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Punar Vivah according to my version i hope you like it
Party 1: Yash feels guilty, Aarti change behavior
Party 4: Aarya have a hot moments, Yash feels jealous:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/punar-vivah/3225289/aarya-os-last-part?pn=12�
Party 5 Yash almost confess his feelings,https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/66879182�
Party 6: Yash prepare a surprise for Aarti. Yash and Prashant meets each other https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/punar-vivah/3225289/aarya-os-last-part?pn=21�
Party 7: Yash became possesive and confess his love:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/punar-vivah/3225289/aarya-os-last-part






It was a week that Yash tried to found Aarti but in vain.šŸ˜•
Yash was standing in his room, the tired face, the red eyes ... it was a week that he had not slept. 🤢
He spent his night to remember all the times that he was so rude to Aarti, all the times he had broken everything that came into his hand,
all the horrible words which he had thrown, it is obvious Aarti was afraid of him that is why she had left the house
without saying anything about her pregnancy.šŸ˜”
But this was not all, a very strange sense began to invade him.. the vacuum.. yes since that Aarti had left the house
the vacuum has been installed and Yash could no longer endure it.
It was too much, he had to find Aarti? He had to speak with her, he should apologize to her.

Yashji: Why I have been so insensitive and selfish😔? I have not even tried to understand his pain😭. It is imperative to find her
Aartiji where are you?




Since Aarti had left the home, she had found shelter at a longstanding friend in Delhi. A friend so nice and understanding, she told her: You can stay as long as you wish Aarti, I am pleased to have you with Ansh.
Despite the warm hospitality of her friend, Aarti not found peace.😭
She left home for Yash happiness but she certainly caused the grief for his daughters Payal Palak and😭 ...She could not stop thinking about them.😭
Aarti missed terribly Yash but she had to leave, get away from him...
She was looking at her mobile phone filled with Yash messages, she dared not look. šŸ˜”
Since the beginning Yash had treated, injured ... yes she was scary at first.
but not now she must think the baby and pregnancy this relationship must end for the sake of the baby.🄺

Aartiji (touching your baby in): for you I no longer have to stress or grief .. for you I will go all the way.
I love Yash so much but you are more important ... you're a part of him .. a part of him who loves me😭



Yash went for the umpteenth time to Shobba Ma place. This situation was unbearable.He did not even know where to search

Yashji: Shobba Ma Please tell me? where Aarti? to whom? Please I'm going crazy

Shobba: this is my daughter, I am as concerned as you. I do not know where she is, she did not say anything ... oh my god .. my daughter😭

Yashji: I find her .. I'm going to locate her cell phone. I have no choice. She is pregnant! it can not be far from me in this condition.😳

On hearing these words Shobba remembers Aarti pregnancy is dangerous.

Shobba: Yash beta listen I must tell you ...

At that time Yash phone rang , Suraj Pratab was on the phone

Suraj: Yash come home I have a friend of the police wants to see you, it will help us find Aarti bahu

Yashji: Ok I get it right away. This is great I have a favor to ask.

Suraj: Which?

Yashji: Bauji can you ask him to locate the mobile Aarti?

Suraj: This is why I brought my friend come back soon beta.

Yash in his car remembers Aarti suddenly her heart began to beat faster and he began to tremble

Yashji: What is happening to me? my heart beats so very much, so much as this hurts me.
Aartiji..?ā¤ļø dhadak dhadakā¤ļø




Soon the rest of the story if you wantā¤ļø

Here are the rest of the story I did not have time to addšŸ˜‰


Back home yash greeted the police

Yashji: Good morning inspector sahib.
INSP: Good morning Mr Sindhia how are you?
Yashji: I am not good at all, my wife leave the house and I do not know where she is. I have found my wife inspector sahib
she is pregnant .. I am very worriedšŸ˜• .. (Suraj Pratap gives him a surprised smilešŸ˜‰) .. I mean everyone is worried.
Insp: Mr Sindhia I will not hide from you that to locate her cell phone she would have to answer the phone. Have you tried to call?
Yashji: Yes on several occasions it sounds but it does not respond.
Suraj Pratap: Inspector sahib we need help before my wife comes back I want everything to be settled.
Insp: Yes I will do my best. Can I ask you the number of your daughter?
Suraj Pratab: Well sure. Hold and thank you very much. I count on you inspector.
Yashji: Keep me thank you for your help.

