PV FF: Soul Connection - PART 5 NOW UP (Pg 19) - Page 8

"Make sure that when you marry, you marry someone you love with all your heart, some one who comes first in your life, some one you can't wait to spend the rest of your life with."

So true yaar. So very true.

U have shown the real pain of a women when she faces something like this. I can't actually imagine but still its so visibly painful being a second woman in ur life partner's life.

U portrayed it really well. Hats off dear.

and I also loved the line "Yes, we would have been happy together". It said so many things yet so many to be clarified.

Loving this story. 👏👏👏👏

Going to the 3rd chapter.

loads of love
Vinu

@Vanny - thanks dear. This part was dicey - very critical for character development, but not too much story progression. I am glad it still came through as relevant to you. And yes, our "Mouni baba' finally had to open up. I wonder what all he said to Arti...had to be pretty special for her to recall them through her coma-haze.

@Pearl - you hate me like you love me 😉. Love you right back 🤗. I think Aman knows whether he loves Neha or not - he just hasn't accepted his knowledge yet - much like our Yash babua in the show.

@Deepti - thank you so much. I think it was important for Aman to have Arti realize the role his mother played in her life - glad that section came through properly - wrote it in the middle of the night, so wasn't very sure of it.

@Elanpremi, Dona86, Miti - thank you!!

@Zetter - thank you! This is a difficult story for me to write, so when it touches your emotional chords, it makes my efforts worthwhile.

@Ruch - thank you! I am carrying over the characterizations for the men and Arti from the show - just building on them. I hope the characterizations of the women introduced and yet to come will resonate with you too.

@Taahir - thank you! The designing the necklace bit came from real life - I needed a way for Arti to realize what she meant to Sneha without Sneha telling her. Sneha wouldn't tell anyway - not in her character - and words wouldn't convince Arti. So the necklace bit was convenient.

@Vinu - WOW - thank you! You always take so many pains to give me your detailed feedback - thank you so much. Someday I will have to write a special story just to thank you - any requests??

KAT I shall try to read it during the weekend wen I'm less lazy🤣

As always, Brilliant Update! I love your writing, it is mesmerizing. Thanks for the PM! I'll be waiting for your next update! 😳

nice update

Originally posted by: kdsubs1

@Vanny - thanks dear. This part was dicey - very critical for character development, but not too much story progression. I am glad it still came through as relevant to you. And yes, our "Mouni baba' finally had to open up. I wonder what all he said to Arti...had to be pretty special for her to recall them through her coma-haze.

@Kat: This has been such a beautiful read. 👏Gosh, you are such a flowy writer...smooth, yet intriguing. Not once do the senses shift from the direction the writing takes the reader. I love the characterization of Aman...he is so genuine and so open with his own emotions. Superb!! I really loved it.