PAST OR FUTURE AN AARYA FF- PART 10 (PAGE 28)

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Shashi1984

@Shashi1984

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Nice! But didn't like the sad end. If Arpita shot Prashant and she also died. Then how can Yash die when he got shot in arm. He can survive as Aarti take him to hospital, and maybe they both can save their three children, and then live happily as their tormentors died who forcefully separated them.

That's my view to the story. But thanks for completing.

Edited by Shashi1984 - 12 years ago

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sara1990

@sara1990

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#192

Nice update

ending was sad😭

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RIYA

@RA17

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#193

well your writing no doubts is outstanding but waht was that it was i know sudden but never thot this will be the end but well i guess i shud stop expecting a happily evey after endings from you

but never the less i njy each update n thanks for pm👏👏

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Aisyah Abdul

@IsYaRoCHeR

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#194

😭😭😭... Why have you ended it in a sad mood?? But cool, it was a good ending!! 👏👏👏

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ANU

@kratzyfan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#195

carrie,another wonderful story👍🏼...but sad ending..well done

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pooja vejani

@pvejani

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#196

loved it👏.ff is beautifully written.👏

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Roza

@..Comrade4eva..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: miyasingh1
i liked it but it ended sad

Thank you...😳

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Roza

@..Comrade4eva..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: saf24
Superb update with a really sad ending. Liked it though

Thanks...😳

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Roza

@..Comrade4eva..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: swaggerchick16
u and ur sad endings but it was nice so Aarti died due to delivery nd Prashant shot Yash at the back of his had and ooh Arpita was not tht much of a b**ch after all yay!! 😊

Nooo...Aarti died whenever she died, this was at her deathbed a few years after she ran away after delivery. No she wasn't that much of a b***h!

Thanks..😳

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Roza

@..Comrade4eva..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: Yaarti.mini
Carissa .. I loved the ending .. make yash die what the bug mayn .. your really good at writing sad OS and FFs ...

hey! I see you used my idea? ;)

Thanks Mini...sorry sorry, but I had to kill everyone but Yash JR...😳

Na, I was planning the little note since the beginning!