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anusha arja

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

perfect ending!!! nicely written... yash is all etched in my heart...

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smileymj10

@smileymj10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Oh well, what can I say?? I'm so touched!!!
That was a wonderful closure my dear!!!
But I don't want it to end that soon!! 😡 Can we still have the next part??😆

As usual, I loved reading it!!!
You're such a brilliant writer..
And u're destined to do more!!!

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sia221

@sia221

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Simple yet amazing and beautifully written... !!! 😊😊

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rutu83

@rutu83

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

👏 I wish i could say something about how amazing this is, but i'm no wordsmith and i don't think i'd be doing a justice to it.

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aditi sengupta

@gcluv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

just beautiful👏

i always follow your analysis on DC👍🏼

i love the poetic feel in your writing.

love your style of story telling

please continue

getting addicted to your writing indu

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PADMA VARANASI

@padmavar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Very nice update. waiting for the next one.

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@FireLordPhoenix

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Indu, this was so beautiful and spellbinding. I don't really know what to say except that I'm super glad that you decided to do a second part. It was so touching and I agree with Deepti, it made me sentimental as well. The kids were so sweet in accepting the other adult as their other parent and Yash and Aarti's relationship was so beautifully sketched out. They had found each other all those years ago, only to have lost each other and then to find each other again. That is destiny indeed.

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Kesha_H.

@Kesha_H.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Awww soo sweet I'm feeling kinda mushy today so I lyk ur story😆

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Rishma

@darrish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Thank you soo much for the second part!! I loved it. Superb writing as usual.🤗

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--Iqra--

@--Iqra--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

That was beautiful! Absolutely beautiful! I had no idea you were going to continue but now you have, Please Update Soon! This part was very well written and all the emotions were portrayed perfectly! 👏

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