Always,Only You--(fiction) THREAD 1 - Page 49

Originally posted by: pvejani

very interesting 😃...enjoyed it😃.

thanx for update...

waiting for next part.

superb updates deepti..
but ermm don't mind me asking if he was spiked how did he know he didn't even touch her 😕.. Ok he might have had his clothes on but then what basis is she using to threaten him😕
anyways i'm really loving the bond these two brother's share..it's wonderful
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Lovely update Deepti👏👏... such a great writer and you know where exactly to stop to keep that tension😉😆...
Panku saying Yash "there is no grey for you"😆😆... i could not help but laugh it out as these have been what we keep yelling out in our DC sessions so you voiced it out in ur FF through Panku😉... thank God ur Yash from the start has little brains at least and not like the PV wala Yash a.k.a Dunce😆...

Wow! Great bonding between the brothers. Loved it.

Fab update deepti and the convo between the bros only about them were superb i just loved this part.Awesome deepti

loved the brother bonding...thanks for the pm

Nice update! 👏👏 Lovely brothers I can say! Waiting for the next.. 😉

Originally posted by: Deepti1808

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I really wanted to assassinate Panku's character. But as the feedback i got was pro-Panku being good i changed my story a bit so that he still come through more or less unscathed.

If Vidhi did love Pankaj once why did she change so much? Something worth exploring.

I can understand a husband's POV to be the most important person in his wife's life but that does not excuse his looking else where when he stops being "THE ONE" in her life.

Again its just communication problem that is leading to all sorts of trouble. Lets see how Vidhi handles this truth. Coming up in the next chapter.

@bold: oh you wanted to assassinate pakhu's character ? then why didn't you proceeded doing that? its your fiction/story i really wanted to know your side of story . and about feedback for Panku's character ..i think readers feedback got influenced from the show ...in show it is shown that vidhi is entirely at fault . she is the one who is lacking in being a good wife .

@italic: i agree 100%

nice..so aarya will play a major role in sorting out their mess may they look into their matter also. yeah communication problem is biggest problem of this world even aarya's is not left untouched by it hmm vidhi's character is very prudent i am waiting to see her reaction . waiting for next chapter

hmm pankaj yash bonding nice one dear just missing aarya n your thoughts i mean aarti's yash 😉😉😉thanks for PM & update

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