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Posted: 13 years ago
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it is a very nice update!!
do continue !!!😊
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Awesome Update
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She enter into the room to find her husband on deep thoughts…………………………………………….

Suniyee………………………………aap yehi sochrahe ho naa………………………….

The person turned and look a t his wife

He will do everything for his family happiness

He accepted arthi as daughter when his son divorced her

He know her daughter and wife gone lot of humiliation after the incident

He shifted……………….his work

He works for a power supplied …………………………….machinery…………..

He know few contacts here……………………………….

But he knows his wife decision

Even he also wants arrthi to be settled

.and his grandson happiness but how far……………………………

Next day morning……………………………………………

Everyday…………………………..he open his eyes to find his wife with tea

Where his daughter running around with ansh making him to wear tie………………………………………

After hurry and burry she drop him to the school ………….

And she forgot………………………………..that she promised his son to buy a gift as………………………….he stood first in class…………………………………………….

Then she came out and found there is a probl in the sandal…………………………

Shesit in the bench to check………………..the sandal

She saw a cute girl of small age is sitting down and look like crying……………………..

She went near her and look at her

The girl turned her head and said………………………………………..

Where arrthi asked darling why are u crying

Darling;

Yes ur ……………………………

The cute little girl like u always darling na.

But papa told m e to not to speak to strangers………………………

Ok I had a solution for ur problem…….

What.

Friends.

Hai imarrthi……………………………………

The girl hesitated but replied im payal……………………………..

Hai payal………………Why are u crying.

Payal:I don't want to go to home.:Im angry

Arrthi:Why.

Payal:Papa promised me to take out me and palak.but he didn't

Arthi:Oh then what about mama

Payal:My mama is no more

Arrthi felt sad quickly composed……………………………………………….

Agar yesi baat hay then why don't u ask papa he mustbe worrying now not finding out………ur a good girl and u cannot make ur papa worried won't u

And even phalak also worried na

At that time she saw a nother girl a looklike ofher came and called her

And they both ……………………….looked at arrthi

Arrthi offered them chocolates and they smiled……..

Where arrthi ruffled phalaks hair and they smiled

And left to othe rplace

Arrthi smiled

Precap

Arrthi convo with yash……on phone…………………….

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow nice update !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome Update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Niccchhhee...:-Pi mean its nice.loved it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update!!
plz do send me pm when u update next time
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Yash is busy in a meeting …

He is in hurry,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Suddenly his car broke out………………………

He is standing there lost in the thoughts.

Suddenly……………………………………………………………

A ball hit his leg

He turned in frustutation to find a 5 old year boy looking at him

His eyes are brown…………a cute looking boy……………….

Hello uncle give me the ball im getting late………………..

He passed the ball

And he muttered thanks

What happened to the car…..

Yash looked at the boy and said.broke down

The boy asked and what are u waiting for

For mechanic yash replied

The boy again said there is no mechanic shop right overhere

Why can't u call cab……………….so that it could be helpful

Yash looked at the boy indeed he is smart .but still want to test………………………….

Then what about the car.

The boy replied uffo by patting his head buddo do one thing call one of ur assistantfor mechanic…….and made himt be with the car

In the mean time u finish ur work…………………..

He surprised………………….adn the boy said ur welcome

Oh sorry im yash

Im ansh………………………………………

Bye.

He turned to find…………………………………….a lady on her scooty and the boy hugged her and she drive along with him…………………….

He smiled after long time………………..

Then he called his assistant,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Next day again on the shopping mall.where………………..the girls with one olderly lady.standing over there………………………………

The girls are confusing.

Again……….ansh camein and said

U skin color is white so u can wear maroon it suits u.

And u try on green…………………………………….

But we are twins.the second girl popped in

Then the boy said

Uffo……………….yeh wali top maroon hay aur tum uspe green ka kutha lena

Aur tum uska reversal.then uboth look alike na.

He said

Then suddenly arrthi called ansh.what about maroonshirt ansh it looks better on u……………….

Yaa mama………………………………….

He run away

Arthi came and said hai to palak and payal.she also introduced to ansh.

And they smiled……………………………………..

She also selected some accessories for them

In meantime she got a call……………

What how can he do that……………………..listen sharma ji first give me the number no one can ddare to mess with us and our money.

He called someone

Hello the voice

Yehkya vbaat huwe hab apne humse material liya toh saari conditions applicable na.then how can u suddenlysaying that our material is fault and u cut of the money

Is there any ethics in business……………………………….

Ur person had himself checked for material then what comes fo reducing money……….u know how much trouble we need to face.

Yash surprised the tone o f a girl

Then he replied ok we are sorry.i think there is a mis-understanding I will make sure u will get the money u needed.

