The Losing Game, Mumbai Scenes - Aug 7, pg 8

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Piie Dee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Sweeettt!!! Me liking it verrryyy much!!!

Pls continue soon & thks for the PM!

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Saffi Sanam

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Thanks darrish! I'm glad you liked it! 😳

SarahRam thanks for the review, I'm happy you liked the chapter. And I didn't send a pm out. 😛 I don't have a PM list for this story, because it's too much of a hassle. 😆

Anyways, I'm off now. Hopefully I'll check in tonight! Bye guys!

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Kesha_H.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

hpe sumthin lyk this happens in the real show😊 anyway I liked hw he was takin in the scent if her strawberry scented hair hehehe😃

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Basilisk

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Posted: 13 years ago

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WOW!! Mindblowing update dear! Very nice...lol Yash tried to maintain that he doesn't care but in the end he couldn't stop himself from marching to aarti and taking her away from that guy and dancing with her himself! Wow they were so close to their first kiss but ugh! Yash had to back out at the last moment! Poor Aarti...she must have felt so bad 😭

Enjoy your vacation dear! I'll wait for your update :)

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Saffi Sanam

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Posted: 13 years ago

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16021983 thank you so much! Yeah I felt like he had to be attracted to something in particuar, so I was like why not the smell of her hair? 😆
TheDarkKnight thanks! Yeah Yash tries to tell himself he doesn't care and also makes an attempt to convince himself that he should not. But we'll see how that ends up failing in the future! 😛
jojo1986 thank you!

Anyways, I'm off until Sunday night or Monday! Bye guys! Hopefully I'll be able to read more reviews by then!

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Saffi Sanam

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

They almost went to a pub in today's episode! 😆 But I have an idea for the next chapter of this fanfiction. Think drunk Yash! 😳

Edited by ilovepyaar - 13 years ago

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Saffi Sanam

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Since the Mumbai trip is over, there is no use in continuing this 😔

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Kesha_H.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: ilovepyaar
Since the Mumbai trip is over, there is no use in continuing this 😔

No dudette don't say tht u can still use ur imaginations I'm sure there are many things tht u wanted to happen in the mumbai trip and u can put all those wild ideas and imagination here that's the beauty of stories u can make it however u want... so plz continue😭

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Saffi Sanam

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: swaggerchick16

No dudette don't say tht u can still use ur imaginations I'm sure there are many things tht u wanted to happen in the mumbai trip and u can put all those wild ideas and imagination here that's the beauty of stories u can make it however u want... so plz continue😭

Thank you so much for the sweet comment! If I get the inspiration, then I'll definitely continue! 😳

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Kesha_H.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: ilovepyaar

Thank you so much for the sweet comment! If I get the inspiration, then I'll definitely continue! 😳

Ya no probs but really hpe u continue soon and there so many things tht cud've happened lemme giv u a few examples:

my fav: she was dancing in the rain and he was staring at her

they went to beach he chased because she pulled a really naughty prank on him and they fell in the water and got totally drenched

o and I saw on the DC thread tht u all are totally obsessed with them consummating so u can hav a consumating scene...😛
so many ideas so don't giv up hpe😊

Edited by swaggerchick16 - 13 years ago

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