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Posted: 12 years ago

#501

Deepti - thank you. I am so glad you kept my faith in Pankaj alive. Like i said, he is too decent a guy and you just proved it. But you painted a very real scenario of Vidhi-Pankaj marriage, something that happens in many households.

I am hoping your Yash can translate this experience into his own marriage and take the lesson he just learnt and apply it there. Glad that Pankaj spelt it out for him - everything is black and white for him. The guy sometimes needs to be told the obvious.

Beautifully written my friend.

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Deepti1808

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: InduG64
Very interesting Deepti...You touched upon Pankaj's marital problems...a topic we so wanted the CVs to pursue in our DC discussions. I am so glad you brought it up...The scenario is so logical. A man can cross the Laxman Rekha if he find himself neglected buy his wife for prolonged amount of time...and well, bad luck for Pankaj that he fell into wrong hands. So what shall we have now? Yashlock Holmes to the rescue via some sleuthing? 😃

I love the smoothness in your narration. 👏 Love it...Looking forward to what impact this situation has on Yash/Aarti's deadlock.

DC discussions led me to take this track. I wanted to see this in PV for the longest time. But PV is too busy with Aarya and PraDhi to give ViPan a chance.😆

Panku's reference now and then(in the serial) do give us a glimpse about how needy he is. And Vidhi's blind acceptance that she is way past her youth to still be having romance in her life give her POV. So something had to give. And i tried to show what it could lead to.

It is a very common thing that happens a lot around. That is why it was easy for me to write about it.

Yes Yashlock it is. I am really looking forward to that as i have never written anything like thatI hope i do justice to it.

All the books and movies i have read and seen so far should come to my aid hopefully. Fingers crossed.😆

About AarYa situation being influenced by this...well that only time will tell.

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Deepti1808

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Posted: 12 years ago

#503

Originally posted by: kdsubs1
Deepti - thank you. I am so glad you kept my faith in Pankaj alive. Like i said, he is too decent a guy and you just proved it. But you painted a very real scenario of Vidhi-Pankaj marriage, something that happens in many households.

I am hoping your Yash can translate this experience into his own marriage and take the lesson he just learnt and apply it there. Glad that Pankaj spelt it out for him - everything is black and white for him. The guy sometimes needs to be told the obvious.

Beautifully written my friend.

WOW!! two of my favs giving comments back to back.

Today is my lucky day !

I wanted to make Panku cheat you know. It gives more scope to explore if a spouse actually cheats. What happens next?? Does the relationship collapse, and even if they do stay together due to various compulsions does it actually work out. With the trust lost can it ever be gained again.

But i chose the easier route. Panku did not actually stray so lets see how Vidhi reacts.

AarYa will be busy trying to fix this for ViPan so think time for reflection is going to have to wait.

Yes that black and white thing was also from the discussions of DC. So not much originality from me is there.😆

Thx for the response😃