And regarding the material he will contact……………………….our staff

Then he called pratik who is busy with his girlfriend

Prateek what is this u had contacted dubey and said the material is fault and we need to cut the money………………………….now what

Prateek:oh sorry bhai there is a mis –undestanding……………..everythign is fit and the material is also good but im little busy that is why I didn't inform the manager to do it .and it seems to cause trouble to u imsorry bhai please don't say this to papa otherwise he will give another 3 hours of lecture for not being responsible

And for apolizes I will personally go to their house and gives complete apology.please bhai spare forthis mistake.

Its ok prateek

He remembered the girls word

He thought strange things happening with him……………………

Precapo

Prateek meeting his future bhabhi

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A unique bonding

Prateek stood in front of the house

He got a great scolding from his silent yash brother who is moral person..

He need to cancel his date ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,paridi

The hottest girl of the college

He managed to be friend in a span of 3 months and she is so stubborn .but her smile made him to forgot the whole world.

As he himself immensed in the thoughts of his pretty girl friend

He got a hit on his leg

He saw a little boy of 5 yrs…….playing with a ball…………………………….

Hello.come back from the dream world and giveme my ball

He passed the ball

Ansh what are u doing there..u didn't finish ur homework.there

And whom are u talking to…

A lady came out

She is cute wearing a salwar kameez and her dupatta tiedt o the waist as she is working ………………………

She came

And prateek gave her a look and said he is from scindia…………………………………..

Then arrthi.face turned to anger

So ur the person who created this mess…..what are u think urself……………………………….

U urself checked for the material and finailise the deal……….

Now u are trying to cheat on us by making finanicial loss to my babuji

What u think

She is in anger………………….

Prateek ………………………..trying to explain

Don't talk in between when my mama..is talking

He looked at the boy who is looking in anger……………………………..

He resemble the chota gunda and also the lady…………………….

At the same time the middle aged person came in.

And said arrthibeta who is there.and he saw.

Beta……………..u go and get some tea and refreshments ,,,,,,,,,,,meantime I will talk to them

He needto c alm his daughter…………………..

And she gavea angry glare………………and turned to the room………………………..

Later on prateek apolised the mistake and he backed off.

Then turned to find the lady is playing football with his son they both are playing

He felt amused th e girl dared to.theaten him,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Something interesting

The same girl m ake his silent yet stubborn brother,,,,,,,,,to say sorry and sending him to the place ……….

He is very serious.

And inturn to a very cool mother playing football with herson……………………

He smiled and thought there is something…………………………………..

He took the leave and feared that the mother and son duo may attack him…………..if he isthere.

He left the place with a smile on his face…………….of planning something……………

Next day………………………………………………….

Arrthi in her room feeling sad.

She turned to ansh……………

FB:today ansh is very much excited as it is sports day

And she cannot able to run along with his son and they b oth lost

And annsh asked about the father………………

She cannot answer that ………………

She also read the letter from ansh that he needs father……….how can she bring that thing……….

She felt failed

And slowly she…..left the place…………..and enter the place where her silence andher heart will be at peace……………………….

Not knowing that she had a companion thistime

Yash ……………………………………came to the place……………………………………..

The questions…………………………….

He sat down at the mandir steps……………..and engrossed indeep thoughts

The other side arrthi………..

the temple preist came and asked arrthi to leave

as she about to leave

are…….manndir ke time hogayaa hay.aur yeh admi yeh se hillatha nahii………………………………………………

she looked at the direction she saw a person………………………………at the dark…………………………………..

she cannot see the person ……..as his face is in dark,,,,,,

rukhiyee mein dekhtee hoo

with that he neared the person

she touched the shoulder………………………………..she felt that her hand is burned

are innee toh bukaar hay

it is start raining suddenly.

She quickly looked at other sonly her and a mandir pandit is there.

The mandir pandit asked inee toh teez bukaarhay

Kya kareen……………………….

She checked for mobile in his pocket she felt awkward to put hand on his pocket.

The mandir person helped and dialed the number……………………….

An lady picked up.

Hello………….

Hello .dekhiyee mein yeha shiv mandir se baat karrahe yeh mobile jinka hay who yeha behoosh pada hay aur unee teez bukarr hay………………………………

The other lady shocked thank u jee..thank u very much yeh hamara devarji ka mobile hay.

With that she took driver;

And with few minutes……………………………………………

Arrthi looked at the watch..and she saw the car and quickly lef the place

The pankaj came downa dn hold yash and vidhi……………….asked the person who is phoned

Who ladki yehase chale gayee hay

She tha nked to the girl…………………………………………mentally

And the car drove off……………………………..

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