tell na wats the problem with yash?? i mean wat are his doubts?????

😆😆😆 Watch this space to know the reason behind Yash's anger.

Thx for finding the update awesome😳😳

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Sunrio80

@Sunrio80

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#617

Awesome and beautiful update. Eagerly waiting for the next part of this story, it's so lovely👏

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@ksfan2

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#618

love the update deepti di..thanks for the pm

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Indu Ghosh

@InduG64

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#619

Oh wow👏...What better than a little spice to get two hearts to beat in rhythm. So a night of sleuthing helps break the ice somewhat...Great thinking! Tough moments always help shed inhibitions. Hopefully now the two dunces will start getting a whiff of the other's feelings...

Another smooth, pacy narration, Deepti...and might I add, so you!😃