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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: elanpremi

awesome dear, touched to see the family standing strong for each other



Thank you, Elanpremi. That's what families do na - stand by each other when tragedy hits, gain strength for oneself by giving strength to the other.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Just an Awesome update

Aarti's loss is really tragic , I hope the situation can get easier for her



Thank you, Taahir. Arti's situation will get better, but it will take time. Just as it would in real life...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amaxing chapter Kat 👏
Simply amaxing 👏
Each emotion was lyk written to b felt 👏
I dunno y but I ain't able to say more , it was beautifully penned 👏
Thanx for updating 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
I don't think I've ever reviewed before to let you know how grateful Iam to you for sharing this piece of sheer beauty with us.
First and foremost,Prashant,God rest his soul,wasn't simply a monster in this story.He was very human to me.He had his shades of grey,probably more so than others,but not completely dark.
I liked the fact that instead of making him cheat and sweeping him under the bed to get the coast clear for a while,you had him die in an accident.He had been unsure when he was about to marry aarti and also when they were about to have a kid.But,that was understandable,relatable.

Aarti,here ,is for me the the quintessential example of a person who is the product of their circumstances.I could understand her impatience when she put forth to prashant that she wants to marry him.

Yash,for me is still not figuring in the equation cause I don't know what he will be like.What role is he going to play in aarti's life is clear but how will he figure into the equation is the question.

I love the way you narrate.Loved the update after the accident.It was beautifully penned.

Waiting for Yash's story to unfold.Kindly continue soon.😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Kat!! 🤗
I'm finally catching up on my PMs and I read it all in one go. I am now forever your fan! This one is absolutely beautiful! Just magnificent! 👏 I can feel Aarti's pain. She loves Prashant she really does, and from being alone, to getting a dream like family, to going back to square one. I can in only imagine the grief. It was nice knowing Aarti and Yash already know each other. That static scene gave me butterflies! Same case with Arpita and Yash, I really want to know what's going on. Vishi's foreshadowing lines are making me impatient. Prashant, he's a complicated character. He loves Aarti but he's too controlling. I don't know what to think about him. Pratik, is so cute! Payal is Vidhi's daughter, and her middle name is Aarti, that scene was wonderful. Pankaj is so very understanding. I can't wait for Aarya's next meeting!
Thanks for all the PMs!! Do continue soon, and I'll like all the parts ASAP! Thanks once again! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update. It's really heart-wrenching.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Poor poor Aarti

Such a tragedy. I wonder how she will come out of it.
She is showing signs of progress
But is she really there yet????

Wonderful wonderful update Kat

I have no hurry to learn about Yash
Bring him in when you think the time is right

I am perfectly OK with the way the story has progressed so far

Great job!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Amaxing chapter Kat 👏
Simply amaxing 👏
Each emotion was lyk written to b felt 👏
I dunno y but I ain't able to say more , it was beautifully penned 👏
Thanx for updating 😊



Thank you, Naureen. I am never sure if i can portray the emotions as i see my characters feel them. And this whole situation is so difficult to describe...so when you say you can feel each emotion, you overwhelm me. Thank you my dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vidya29

I don't think I've ever reviewed before to let you know how grateful Iam to you for sharing this piece of sheer beauty with us.

First and foremost,Prashant,God rest his soul,wasn't simply a monster in this story.He was very human to me.He had his shades of grey,probably more so than others,but not completely dark.
I liked the fact that instead of making him cheat and sweeping him under the bed to get the coast clear for a while,you had him die in an accident.He had been unsure when he was about to marry aarti and also when they were about to have a kid.But,that was understandable,relatable.

Aarti,here ,is for me the the quintessential example of a person who is the product of their circumstances.I could understand her impatience when she put forth to prashant that she wants to marry him.

Yash,for me is still not figuring in the equation cause I don't know what he will be like.What role is he going to play in aarti's life is clear but how will he figure into the equation is the question.

I love the way you narrate.Loved the update after the accident.It was beautifully penned.

Waiting for Yash's story to unfold.Kindly continue soon.😊



Vidya - welcome to Dil Jaanta Hai. And thank you so much for coming.

This whole story started because of Prashant you know - he was such a ...normal person in the show. Probably the most normal, closest to reality character and i wanted to explore that further. I really wanted to keep him alive after the accident and see how things panned out between him and Arti - but this version is a fan-fiction dedicated to PV - so Yash has to come na. And hence, Prashant had to die. Sigh...I am thinking of an alternate version though...let's see, maybe one day i will pen it down.

As to how Yash fits into the equation - wait. I'll make him fit 😆. He is the reason i "killed" (as some one claimed) Prashant so he will fit in. When he arrives and the story embraces him, let me know your thoughts on the fit - i will be very anxious to hear back from you.

Once again, thank you so much for joining me and my characters here. And thank you for your detailed comments.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kdsubs1

Naeema, Rasheeda, Freya, Miti, Sheen, Alekhika - thank you so much.



ur most welcome 😊

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