Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 82

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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update Indu
Love the poem in the begining
Poor Palak...Waiting for dinner date
Pls continue soon

Happy New Year to u
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gmhatcher

This story just keeps getting better and better. I'm loving the assertive, thoughtful Yash.
Thanks so much for the update.
Gemmy
Where are my manners? Hope you had a very HAPPY NEW YEAR




Thanks Gemmy. You have a great year as well...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Amazing update Indu.

Love cute little Palak. Her bonding with Yash and Aarti is so beautiful. Poor little soul was so hurt when ammaji shouted at Aarti 😭. I felt like giving her a biiiggg 🤗.
The way Yash grabbed Mr.Sharma and threatened him shows that he will always be there to protect his Misty.
And in the end Yash realised the real reason of Aarti been scared. Aarti is scared that Yash's family won't accept her as she is a widow. Don't worry Aarti, your Yashji will pacify his family and they will accept you.
Can't wait for their dinner date.
Indu please don't torture us and write the next update tomorrow itself as I want to read about their dinner date. HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU INDU 🤗




Hey Nikki...glad you liked this one as well. 🤗
Oh...Palak knew something was fishy. She knows Badi dadi is not a very amiable person. As for Yash, the realization is fast setting in that for Mishti every day is a struggle by itself...with people judging her character in every sphere of life...personal and professional both.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: miti16295

another awesome update👏

and Happy new year




Thanks Miti...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: salvatore-nina

Indu I loved this update as well! I love how your chapters end, with so much suspense and this one ended so cutely, with Mishti jealous at Yash's ruse. I can't wait to see how Yash goes about pulling Mishti's leg and making her spill the beans about the truth. I love this Yash and I loved how he came to her rescue even though, as Mishti said, she's capable of taking care of herself. Looking forward to the next update.


I hope you have an amazing New Year Indu!




Nina, thank you so much. 🤗 I am glad you like the characterizations of the story. This Yash is a little more proactive because of their past history...and yeah, Mishti can get as much angry as she wants, she won't be able to shrug off this bodyguard...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow..Great story👏👏..Interesting concept⭐️
all the updates are Amazing and wonderfully written..👍🏼
Beautifully portrayed the character of yash and aarti👏⭐️..Loved it
Eagerly waiting for next update
Thanks for pm😊
Edited by srirad - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
speechless. i'm practically getting addicted to this story. you write so well.
anxiously waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I read all the last 3 updates in a go. They r really amazing. As the name goes 'Sparsh' every word of this ff toches my heart. Love the way how Yash is trying to get Mishty speak the truth n also make her J. Good work.
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh so... yash is trying to make mishti J... well J track is something that goes well at anytime...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saf24

Gosh Indu I think I've said this before but these updates keep getting better and better. This was a fantastically written part and I loved it




Saf, thanks pal...🤗

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