Delhi Aarti was out with Ash in a park

Ansh: Mom? The games will last much longer? šŸ˜” I really miss Dad and Payal, Palak and everyone.😭
Aartiji: Ansh you trust your father right? It will come soon do not worry ok?
Ansh: yes I trust. Dad will find us.😃

Aarti looked Ansh running, the tears came to her eyes, but she recovered herself. She had promised her baby ..
Her friend who knew everything could not help telling her:

Friend: Aarti, let me tell you something.
Aartiji: Yes tell me
Friend: I do not think you should leave your love. I think instead that we must fight! for your children.You can not remain more
long without your daughters...without Yash because you really love him. Its just impossible.
Aartiji: I know, but he does not love me he was clear about it, I will not force him
Friends: I think you should act like him. Ignoring a maximum ..
Yash usual to see Aarti loving, generous
affectionate .. ect
But he did not used to seeing you ignore him. Listen to my advice and you will see ok?
Aarti: But I can't go home after all that has happened and ..
friend: He will find you and when you get home you do what I tell you okay?
Aartiji: we will see ..šŸ˜•

Yash was in his room, he could not concentrate on his work. Vidhi entered:

Vidhi: Yash Bahya? I have something to show you
Yashji ... (lost in his thoughts he did not listen)šŸ¤”
Vidhi: Yash Bahya?
Yashji: erm? Yes bahbi?
Vidhi: I said that I have something to show you, on your birthday, friends gave me this ..
I think you should see it .. hold
Yashji: A CD? one bua ..😲
Vidhi: Yes take ... I'll make tea ok?
Yashji: thank you

He put the CD in the laptop .. Yash felt his heart break into pieces 🄺.. This video Aarti had left for him made ??him very sad. Seeing aarti wearing his pretty golden sari, sad, her voice trembling, his eyes moist...
his eyes filled with tears, he could no longer swallow..His heart was beating so hardā¤ļø, he could hear😭

Yashji: What is happening to me? Why Aarti sadness came over me .. I can not see the sad.😭

at that time Vidhi entered with the tea and she was surprised to see Yash cry. Yash wiped her tears quickly.

Vidhi: Yash bahya? Are you okay? You cry?
Yashji: No. .. NO .. I .. who who😳
Vidhi: Yash Bahya it is not a shame to cry for his wife and ..
Yashji: I do not cry for Aart ..😔 I .. I miss Ansh .. that's it

Vidhi: Me too Bahya. Aarti especially a pregnant woman sad and stressed and we do not know where is she .. if ever it happens ..😲
Yashji: Vidhi bahbi never say it ok? Nothing is going to come right? Neither she nor my baby!😔
Vidhi:😲

the rest soonšŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow! That was very touching! Please do continue soon! Wish u all the best! 😊
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Very nice story. Please update soon.
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Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny

Wow! That was very touching! Please do continue soon! Wish u all the best! 😊

Originally posted by: padmavar

Very nice story. Please update soon.




THank you so muchā¤ļø

ok the update soon
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Very nice! Please continue on
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Originally posted by: padmavar

Very nice story. Please update soon.


Thank youā¤ļø maybe I will introduce prashant next time it will be šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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continueee
im really enjoying the way ur expressing yash's emotions and aarti's too
pls pm when u continue
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Seriously wow!! Loved it to core. Do pm me when u update will u.
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very interesting
please continue
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Nice. Continue, and update soon.

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