ArYa FF: Dil Jaanta Hai - Thread 1 (chapt 1-10) - Page 41

Originally posted by: MelodiousDreams

Sometimes the slow parts that don't seem to "go anywhere" on the surface are actually my favorites. The psychological depth revealed in this part makes it such a fantastic read. Being able to visualize a frustrated and lamenting Zoya, a patient and understanding Ahmed, a numb and unresponsive Aarti who has lost everything but is now slowly, oh-so-slowly, beginning to take steps toward normalcy and toward finding a new world to make her own after such a devastating loss...All of that makes my heart ache, but I love that I can envision the scenes in my head as I read your words. No matter how fast or slow the pace, there's always depth!

Loved the update, Kat. Hope to see the next one soon!

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

Awesome Update, Kat! 👏👏

Loved the Love and Care for Aarti by Zoya, Shobha ma and Dubey ji.. 😃

Hope Aarti will be back to her work soon! 😉

Update soon.. 😃

Originally posted by: J12L85

Hi dear lovely update. As u said there was'nt much given away in this update but for me it gave me the feeling that there is a light at the end of the tunnel for Aarthi after this traumatic ordeal. It was heartbreaking when Aarthi in self thought was saying how she needs to feel needed again. Zoya loves Aarthi so much and it was so sincere how she felt Aarthis pain and loss. Update soon and keep up the great work. Thanx for the PM:)

Originally posted by: RA17

lat it was beautifully written as it is said that the the ppl who leave us is gone but ppl who remain for them it is one of the toughest phase and this is waht trylly refflects in your update aarti and dubey loss

n zoya and ahmed...really hats off to ggreat frnz who r their to support aarti... soon she will come all i can say she is tough gal have seen a lot.. and tough time never last tough ppl do so is aarti..

really very emotional one// thanks for update and PM😃

Originally posted by: kdsubs1

Ah Borna - so true. So are we becoming BB too 😆? I need parts like these for character development - don't really know how to write without them. So when you and some others appreciate it, feel it, understand it - i literally get goosebumps. Thank you so so so very much.

Originally posted by: MelodiousDreams

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If the acronym "BB" is what I assume it is referring to (clarify just in case, would you, Kat? 😆), then I would say, yes...I do believe that might be happening!

Aww, Kat. Why are you thanking me/us for that? Your writing style delves so easily into the minds of the characters without breaking the flow of the narrative, and I am all for narrative flow and details, you know! 😃 Thank goodness you don't compromise on the character development portions of your stories - although that sounds odd...I think all good stories are constantly developing their characters as they go along - whether there are moments of stasis or not, the interactions and thoughts have effects. That is life, isn't it?