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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Hey! I have seen 2-3 episodes of that show. It's nice plot, continue soon.


THANKS ALOT DEAR!! 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shrutheAjay

That was quite a start...


Interesting concept... continue soon


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -dia-

nice ...thnx for PM


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Posted: 13 years ago
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~ Main Teri Parchhain Hu ~


( a million Thanks to Misty for such lovely and perfect banner. THANKS A LOT MISTY!!)

PART 1

Morning in Scindiya House

Everybody was present at Breakfast Table. Arti brought a kheer made by her hand. Gave it to everybody. Elder's gave her money as a blessing.

Yash was watching her every move. How she is behaving like a good Daughter-in-law, a good wife and a good mother by trying to feed his kids' who were not listening to her.

After the breakfast all men moved to leave for office n women to kitchen to discuss about today's moh-dikayi function. But arti said to her MIL that she'll be back and she went to kids room and tried talking to them n get them ready for school.

Yash followed thinking will talk to her about the motives for this marriage. When he was about to enter the kids' room, what he witnessed was heart-breaking for him and arti.

Arti entered the kids room all energetically and said, "Hi kids, what are u guys doing? letz get ready for school!" "Why are you here?" said ansh. "go out from our room!"-payal and "like u came to our house for forever u will take our room too, so don't ever come to over room." "GET OUT!!" said payal screming.

Arti was shocked to the kids reaction. she was so used to kids loving nature for her when u used to teach them but now. she was shattered but she couldn't breake down. she had aim for this marriage and she had to fulfill it. she couldn't break down.

Arti wiped her tear and calmly said, "nahi bachoo.. I won't take away ur room. I promise. chalo letz get ready for school chalo chalo or u will get late"

but kids were adamant, they were hurting arti by not letting even letting her touch them. Palak said "ur a step-mom, ur doing this so that you can take our home and take away our papa."

Arti controlled her tears and calmly answered them, "nahi baccha I am you mother I will not hurt u. how can I hurt u guys. u know na ur teacher didi. I liked her a lot na!"

"NAHI.. ur bad.. go away from our room. Leave me and my sisters alone.. our chachi will take care of us." said ansh.

Arti had tears in her eyes but she quickly wiped them and still tried to help them out. But kids' were just out of her hand. Yash noticed this and shouted at kids for troubling her.

Arti was shocked to see him there. Yash was about to scold them but Arti stoped him and said. "please, don't so this.. they are kids. They will understand later that I am their mother and I am not bad"

And turned to kids' and said, "bacchoo' okay so u don't want then I will leave but if u need anything,,, call me okay? I have ironed ur school clothes and will get ready ur milk and lunch box. Come quickly okay?" And she smiled at Yash and left from there.

Yash was still in thinking mode but when palak tagged his pant his attention diverted to kids.

Little palak asked, "papa, see that lady is so mean. Ur scolding us for her. bua dadi was right. She is very bad."

Yash was shocked to hear that his bua was teaching little kids all this.

Yash softly took palak in his arm and sat on bed with kids on his lap. And ansh beside him and said, "bachho' u love your papa na?"

Innocent kids nodded YES

Yash continued " then listen to what papa says' artiji is your new mama.. and she good.. don't do what u did today. She is very nice. So don't be mean to her.

Little innocent kids' immediately agreed to their papa and promised him to be nice to their mother.

Arti stood at the door listening to their conversation and felt thankful to Yash for helping her out. And deciated to thank him later and came inside with milk for kids.

Kids's silently drank the milk and Arti offered to make their hair and girl's agreed remembering their promise to their father.

Later kids' left for school. And Arati to kitchen. She was getting to know her sister-in-law, Vidhi, just then her mother-in-law, Gaytri, Popped in to order her to go to her room to help out her husband.

Arti left for her room and saw yash just in towel picking up his dress for the day. He seemed confused. Arti said from behind, wear the black one. Started yash turned back to see arti their and immediately at himself and rushed to wash room with whatever came in his hand.

Then arti realized what she had done to make him embarrass. She started to tidy their bed and pick up her bag to put her clothes in closet. But to her surprise everything was full. She said to herself, "yaha to mere kapado ke liye jagah hi nahi hai (saw Arpita's beloging's there) aur nahi iss ghar me" but to unknown to herself she said it out loud and yash heard it, " App ye baat janati thi to fir kyu ki apne ye shadi?"


okies!! here is the Part 1... i hope u all will like it... please press LIKE button critics and comments are alwats welcome!! 😛



PREVIOUS: Prologue NEXT: PART 2

Edited by nilu710 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
I love it so far! Intresting plot that Yash is the father to all the children and Aarti is a young girl, but she is already ready to be a mother to Ansh, Payal, and Palak. I can't wait for yor next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: *Maleena*

I love it so far! Intresting plot that Yash is the father to all the children and Aarti is a young girl, but she is already ready to be a mother to Ansh, Payal, and Palak. I can't wait for yor next update.


THANK U DEAR..
I'LL B UPDATING DAILY SO C/O MY THREAD EVERY DAY!! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Man you got such a talent of writing and you read my work?😆

I have been meaning to get myself to watch PV but don't really get the time...but I will defnitley start soon.

Thanks for the pm look forward to read more..it sounds really interestiing.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Mahi-Maan

Man you got such a talent of writing and you read my work?😆

I have been meaning to get myself to watch PV but don't really get the time...but I will defnitley start soon.

Thanks for the pm look forward to read more..it sounds really interestiing.


omg.. i am honored !!! U R pleased w/ my work!!?! i am flattered...
my writing is nothing front of ur writing dear!! n thatz a fact.. m just learning from great writers like U!! 😃

Thanks alot!! 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39

Thank u dear !! 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
love it already! PM me when u update! 😃

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