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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#511

Wow another beautiful yet so emotional update 😭.

Glad Ansh was the source through which Aarti was able to finally break down and let her heart finally heal ( even though it was for a little while).

Loved the bonding between Ansh and Aarti 👏 😊.

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Shashi1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

#512

Wow! Fabulous part. Little Ansh helping Aarti to coping the lack of her child in her life. Ansh magic works. Aarti again left helpless after Ansh gone. Waiting the two lonely souls Ansh and Aarti to meet again, and Yash entry.

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J12L85

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Posted: 12 years ago

#513

Wow brilliantly written Kat, loved it. As much I love lenghty updates I will not dare complain cause you have hit the spot of fulfillment for me. You totally did justice to our adorable Ansh and his presence. He brought about the desired response wanted from Zoya, Vidhi and Shobha to help Aarthi heal. Superbly portrayal of how this little prince and his mere touch broke down the walls and tore at Aarthis heart which she has closed off. Their time together may have been short but it was memorable and most importantly adorable Ansh has brought Aarthi back to life from her almost lifeless existence. Loved how u brought about their similarities with Aarthi being an orphan and understanding n feeling for Ansh who has lost his mother... Now for the moment we have all been waiting for, the arrival of Yash:) Can't wait for the next update Kat, thanx for the PM and brilliant work:)

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Zahra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#514

Poor Aarti.
Her happiness with Ansh was short-lived.
But am glad that this helped her overcome her loss.
Continue soon.
And thanks for the PM.

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drmhp

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Posted: 12 years ago

#515

awesomely written part👏

it really touched my heart

so Arpita is dead

Arti didn't have a choice, but at least the baby was asleep. And then he started moaning, as the scream penetrated his unconscious, nearly awakening him. Instinctively Arti reached out and patted him gently on the chest. As one of her long fingers brushed past his mouth, he made a sucking motion. Fascinated, Arti brought her finger close to his mouth again, gently touching his lower lip. Ansh immediately latched on to her finger, pulling it into his mouth as he suckled it, soothing himself back to a deep sleep. A chuckle escaped her as she heard the slurp when he finally slept and loosened his hold on her finger.

@bold - this para was amazingly written . Loved it the most

ansh has a magic.

finally when aarti cried for her lost baby, tears literally came out from my eyes 😭

it was too difficult to hold emotions while reading it. i can't imagine how u wrote it.it must have been difficult for u.

finally yash is gona make appearance . waiting for it

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alekhika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#516

Nyc update,lvd the bond btween aarti & ansh. Cnt soon.

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RIYA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#517

Kat you left a lump in my throat I mean a mother meet her son this is not Im saying as aarti ansh bond and all replicating feelings of show but your aarti meet her son which even she don't know will it b (which you exactly quoted in She spent every moment she could with him. She was frantic, holding him, kissing him, playing with him as if there was no tomorrow. And for her, there was none) but those 2 weeks she gave it to him and he find a heaven we call MAA

I mean really heart touching sunanina and vidhi hug to aarti outcry at satation yes this is the shortest and I guess one of your best..no words are still to explain how I felt and I can really empathize what it wud have been when you have written

Bow down 👏👏

This one my fav"Little Ansh had done his magic –he had managed to place a wedge into the door that Arti had shut."

And With Ansh leaving she at last acknowledged her loss

ans my fav YASHJI is also coming in next😉

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Aisyah Abdul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#518

Oh Kat! It's just amazing and wow!! 👏👏

Glad Aarti had finally tried to escaped from her "nightmare" past! 😊 Her moments with Ansh were just too lovely.. I felt they have strong Silent Bond! 😃 I know soon they'll meet back! 😉

Waiting for Yash's entry soon.. 😉 Update soon! 😊

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Sunrio80

@Sunrio80

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Posted: 12 years ago

#519

So emotional yet very lovely update. Hope for Yash appearance

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kdsubs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#520

Naureen - thank you so much pal. You really felt for Arti didn't you? Your comments for both parts of chapter 6 left me speechless. You captured the essence in your words - thank you!!

And just for you i will add a Yash-scene in the next update 😆. You have been so impatiently patient about him 😉.

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