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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ashGC_arja

Lovely update Deepti👏👏... such a great writer and you know where exactly to stop to keep that tension😉😆...
Panku saying Yash "there is no grey for you"😆😆... i could not help but laugh it out as these have been what we keep yelling out in our DC sessions so you voiced it out in ur FF through Panku😉... thank God ur Yash from the start has little brains at least and not like the PV wala Yash a.k.a Dunce😆...

And u beautifully brought the Pankaj-Vidhi issue out👏👏... well i am waiting to see if this confrontation with Pankaj puts Yash in his thought process

Thx for the appreciation.

Don't know about the great writer part but i would say this is me being a great viewer. I love PV so much that i making it happen in this story. This whole track is inspired from the serial.

Yeah had to include some of the DC discussions. We have had too many future track discussions too this is just one of them.

Yash is a dunce in my FF too. Else why was he angry after spending a night with his wife whom he loves.

Yeah Pankaj-Vidhi issue was already more or less addressed to in the serial i just took it forward.

@bold: Yeah giving advice about sorting out difference through communication was easy for Yash i hope he practices what he preaches.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Wow! Great bonding between the brothers. Loved it.


Thx !😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lulujjj

Fab update deepti and the convo between the bros only about them were superb i just loved this part.Awesome deepti


Thank you so much Naeema. Your nod means a lot to me😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ksfan2

loved the brother bonding...thanks for the pm


Thanks 😃 and if you got my PM means you are in my buddylist😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

Nice update! 👏👏 Lovely brothers I can say! Waiting for the next.. 😉


Thanks 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pankhudi11



@bold: oh you wanted to assassinate pakhu's character ? then why didn't you proceeded doing that? its your fiction/story i really wanted to know your side of story . and about feedback for Panku's character ..i think readers feedback got influenced from the show ...in show it is shown that vidhi is entirely at fault . she is the one who is lacking in being a good wife .

@italic: i agree 100%

nice..so aarya will play a major role in sorting out their mess may they look into their matter also. yeah communication problem is biggest problem of this world even aarya's is not left untouched by it hmm vidhi's character is very prudent i am waiting to see her reaction . waiting for next chapter

I know people were influenced by the show but its OK i am happy with this too.

Yes Aarya action coming up.😆 along with Vidhi's reaction.

Thx for your detailed responses😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: RA17

hmm pankaj yash bonding nice one dear just missing aarya n your thoughts i mean aarti's yash 😉😉😉thanks for PM & update


Thx for liking the bonding part😃, it was an bro-exclusive chapter Aarya will feature in the next.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

😊...

too good...yash's outburst on pankaj is justified...poor pankaj...he lost vidhi's attention and tried to seek attention from outside...he did a wrong dee but still i feel pity on him!!!!! he shud have talked to vidhi!!!!!!
gr8 brother bonding!!!!!!!!!
congrtas ...u write too well!!!!!!


Yeah there is some pity factor for Panku but i think it was very weak of him to succumb(more or less) and fall in a trap like that.

He will talk to her now. He has no choice in the matter as Vidhi already suspects something.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thx !!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very interesting Deepti...You touched upon Pankaj's marital problems...a topic we so wanted the CVs to pursue in our DC discussions. I am so glad you brought it up...The scenario is so logical. A man can cross the Laxman Rekha if he find himself neglected buy his wife for prolonged amount of time...and well, bad luck for Pankaj that he fell into wrong hands. So what shall we have now? Yashlock Holmes to the rescue via some sleuthing? 😃

I love the smoothness in your narration. 👏 Love it...Looking forward to what impact this situation has on Yash/Aarti's deadlock.

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